Wikipedia:Requests for feedback/2010 November 23

User:GRMcMaster/Gail_Sidonie_Sobat
Rowat 00:54, 23 November 2010 (UTC)

Chica Peeps is an 'unconventional' movement encouraging women to explore and recognize the importance and value of female friendships.

In the English language, there is no word that describes a group of female friends. The name Chica Peeps fills that void and has become the household expression for groups of women that support and nurture each other. You've seen them walking together, or in the local coffee shop. You've heard their shrieks of laughter, raucously celebrating an event in a restaurant. Women who belonged to Amish quilting circles of the 1800's and Carrie, Miranda, Charlotte and Samantha of "Sex and the City" fame all share Chica Peep bonds.

An upcoming published anthology of short stories, Who Are Your Chica Peeps?, offers women the opportunity to, in their own voice, share the bonds they have formed with groups of friends who nourish, guide and anchor them, often through humor. Female friends shape who we are and who we are yet to be. Our relationships with men and family are not enough. Sometimes it takes a crisis to make us realize that friends are the best medication. At every stage of life, close female friends support each other. It's the nature of women to gather and sit in a circle; we've done it since the beginning of time...

Creator and Founder - Velya Jancz-Urban

Velya Jancz-Urban has morphed through several career changes from high school English and History teacher, stay-at-home mom, elementary Enrichment/Gifted teacher, and most recently, hoodwinked and betrayed Brazilian dairy farm owner. The Chica Peep movement ignited within her after she was "put back together again" with the help of a group of female teacher friends. Velya believes, "If I have Chica Peeps, then so do other women. It's time for them to be able share their stories in a published anthology of short stories titled Who Are YOUR Chica Peeps?"

http://bgtnew.bgtpartners.com/wikipedia/bgt-wikipedia.html
This article is about a web development and interactive marketing firm in Aventura, FL.

Please provide feedback on this article. Thank you.

Burnglobaldev (talk) 04:45, 23 November 2010 (UTC)
 * Your article doesn't seem to be on Wikipedia itself. I recommend that you move it over onto here so it can be searched for and viewed more easily. Your article doesn't seem to be using the correct Wiki formatting; such as inline citations to display the references, so I think you need to perhaps take a look at the article again. Finally, be careful with the article's point of view and tone, because it's very easy to make articles like yours, about companies, sound like advertisements. Chevy  monte  carlo  06:47, 23 November 2010 (UTC)

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Joshasence/COCCXSESZ
Joshasence (talk) 05:36, 23 November 2010 (UTC)
 * The references need some work - the actual inline citations need to go next to the statement that it verifies, if that makes sense, rather than all in the references section. Chevy  monte  carlo  06:51, 23 November 2010 (UTC)

Cazare_Pensiunui_Predeal
Mirela2010 (talk) 10:45, 23 November 2010 (UTC)

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Harrisproductions/Keith_Harris_%28The_Black_Eyed_Peas%29
Hello, I have a problem with putting my Reliable Sources to my article... (you can see it below in my article)... please,can you help me? Thank you

Harrisproductions (talk) 10:57, 23 November 2010 (UTC)
 * With 'reliable sources' (or references as they are more commonly known) it's best to use inline citations to help display them in your article. If you don't mind, I'll make a few improvements for you, as it's easier to do it myself than try and explain it..hope you understand. I do think the article does sound a bit like an advertisement for this person, so please try and make some improvements if you can in that respect - contact me via my talk page if you need any help with that. Also, I do think perhaps all the little sections for the artists could just be merged into one or two paragraphs of regular sentences. Chevy  monte  carlo  21:10, 26 November 2010 (UTC)

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Indian_Stammering_Association
Hi, I have created redirect for http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_Indian_Stammering_Association. Kindly review it.

Jaiprakashsunda (talk) 11:17, 23 November 2010 (UTC)

User:15jed20/Christopher Stoakes
Surely his books are the 'reliable resources' that I can use to verify this article!? Also, some of his biography information has come from the inside cover of his books - would seem confusing to reference to these books within the article.

15jed20 (talk) 12:36, 23 November 2010 (UTC)

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/New_York_University_Archives
I believe the existence of a "Fales Library" Wikipedia page merits a page for the NYU archives, another branch of the NYU libraries system.

Asl352 (talk) 13:19, 23 November 2010 (UTC)

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Nanded_Earthquakes
This is an article about earthquakes which are happening regularly in the town Nanded of India.

Anuragpatil (talk) 16:13, 23 November 2010 (UTC)

New Ritual Article
I have been carrying out an extensive research project on ritual for the last fifteen weeks and was very disappointed, initially, by the existing entry for ritual. I therefore undertook the task of rebuilding it, keeping as much content as possible and adding more as necessary without including my own hypothesis.

This is my first wiki article and would like some feedback before making it live. I would be very grateful for any criticism.

Erniefernandez (talk) 16:27, 23 November 2010 (UTC)

PUT TITLE HERE within e.g. http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Beth_Raymer
What can i do to make this article better? Why is it posted but saying it's not yet an artiucle?

Maccab (talk) 16:43, 23 November 2010 (UTC)

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Revenue_management
Previously, Revenue Management re-routed to Yield Management. These are two different disciplines, however, with the latter being under the wider scope of the former. Revenue Management encompasses the wider practice of using analytics to collect data, forecast, and optimize price, inventory levels, etc. With respect to inventory, Revenue Management applies to all types, whether perishable or non-perishable. Yield Management, however, is a branch of Revenue Management that focuses particularly on optimizing non-perishable inventory, particularly in the hospitality or air travel industries.

Thank you.

Parrottdog (talk) 16:59, 23 November 2010 (UTC)

User:jojaszcz/TravisPeterson About international basketball player Travis Peterson. Need help making sure everything is in right format and is sufficient for wiki to accept.
Need help making sure everything is in right format and is sufficient for wiki to accept.

Jojaszcz (talk) 17:23, 23 November 2010 (UTC)

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Steven_Oberman
This is my first attempt at a wikipedia article. He is the most notable person I could think of that did not already have a page. Please offer suggestions.

Alex J Winston (talk) 18:30, 23 November 2010 (UTC)

Randall Atcheson
This is a new article and I would like some feedback on this entry.

Steventhomas42 (talk) 19:17, 23 November 2010 (UTC)
 * Nice job so far, but I do think perhaps the opening paragraph might need to be expanded, but really that's only a very minor issue. Other than that I think the article is fine. Chevy  monte  carlo  21:05, 26 November 2010 (UTC)

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Capital_Program_and_Project_Management_Software
I would greatly appreciate your feedback on the article referenced above, to make sure it meets the guidelines and provides enough information to provide someone searching for information on this topic with a good primer. There is no other information related to this submission anywhere on Wikipedia - I've already searched the topic, so I feel this provides a good starting point that could be further expanded. However, if you feel the article length is long enought then it can stay that way as well.

Thank you

Johnmarcum (talk) 23:45, 23 November 2010 (UTC)

http://bgtnew.bgtpartners.com/wikipedia/bgt-wikipedia.html
Please provide feedback on both content and format. Thanks!

http://bgtnew.bgtpartners.com/wikipedia/bgt-wikipedia.html

Burnglobaldev (talk) 20:28, 5 January 2011 (UTC)