Wikipedia:Requests for feedback/2011 December 1

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Outback_Redemption
Is this is ok?

Lordfetus (talk) 07:40, 1 December 2011 (UTC)

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Outback_Redemption
Is this is ok?

Lordfetus (talk) 07:40, 1 December 2011 (UTC)

User:Sedaray/sandbox
I have done my best on this - I can't get the nice box with the picture to include all the info I put - even the examples I find have more info on the edit page than shows up in the box. So I got rid of everything else but I should put the photo credit there.

I would like to link the film "End of the Art World" to a disambiguation page (I guess I'll need to create it?) as there is a recently-written book of the same name here: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Robert_C._Morgan This is the reason I decided to put this page up in the first place!

I will gradually add wiki links as I find them, I guess. There are probably more.

I'm not sure if I did the category links as they are red. I will try to think of more categories.

Thank you for making this relatively painless - actually it was fun!

Sedaray (talk) 13:40, 1 December 2011 (UTC)

User:Fauzan Zaid/Shadab Restaurant
My article was deleted. How should I improve it?

Fauzan (talk) 16:10, 1 December 2011 (UTC)

User:Nmuster
This is a new article. I would like feedback.

Nmuster (talk) 17:01, 1 December 2011 (UTC)

GLOBWAVE
I am having problems with keeping this page from being deleted. It is a article on a science programme, but keeps getting deleted as advertising. How do I fix it to make it less like advertising.

Thanks

Cfarquhar 220276 (talk) 21:25, 1 December 2011 (UTC)

PoolWerx
Hi there,

I have just uploaded the company PoolWerx to the wikipedia database. I attempted this service 1 week ago when it was only posted on my user space and still no response. If you could get back to me as to the quality of the article and if anything needs to be changed that would be great!

Regards, Shannon.

Shannonob90 (talk) 23:43, 1 December 2011 (UTC)

John O'Brien (PoolWerx)
Hi there,

I have just uploaded the company PoolWerx to the wikipedia database. I attempted this service 1 week ago when it was only posted on my user space and still no response. If you could get back to me as to the quality of the article and if anything needs to be changed that would be great!

Regards, Shannon.

Shannonob90 (talk) 23:44, 1 December 2011 (UTC)