Wikipedia:Requests for feedback/2011 February 26

Talk:Meshwork
Marilyn Hamilton 01:35, 26 February 2011 (UTC)
 * Am I missing something or did you add a bunch of stuff about "brain sciences" to the talk page of an article about a music album? If you are trying to create a new article, consider clicking on Article wizard and creating it in your userspace. If the topic is already covered in Wikipedia and you wish to modify or add to what has already been written, the place to start is probably the talk page of such article(s). Tkotc (talk) 07:32, 28 February 2011 (UTC)

Lasha Darbaidze
Melissarollins (talk) 02:43, 26 February 2011 (UTC)

Paul Whitehead (politician)
Paul Whitehead (politician) ...we've written the page, and it's posted? but now we want to get the link into 2 pages: California's 36th congressional district and California's 36th congressional district special election, 2011 but i thinks it's about disambiguation because there is another Paul Whitehead Please help, Thanks:) holly...

DHS5646Calif (talk) 02:54, 26 February 2011 (UTC)

James Robison (author)
I think this article is OK, but it's still unreviewed.

Many thanks,

Kfitz00 (talk) 07:37, 26 February 2011 (UTC)
 * Overall the article looks pretty good to me, except for the "Critical reception" section. Most of that section consists of promotional-sounding phrases that would look good in a flyer or book jacket, but seem out of place in an encyclopedia article. I think the article would stand on its own without that stuff. On the other hand, I can see that a positive reception from noteworthy commentators is a reasonable thing to include. If you can think of some way to reconcile these considerations, I think it would improve things. And as I said, otherwise looks pretty good. Tkotc (talk) 07:51, 28 February 2011 (UTC)

Shmuley Boteach
Please visit Shmuley Boteach need edits at his page

65.112.21.194 (talk) 13:08, 26 February 2011 (UTC)

User:81.182.162.19/Enter your new article name here
Please review if it meets Wikipedia standards. Should I include more references?

Jillydavid (talk) 17:35, 26 February 2011 (UTC)

MusiCure
Many thanks for your review. Various additions and ammendments have been made to improve the quality of this article according to feedback previously received.

Cookerid (talk) 19:05, 26 February 2011 (UTC)

Polymera, Inc.
Please review and approve this new page

Hhutchison (talk) 19:17, 26 February 2011 (UTC)


 * According to your user page, you are the General Manager of Polymera. You should read our conflict of interest guideline, which says that editors are strongly discouraged from creating or editing articles about organisations that employ them, or in which they have a financial interest. I have flagged the article with the COI template. Gandalf61 (talk) 11:09, 2 March 2011 (UTC)

User:ChiefakaJames/KSI Global
KSI Global Gaming Network, a gaming community that's been around for 9 years now, is a place that tens of thousands of people have been a part of over Xbox Live.

ChiefakaJames (talk) 19:36, 26 February 2011 (UTC)

Robert Koenig (sculptor)
I'm not sure if I'm in the correct page, but I would like some feedback on my first Wiki Article entitled: Robert Koenig (sculptor). Could you tell me how I add Categories to the page, and also, how do I move the page the mainspace. Do I need to request for the article to be reviewed, or will that happen automatically? I'm still adding info to the page and I will be adding a few images once I read up on how to do it. Do you think it is ready to be moved to the main page? I appreciate your help. thanks and kind regards Barbara Babstap7 (talk) 17:31, 19 February 2011 (UTC)

Babstap7 (talk) 19:47, 26 February 2011 (UTC)

HMS Victory-Lost in 1744
Can you give me feed back.

Bigjayb1988 (talk) 21:10, 26 February 2011 (UTC)
 * Article already deleted. Tkotc (talk) 07:40, 28 February 2011 (UTC)

Paul Turner Sargent
I am a graduate student at Eastern Illinois University and created this page for a digital applications project. I would like to know what I can do to make this article better and what I can add to this article to give viewers more information about Paul Sargent. Thank you! SargentResearcher (talk) 21:32, 26 February 2011 (UTC)
 * i have combined the references, this stacks the references together and simplifies the presentation. An info box using 'infobox artist' WikiProject_Visual_arts may improve the layout and bring the presentation into line with WikiProject Visual arts article presentation. Any additional web link references available? Interesting article. Geez-oz (talk) 13:15, 4 March 2011 (UTC)

User:A todo color/Javier Gonzalez Q. -- abcdespañol
I made some changes based on your suggestions: 1) deleted some parts of the text that couldn't be substantiated with sources. 2) removed sources that you considered "unreliable" like link to www.ashoka.org and http://www.ashoka.org/fellow/3474 3) included video from Deustche Welle

Please let me know what other changes are necessary. Thank you! A todo color (talk) 21:39, 26 February 2011 (UTC)

Dzy The Freshman
I have created a page about an amazing young producer DZY THE FRESHMAN nephew of the famous singer Michel'le and Dr.Dre i think he deserves a wikipage to show that his hard work has paid off even though he did not use his famous connections to get in the music business please review the page i have done for him i have reliable sources for this and have had approvement from his manager and his self

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Dzy_The_Freshman thank you SHAWNTHATGUY (talk) 21:58, 26 February 2011 (UTC)
 * Article was deleted. Tkotc (talk) 07:37, 28 February 2011 (UTC)

Financial Tools, Inc. - Founder David Kampff
Aaperry1994 (talk) 23:56, 26 February 2011 (UTC)
 * Yet another speedy deletion. Tkotc (talk) 07:54, 28 February 2011 (UTC)