Wikipedia:Requests for feedback/2010 September 1

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Kristigaylord/Pharos_Systems
I've made several revisions based on your valuable feedback, and I'm looking for any further feedback I should implement before submitting my final article. Thanks in advance!

Kristigaylord (talk) 01:28, 1 September 2010 (UTC)

http://www.angelfire.com/wi/Carver/norfield.html
Joegbrown (talk) 01:33, 1 September 2010 (UTC)

User:Joegbrown/Norfield, Mississippi
Joegbrown (talk) 01:42, 1 September 2010 (UTC)

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Highland_Park,_Chattanooga_%28neighborhood%29
Is my article good?

Luminus9 (talk) 03:02, 1 September 2010 (UTC)

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Runako_Charles
Hi, I'd be very grateful if I could receive some feedback about this article. Thank you.

Tjcharles (talk) 04:51, 1 September 2010 (UTC)

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Jaad_hast/Australian_Fitness_%26_Health_Expo
I'm on the hunt to find more sources; but I want to make sure the language isn't biased and relevant. Thanks!

Jaad hast (talk) 05:35, 1 September 2010 (UTC)

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Zackariah_Hajjaj_(Zach_Hajjaj)
Hey, i need advice on how to make sure this page is fully cited and credible. Aslo, i want to make sure this article is properly approved.

Pudtech (talk) 08:37, 1 September 2010 (UTC)

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Sudeep88/Staeta_(Soy_Milk)
This ia an article about a brand of Soy Milk sold in India. The article has been rewritten to fit to WIkipedia guidelines and standards. I would like feedback on the quality of the article and what should be my next steps. Sudeep88 (talk) 09:18, 1 September 2010 (UTC)

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Orthomolecular_Medicine_for_India
Hello Kindly Review this article & let me have your comments/suggestions to improve content. Thank you.

Drvaman JN (talk) 09:21, 1 September 2010 (UTC)

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Could anybody please give me feedback on this page? Many Thanks

Junction15 (talk) 10:24, 1 September 2010 (UTC)

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Information_Technology_Infrastructure
IT infrastructure is becoming a critical component of a modern economy. A common understanding of what this is will facilitate discussion and help to influence its development. The absence of an entry in Wikipedia until this indicates a gap in the common perception of the underpinnings the knowledge economy. A gap that is increasingly being filled by cloud computing. This is unfortunate as the cloud, while part of the infrastructure, requires many other elements to operate. Clarifying these for the general public, and policy makers at all levels of government is essential if we are to provide adequate infrastructure for the knowledge economy.

68.151.112.221 (talk) 15:14, 1 September 2010 (UTC)

User:Nexxia/Now, Now Every Children
I drafted this page for the band Now, Now Every Children, and I believe at this point it has enough reliable sources to be deemed notable, but I'm looking for more opinions here/feedback to help me get it right. Thanks in advance everyone.

Nexxia (talk) 15:47, 1 September 2010 (UTC)

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:HKMiller/CounterPath_Corporation
Looking for some feedback on my first article. Any help, tips, tricks or edits would be appreciated.

Thanks!

HKMiller (talk) 17:54, 1 September 2010 (UTC)

Genevieve Thauvette
MrZebraThe13th (talk) 18:16, 1 September 2010 (UTC)

http://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Beyond_the_Clouds-_Two_Minute_Tales_for_Women_on_the_Go&oldid=382316030
Hi, I'd like someone to approve this article, please. I would really appreciate it! Thanks!

Bogeybekk (talk) 18:16, 1 September 2010 (UTC)

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Mshannon1/Dr._George_A._Freedman_(dentist)
Would appreciate any feedback offered. Thank you.

Mshannon1 (talk) 19:54, 1 September 2010 (UTC)

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/AlloMap_Molecular_Expression_Testing
I recently had this article deleted and was informed by editor Fastily that the best way to get feedback on what needs to be changed in order to get my article approved is to do a WP:RFF.

If you could please help me out and provide me with specific modifications I would greatly appreciate it.

Warm Regards, Zomy Hernandez

Adinahernandez (talk) 21:16, 1 September 2010 (UTC)

PMC-Sierra
I recently removed an editor's work on this page as too spammy. He's put a message on my talk page asking that I don't blanket revert, which is a reasonable request. The edits since then have the page looking like this:. As I'm kind of bad at writing prose in situations like this, can I have someone look at it and make proper fixes to avoid the company lingo that seems to exist in the article and anything that sounds too advertisement-like.

Magog the Ogre (talk) 22:03, 1 September 2010 (UTC)

Destenee
Hey, just need some general feedback and/or edits, please. Thank you in advance.

Pyrostinger (talk) 00:30, 2 September 2010 (UTC)