Wikipedia:Requests for feedback/2011 August 12

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Jessparallel (talk) 01:12, 12 August 2011 (UTC)

Kinnui
Ross 12:58, 12 August 2011 (UTC)

Jamie Comstock
I'm seeking review/feedback on a new article in order to remove the "New Page" tag. The article is on a living person; I believe that the page is properly sourced and styled. Thanks.

Jmugge (talk) 14:32, 12 August 2011 (UTC)
 * In the guideline for Notability it talks about how to meet the guideline:

If a topic has received significant coverage in reliable sources that are independent of the subject, it is presumed to satisfy the inclusion criteria for a stand-alone article or stand-alone list.
 * You have included four references, but all are connected to Butler, so none qualify as "independent of the subject". Can you find some reliable sources that are independent?-- SPhilbrick  T  00:15, 14 August 2011 (UTC)

Thanks very much for the guidance. I've added several independent references. Would appreciate your follow-up review and action. Thanks again. Jmugge (talk) 20:24, 23 August 2011 (UTC)

Abdulla Galadari
Since this is a new article, I would kindly request for someone to review for a quick feedback.

Thanks a lot.

TheStupidClown (talk) 18:01, 12 August 2011 (UTC)
 * I see the article is up for AfD, so you probably need to address those issues first. I will note that you've done a nice job of attempting to create references, but you are not following standard format, for example usage of both single and double quotes in odd ways, and enclosing links in parentheses. You might check out Referencing for beginners or WP:CITE--  SPhilbrick  T  00:31, 14 August 2011 (UTC)

User:Johnpseudonym inchicago/World Class Punk
Any thoughts on how to improve this/get this up for real? First timer. Thanks.

Johnpseudonym inchicago (talk) 00:02, 13 August 2011 (UTC)

Thanks for contributing, I have some comments:
 * The article currently has a copyright violation tag on it, I don't know what the situation is with that, and I don't see any copyvio text on it now, but if there is anything you copied directly from the sources, that will have to be removed before the article is moved into article space. I have asked the person who raised the copyright issue to clarify it here or on your talk page.
 * The article needs more references to third-party reliable sources to meet our notability guidelines. Have reliable punk magazines reviewed, discussed the album, if so, you can add them as references.
 * The article has the potential to be quite interesting, but it needs more sourced content than just a brief description and a track listing. If it turns out that is all the information that can be found about it, maybe it's not notable enough to be in an encyclopedia. See WP:NALBUMS for more on notability for albums.

Good luck with it, and if you need any further help, feel free to ask me on my talk page. Quasi human  &#124;  Talk  15:12, 13 August 2011 (UTC)
 * Further comment: The "Liner notes" section will need to be removed or rewritten, it is the copyvio text. Quasi  human  &#124;  Talk  15:34, 13 August 2011 (UTC)

Lucky and Elizabeth/Sonny and Carly
I started these two articles and I've been having some trouble finding background information on the couples, for examples like theme songs, or their popularity with fans or the writing. Can you please help me to improve these two articles.

Nk3play2 my buzz 02:32, 13 August 2011 (UTC)
 * Finding additional background material is not normally the function of this forum (although of course, if anyone wants to, they are more than welcome to.) A questions such as that belongs on the talk page, or at the Wikiproject page. That said, you did manage to find quite a bit of info re Lucky Spencer and Elizabeth Webber, so you are in pretty good shape there.


 * However, I do have to note that, per MOS:QUOTE "...avoid decorative quotation marks in normal use, such as those provided by the cquote template, which are reserved for pull quotes)."-- SPhilbrick  T  00:26, 14 August 2011 (UTC)

List of One Piece episodes (season 14)
I created it as a spinoff article of List of One Piece episodes (season 13). I would like to have someone do a quick feedback, please. Any feedback or advice on the article improvements would be greatly appreciated.

Darth Sjones23 (talk - contributions) 02:41, 13 August 2011 (UTC)