Wikipedia:Requests for feedback/2011 August 9

Auburn Community Baseball
Hello all. I believe this new page is properly sourced, etc. Submitting for feedback and review in part to get the "New page ..." tag removed. Thanks for all feedback.

NY-13021 (talk) 05:48, 9 August 2011 (UTC)

Kenneth Ehrlich
looking to have a review of the submission. Ken Ehrlich is the Exec. producer of many shows including the Grammys. He is also noted in several Wiki articles. Thanks

Ren6967 (talk) 06:16, 9 August 2011 (UTC)

Texicon
Is this article complete or does it need something else. Texicon also has a logo but I don't know how to insert it.

Radicalsingularity (talk) 07:49, 9 August 2011 (UTC)

User:LauraDH/The Hague Institute for Global Justice
Does anyone have any tips/suggestions on how to improve this page before I post it online? I have tried to create this page before, but it was deleted, so this time I hope for some feedback for improvements. LauraDH (talk) 08:02, 9 August 2011 (UTC)

User:Sukrafte/Sporting-Sails
The article outlines the recent developments and innovations of the Sporting-Sail - a wind-harnessing/body-sail concept used for skateboarding, skiing, snowboarding, and surfing and how it has found a place and role in the public eye over the last year through news articles and other channels such as Time Magazine, Discovery, University of Southern California, Patagonia, New York Times, LA Times....Any feedback is welcomed. Is there enough reliable sources to make this an article? I am happy to make changed where need be. Thank you for your time and consideration.

Sukrafte (talk) 08:34, 9 August 2011 (UTC)

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Tommovewithus/House_valuation
I'm looking to create a page regarding house valuations, as this is the starting point in 99% of house moves. This article summarises the process, the aspects considered during the valuation, alternatives to house valuations and also house price trends.

Tommovewithus (talk) 10:50, 9 August 2011 (UTC)

hackneyempirenewactoftheyear
Could someone please give me feed back on this page about Roland Muldoon as i would like to publish it on Wikipaedia

TonyGemail (talk) 12:04, 9 August 2011 (UTC)

User:Madabucharest
I have just finished a page on my 'user page' with basic information on the 'British School of Bucharest' intended for various categories where schools have been asked to list their basic information: The BSB is registered as a non profit school run by a board.

Categories: Education in Bucharest | International schools in Romania | High schools in Bucharest

I have read the information provided by other schools such as IBSB, AISB, The British School of Budapest, etc. and the information is in line with what appears on their pages.

Can you tell me if there is anything else I need to do before submitting the article to avoid it being automatically deleted. I have tried to post this information several times but it has been deleted each time and yet the information is exactly the same as that provided by other schools. I'm a bit confused and am not sure what to do.

Thank you for your help

Mada 12:37, 9 August 2011 (UTC)mada

Mada 12:37, 9 August 2011 (UTC)

Sylvia McNeill
I wiould like it to be "reviewed by someone other than its creator" so that the template can be removed. Thanks.

SylviaFan (talk) 13:05, 9 August 2011 (UTC)

Steve Chappell
Requesting feedback to remove "new article" template. Only two other articles (NEEMO and Andrew Abercromby) link to this one, but I have not added the "orphan" template because it is presently recommended only for articles with no incoming links.

Gildir (talk) 13:33, 9 August 2011 (UTC)

http://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=User:Charlotterey/Acne_Paper&action=submit
I have just created this page to the best of my capacity, please would someone give me some feedback before it goes live? Thank you.

Charlotterey (talk) 13:37, 9 August 2011 (UTC)

David_Ben
I have moved an article. How does one submit it for review/acceptance?

Many thanks

Wikicontribute17 (talk) 14:57, 9 August 2011 (UTC)

User:mike28968/5LINX
I know there's something wrong with tis article. I just can't figure it out.

Mike28968 (talk) 15:58, 9 August 2011 (UTC)

user;sonyofjapan/soni nihon
Sonyofjapan (talk) 17:02, 9 August 2011 (UTC)

User:sonyofjapan/soni nihon
is "soni nihon" page ok to be move to the article section? the page is a biography about him just like the others on youtube.

Sonyofjapan (talk) 17:08, 9 August 2011 (UTC)

User:Sonyofjapan/Soni nihon
is "soni nihon" page ok to be move to the article section? the page is a biography about him just like the others on youtube.

Sonyofjapan (talk) 17:14, 9 August 2011 (UTC)

Claes-Göran Granqvist Can you check it and remove the "new article" stamp? Thanks, Rubmum (talk) 17:29, 9 August 2011 (UTC)
Can you check it and remove the "new article" stamp? Link to his CV is provided. Thanks,

Rubmum (talk) 17:29, 9 August 2011 (UTC)

Aveos Fleet Performance
For a few weeks now, this article still has the unreviewed tag at the top of the page. Could someone review and remove the tag? Thank you for your help

168.87.145.194 (talk) 17:32, 9 August 2011 (UTC)

Doodle12345/Sami Gayle
I would appreciate feedback as to how this page looks. In addition, what steps do I need to take to publish this article? When I click on "move", it says that I do not have that privilege, possibly because my account was created today...Thanks!

Doodle12345 (talk) 17:43, 9 August 2011 (UTC)

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:WGES/World_Green_Energy_Symposium

 * 1) I'm not sure how to add a side panel like this article: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Nelson_Horatio_Darton, so that I may include the WGES log and basic info
 * 2) any general edits

WGES (talk) 18:55, 9 August 2011 (UTC)

Exam Mottled
Sir, I have tried my level best to provide the entire and genuine information on Exam Mottled. Apart from varios sources, I have even tried to mention references that relate to the article. Please let me know when will my article be updated ?

Mottledtan (talk) 19:11, 9 August 2011 (UTC)

User:Trevoreagle/Gerhard Calitz
Good Day my name is Trevor

I request that the Gerhard Calitz page must be approved because this poet is of notable nature and has 2 published novels

Trevoreagle 19:37, 9 August 2011 (UTC)

Bristol Bisons RFC
Hi looking for someone to review my page, the last one was deleted so hopefully I have followed all the proper rules and regulations? thanks Guys.

19daird73 (talk) 20:06, 9 August 2011 (UTC)

User:Rosiews/Tamara_Bernier_Evans
This is an article (my first!) about a Canadian musical theatre star named Tamara Bernier Evans.

I think I've covered enough sources, but I want feedback on whether or not a potential "COI" would cause this article to be removed. I have worked with Tamara (theatre is a small world) and we are both members of "Theatre 20", which is referenced in the article.

She will be starring in a new musical in Toronto in 2012, WAR HORSE, at the biggest commercial theatre company in Canada, and she has been on Broadway and Las Vegas, and she has released an original CD. She's definitely notable.

So any feedback on the neutrality or tone would be appreciated, as well as any hints or tips about things to add or remove.

Thanks so much!

Rosiews (talk) 20:07, 9 August 2011 (UTC)

Irene Manning (One Life to Live)/Irene Manning Clayton
Can you please review this new article, I want to know what I can do to improve it. --Nk3play2 my buzz 21:42, 9 August 2011 (UTC)

Nk3play2 my buzz 21:42, 9 August 2011 (UTC)

User:Bonehunter666/Operation Bittersweet
Bonehunter666 (talk) 23:27, 9 August 2011 (UTC)

User:shawmjennings/Colonel Payne Jennings, Jr.
I have prepared a draft copy of my father's biography with references for review. I believe I have cited a number of reliable sources that I am hopeful will justify my father as a notable. I welcome any comments and/or suggestions.

Shawmjennings (talk) 23:46, 9 August 2011 (UTC)