Wikipedia:Requests for feedback/2010 October 29

Van Peteghem Lauriot-Prévost (VPLP Naval Architects
This is my first post. I am unaware how to treat the results which were complied from personal research and received on request from VPLP. question is how much linking and cross referencing is required to not be overlinked. I also have some photos to place but would wait to hear comments before attempting to upload.

Chaguaramas (talk) 04:50, 29 October 2010 (UTC)

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/UK_India_Business_Council
I have created the this article. I noticed the previous article had been deleted before I was going to add to it - it was more of a business profile previously. I have tried to create the beginnings of an article because I have needed to search for this subject myself, but it is my first creation so any feedback would be greatly appreciated!

Lewisjamesbrown (talk) 11:11, 29 October 2010 (UTC)

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Tarlair_Swimming_Pool
Emptycell (talk) 13:46, 29 October 2010 (UTC)
 * The article is a good start but I think you just need a few more references if you can to verify a few of the statements. Chevy  monte  carlo  09:58, 31 October 2010 (UTC)

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Microbeads
Any comments or edits are welcome!

Kunnskap (talk) 14:10, 29 October 2010 (UTC)
 * I've made a few improvements, although you really need some references to verify your statements in the article, as at the moment there isn't really any reliable references there. I also think you need to add more links to other, related Wikipedia articles if you can. Chevy  monte  carlo  10:01, 31 October 2010 (UTC)

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Lac.ideas/Domestic_Liability_Dollarization
REF: Second request for feedback

Dear Colleagues: This is the first time we are posting an article on Wikipedia, and we would like to request your feedback to ensure that the article meets Wikipedia standards for links and references. We would additionally like to receive any comments that could otherwise improve the content and quality of the article. Best regards, Andrés Gómez-Peña and John Dunn Smith

As requested see a brief summary of the concept (article). The article refers to an economic concept known as Domestic Liability Dollarization (DLD). DLD refers to the denomination of banking system deposits and lending in a currency other than that of the country in which they are held. Researchers have attributed a variety of both positive and negative effects to DLD. The benefits are largely found at the household and firm levels in the short to medium term. These benefits include insurance against inflation and currency devaluation, as well as permitting long-term lending and borrowing through the use of a relatively stable currency. In contrast, the real or potential costs of DLD exist largely at the systemic level and over the long term. When DLD is widespread, economic actors are often required to experience a currency mismatch between domestically denominated income and dollar-denominated liabilities, which represent the only available means of long-term borrowing. Currency mismatches are a particular danger for firms and sectors in non-tradable goods and services. Countries with high levels of DLD, moreover, are often afflicted as well with “Original Sin,” a country’s inability to borrow in its own currency. While the resulting vulnerability may not be apparent in normal times, it can be revealed during turbulent times, even in the absence of a major crisis.

LAC ideas 15:33, 29 October 2010 (UTC)

oddballevents
ive been trying to get my page online but it keeps getting deleted could anyone help tell me what im doing wrong thanks johnnie oddball (talk) 19:36, 29 October 2010 (UTC)


 * The question is does oddball events meet notability requirements? You would have to review the criteria for notability and you should also consider if it meets the description of what wikipedia is. It is not uncommon to have an article taken down. The editors will take it down unless it meets the criteria.  Lack of references and lack of notability make it an article unlikely to withstand review.  Best of luck with it! — Gunbirddriver talk

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Claude_Hay
This is an entry for the artist Claude Hay. I have cited several reviews for his album Deep Fried Satisfied, and could provide even more if necessary.

Xcorley (talk) 19:57, 29 October 2010 (UTC)
 * I can't see any immediate problems with the article; nice job! Chevy  monte  carlo  09:40, 31 October 2010 (UTC)

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Mikemiga/Bible_Lessons_International
New article on non-profit organization Bible Lessons International, based in Marshall, Texas

Mikemiga (talk) 20:02, 29 October 2010 (UTC)