Wikipedia:Requests for feedback/2011 February 27

User:WM324AHI/Pie
WM324AHI (talk) 06:13, 27 February 2011 (UTC)

Clean Eating
I would like my article to be reviewed.

TheGraciousPantry (talk) 08:18, 27 February 2011 (UTC)

User:Andresmonzon/Enter your new article name here
Andresmonzon (talk) 11:33, 27 February 2011 (UTC)

User:81.182.162.19/Enter your new article name here
I've improved it since my last request for feedback. This is my first time working on Wikipedia. Sorry for the extra work.

Jillydavid (talk) 12:51, 27 February 2011 (UTC)

User:Gobledeegooke/Enter your new article name here
] I am writing an article on Roy Roberts, who I believe is notable, given that there's a lot of published material on him (i.e. in the New York Times)...What do you think? Will this fly? Thanks...Gobledeegooke (talk) 13:01, 27 February 2011 (UTC)

Gobledeegooke (talk) 13:01, 27 February 2011 (UTC)

David Sims (Marine Biologist)
Marinefishfacts (talk) 13:35, 27 February 2011 (UTC)

User:Jillydavid/Warrior diet
Please, review if appropriate. My first work on Wiki. Looking forward to your opinions.

Jillydavid (talk) 14:21, 27 February 2011 (UTC)

User:Mary Matheson/Emma Dodd
Please can you review this article so that it can be posted live? Many thanks.

Mary Matheson (talk) 17:48, 27 February 2011 (UTC)

User:Farnianlemon/The Body (Band)
If have composed a brief article about an interesting band who (though they do not appeal to my musical tastes) have recently released a highly acclaimed album. As this is my first article, and written in around 30 minutes, it does of course need work, but is it an adequate start?

Farnianlemon (talk) 19:55, 27 February 2011 (UTC)

User:Jakub Zbrzezny
As in the headline. It's my first article in Wikipedia, so any comments much welcome. I'm particularly wondering if the topic is not too specialised. On the other hand surely people interested in history of the liturgy could find it fine, I think.

Jakub Zbrzezny (talk) 20:09, 27 February 2011 (UTC)