Wikipedia:Requests for feedback/2011 August 28

WikiProject Contract bridge/Assessment
Hi. I have emulated the quality and importance assessment features from WikiProject Chess and applied them to WikiProject Contract bridge/Assessment. The project should become part of the overall Wiki assessment schemes for class and importance and the project banner WPCB will have to be amended accordingly - see my sandbox for preliminary work on this. Further fine tuning may be required on the assessment page but I would like feedback before doing so. Please remove the tag if it is a sufficient start. Thanks.

Newwhist (talk) 02:01, 28 August 2011 (UTC)

User:Movieboffin/Maia_Newley
Just wanting someone to look over my draft page please. Can't entirely understand why there isn't already a page. I'm endeavoring to improve on the citations and sources.

Movieboffin (talk) 10:15, 28 August 2011 (UTC)


 * Sorry, I'm failing to see where you establish notability - being the daughter of an actor, or god-daughter of a famous singer isn't notable - what are her achievements and merits? I'm afraid, if this was an article, it would be looking at probable deletion due to lack of notable information - but as it's a draft, you have the opportunity to work on it further - it needs a serious boost of reliable content, though. I recommend you read WP:BLP and WP:NOTABILITY.  Ma &reg;&copy; usBr iti sh [talk] 12:31, 28 August 2011 (UTC)

EDWIN OTERO RIVERA A PHILANTROPIST, LOCAL PROFESSIONAL AND PHOTO JOURNALIST FROM SAN JUAN PUERTO RICO
I need to get feedback how to post my article and optimize it. EDWIN OTERO RIVERA A PHILANTROPIST, LOCAL PROFESSIONAL AND PHOTO JOURNALIST FROM SAN JUAN PUERTO RICO

Jay Ortega (talk) 10:21, 28 August 2011 (UTC)
 * It looks like your article is trying to advocate for a particular cause or point of view. That's not appropriate on Wikipedia.  See WP:NPOV and WP:SOAP. NawlinWiki (talk) 11:01, 28 August 2011 (UTC)

Article has been speedy deleted - nominee banned indefinitely.

Easy_Chirp
Requesting review of new article about a third-party web-based Twitter application.

Dennis (talk) 18:45, 28 August 2011 (UTC)