Wikipedia:Requests for feedback/2011 February 21

Customer State Marketing (CSM)
Need comments on "customer state marketing (CSM)" wiki page.

Metrosexuwell (talk) 02:12, 21 February 2011 (UTC)

Valley networks (Mars)
Hi all - could someone run an eye over this? It's new from scratch, and is plugging a hole in the Mars coverage. Should be adequately referenced...?

Thanks pre-emptively!

DanHobley (talk) 03:33, 21 February 2011 (UTC)

The Ladies Auxiliary of the International Union of Mine Mill and Smelter Workers
I believe the structure of this article is appropriate, and the information included is properly substantiated. However, I would like to have some suggestions and comments on this article from experienced Wikipedia editors. Thank you, Andy Q26 (talk) 04:00, 21 February 2011 (UTC)

User:Jghmemphis/Temple of the Sacred Gift
Hello all and thank you for all of your hard work! Can someone look this over and make sure I have it formatted and cited properly? I feel like it's open-ended, neutral and informative, but desire second opinions from the experts.

Jghmemphis (talk) 09:10, 21 February 2011 (UTC)

I've made a few edits on your page for clarity's sake. You'll want to insert reference superscripts into the text - doing so will automatically format your reference section. Would you mind reviewing a page I created? http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Walker_Sands_Communications The template at the top of the page needs to be removed if it's ready for publication. Thanks!

Chicago2011 (talk) 16:12, 21 February 2011 (UTC)

Russell Berrie Nanotechnology Institute (RBNI)
Any feedback welcome - still new to this!

Israelscitech (talk) 10:18, 21 February 2011 (UTC)

User:Ameisenfarm/Ally Condie
Ally Condie is a new aspiring author and I was surprised that I couldn't find anything about her on Wikipedia. Therefore I'd like to create an article. Her first novel "Matched" is the frist one from the "Matched" trilogy and has been translated into various languages already.

Ameisenfarm (talk) 11:40, 21 February 2011 (UTC)

Walker Sands Communciations
This article is completed but needs a final reviewer to give it a once-over and remove the tag at the top of the article. Would you oblige?

Chicago2011 (talk) 15:41, 21 February 2011 (UTC)

User:Cmrds/Family Emergency Shelter Coalition
Can you please give some feedbacks about my article? I have been trying to expand the literature of some laws and knowledge of homelessness in Wikipedia. With the supports, I am willing to contribute informations on this issue. Thanks in advance for your help. Best Regards.

Cmrds (talk) 18:50, 21 February 2011 (UTC)

User:Fisher-speed/Jamming (sport, neuroscience)
Appreciate feedback on whether the current draft of the article meets eligibility requirements. TIA.

Fisher-speed (talk) 21:11, 21 February 2011 (UTC)

Glynn C. Williams
Hi,

Please may you review/approve   http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Glynn_C._Williams

Thank you for your time.

Horizen1 (talk) 21:15, 21 February 2011 (UTC)

User:Hypaethrus/Jan de Leeuw
Hello! Please review http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Hypaethrus/Jan_de_Leeuw

Thank you for your time!

Hypaethrus (talk) 22:18, 21 February 2011 (UTC)

Archie Scott Gobber
Please review http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Archie_Scott_Gobber

Want to validate the reliable sources in hope to demonstrate the subject is notable and to support the claims made in the article. Thank you for your time.

Brief Summary:

Archie Scott Gobber (born 1965, Warrensburg, Missouri) is an artist currently living and working in Kansas City, Missouri, who is known for eye-catching works that employ clever wordplay as a vehicle for social and political commentary. [2] Gobber is represented by DOLPHIN in Kansas City, MO and Marty Walker Gallery in Dallas, TX. His work consists of works on paper, paintings, and sculptural installations.

rmutt (talk) 22:24, 21 February 2011 (UTC)

Arc Blow
Requesting General feed back and maybe a hint on how to include an in text directory for the headings

KJ Cruz 23:28, 21 February 2011 (UTC)

Weld Pool
Looking for general feedback on this article.

KJ Cruz 23:30, 21 February 2011 (UTC)

User:Sook65/Christina Grimmie
Christina Grimmie has become wildly popular, so I was surprised there wasn't a Wikipedia article on her already. Take a look at this one before I put it live. Thanks.

Sook65 (talk) 00:01, 22 February 2011 (UTC)