Wikipedia:Requests for feedback/2011 August 8

User:krispin16/VSide
A friend of mine and I re-wrote the page of an online world called vSide, I was wondering if someone could read it (or some of it) and give us some feedback on it. Thanks in advance.

BTW, sorry if I double post. I already posted this yesterday but Cecraig77 seems to have accidentally deleted all of Wikipedia:Requests for feedback/2011 August 7 :( http://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia:Requests_for_feedback/2011_August_7&diff=next&oldid=443571144

Krispin16 (talk) 04:36, 8 August 2011 (UTC)

User:Karrattul/Kul_Ratna_Tuladhar
This article is about Nepal's pioneer engineer who helped to build the country's first highway and to establish engineering education. Would be grateful for any feedback. Thanks in advance.

Karrattul (talk) 10:40, 8 August 2011 (UTC)

The article is interesting, and I don't have any major criticisms. I would like to read more about this person, and I think it would benefit the article if you expanded on, for example, his impact on engineering education in Nepal. Quasi human  &#124;  Talk  10:26, 9 August 2011 (UTC)


 * Thanks for your review. Will do that. Karrattul (talk) 08:19, 10 August 2011 (UTC)

Fantasy (Regine Velasquez album)
The article is about the album of Regine Velasquez called Fantasy. I would like to kindly ask for someone to get some feedback for this article. Thank you in advance.

Rovheel (talk) 10:54, 8 August 2011 (UTC)

Marketing activation
This is my first new article. Any help in improving it is appreciated. Thank you!

Brainbeat (talk) 13:41, 8 August 2011 (UTC)

Joel Eric Suben Can someone please review this article?
My article has been appearing with the warning that it is new and has not yet been reviewed for weeks; this is my second request for feedback. I would welcome any comments or edits. I know that inadequate sourcing is a common problem, but I think that this one is pretty much fully sourced. If the article is acceptable as is, please give the okay to remove the warning. Thank you! Likemarigold (talk) 13:55, 8 August 2011 (UTC)
 * ✅-- SPhilbrick  T  14:02, 8 August 2011 (UTC)

Theft by finding
I have just done a first draft of Theft by finding, a requested article on a common law crime.

Otherthinker (talk) 14:56, 8 August 2011 (UTC)

ARC Energy
Can some please review my article about ARC Energy which came to my attention after it was visited by President Obama and Commerce Secretary Gary Locke.

Chewes (talk) 15:30, 8 August 2011 (UTC)

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/David_Cryer
I need help cleaning up the links in this article. Right now, they are added as references, but should be internal links in the document.

204.15.0.186 (talk) 17:28, 8 August 2011 (UTC)

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Red_Roots
Can Someone give me feedback please for the article and also what does this mean: "if necessary the page should be appropriately tagged for cleanup?" Thanks so much!

Musicloversb17 (talk) 18:02, 8 August 2011 (UTC)

Borje Oscar Rosaen inventor
Titanic1000 (talk) 20:05, 8 August 2011 (UTC)

User:StoneCircleMetal/Stone_Circle_(Band)
Hi there, been writing a band article about the history of Stone Circle. Very new to this so I have tried to find as many reliable sources as possible (magazines mainly). Really appreciate anyones time to have a look and give me some advice over this because I appreciate it must be very annoying what some people write about.

Thanks!

StoneCircleMetal (talk) 20:07, 8 August 2011 (UTC)

Hailey Dunn
Just wondering if this article is detailed enough? I think it is notable enough, but could be wrong! Thanks in advance!

Allycat1208 (talk) 20:14, 8 August 2011 (UTC)

Andrew Abercromby
Requesting feedback to remove "new article" template. The article is mainly based on Abercromby's public domain NASA bio. Only two other articles (NEEMO and Pascal Lee) link to this one, but I have not added the "orphan" template because it is presently recommended only for articles with no incoming links.

Gildir (talk) 20:38, 8 August 2011 (UTC)

ISAFF
I am new as a wiki editor, so feel free to suggest any obvious writing/editing errors. Any useful tips are most welcome. I know of a page link that is not yet supported since I am working on it which is the ISAFF 2009 link.

Sal true (talk) 20:47, 8 August 2011 (UTC)

Music of the Soul (book)
This was my first wikipedia entry of a book that I feel is very important in the history of contemporary Sufism. Just want to make sure I handled procedures properly. Thank you.

Inksleeve (talk) 21:17, 8 August 2011 (UTC)

User:Inksleeve/Obstacle race
Just looking for help to get this new field of racing up and listed on Wikipedia. I'm most familiar with the obstacle racing series www.spartanrace.com, but it is a new and exciting sport that is gaining traction and I feel needs to be listed as a sport.

New to Wikipedia so any help is appreciated!

Inksleeve (talk) 21:23, 8 August 2011 (UTC)

Davies Public Affairs
I would like to move this page so that is it can be viewed by the public. Here is a link to the page: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Gnachtwey/Davies_public_affairs.

Thank you for your help.

Gnachtwey (talk) 23:57, 8 August 2011 (UTC)