Wikipedia:Requests for feedback/2011 January 10

You're the stupidest person on Earth so please shut up and never speak about Wikipedia I'm going to kill you and don't eat nothing Wikipedia

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Lauren_O%27Connell
my first article and don't want it deleted... tried to be sure it's impartial but have a look and let me know if you think it's promoting or anything like that so i can adjust it accordingly... thanks

Max bemis is pretty cool (talk) 02:14, 10 January 2011 (UTC)
 * I don't really think there are any tone problems but I think the references need some work; there might be some notability issues as well. Also the overall article in terms of formatting needs a bit of work. Other than that I think the article is really good. Chevy  monte  carlo  16:55, 10 January 2011 (UTC)

http://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Perry_Redd_%28songwriter/social_change_activist%29&oldid=407008949
Pls help me improve article b/c I don't want it deleted. Thank you for all you do.

Baka Dade (talk) 04:14, 10 January 2011 (UTC)


 * I've left some feedback at Talk:Perry Redd (songwriter/social change activist). --Physics is all gnomes (talk) 15:15, 10 January 2011 (UTC)

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Brody_Murakami
Please give feedback of this page. Thanks!

Hitmixing (talk) 05:05, 10 January 2011 (UTC)
 * I think there could be some notability issues with your article because the references aren't the best. See WP:VRS and WP:Reliable references for more information about how to improve your references. Good luck. Chevy  monte  carlo  17:01, 10 January 2011 (UTC)

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Libratorr/Male-female_income_disparity_in_Australia
Hi, Please offer feedback on this article - I'd like to know if its references resource reliability and notability is up to scratch before I request a move. I created the article (on the history of the gender pay gap in Australia) for possible links as a new main article from the statistics section of Income gender gap (which currently only has USA statistics) and possible links from the employment section of Gender inequality in Australia.

All feedback is welcome. This is my first article.

Libratorr (talk) 06:57, 10 January 2011 (UTC)

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Mark_Jacobs_(author)
Bio entry on American author Mark Jacobs

Kate Yemelyanov (talk) 14:36, 10 January 2011 (UTC)
 * It's a good start but I think you need to perhaps work on adding more reliable references and perhaps an infobox just to summarise the key points about this person. Chevy  monte  carlo  17:04, 10 January 2011 (UTC)

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:TGGoat/NorthEast_Paintball_Series
TGGoat (talk) 15:31, 10 January 2011 (UTC)
 * To be honest I don't think your article is notable enough to be included on Wikipedia. This is due to weak references; most of them seem to be from the just the one site, when really they should be from secondary sources independent of the article's subject; see WP:VRS. Chevy  monte  carlo  17:09, 10 January 2011 (UTC)

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Rlombard/draft_of_Angels_of_Flight
Please review the page and suggest any necessary modifications that may be required. I have added all the citations and references. In the external links sections I have simply put links to any organization or website that is mentioned in the article for easy reference.

Thanks

Rlombard (talk) 16:31, 10 January 2011 (UTC)

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Vcardillo/Catalyst_Inc
Would like to make sure that this is an acceptable and notable company profile article. References already exist and are cited.

Vcardillo (talk) 18:50, 10 January 2011 (UTC)

User:Andrew042886/Hold_It_Against_Me_Britney_Spears_song
Andrew042886 (talk) 20:51, 10 January 2011 (UTC)

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Dick_Bruich
Check out my new article and delete that ugly tag, Thanks! Mracew (talk) 21:45, 10 January 2011 (UTC)

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Kevin_Kunze
Please help me with refs! I'm new here and really want to put up my first article. there is more than enough information on those links but i can also provide other scholarly articles and newspaper sources. please let me know I really want to see this work.

Kakunze (talk) 21:48, 10 January 2011 (UTC)
 * If you are the subject of the article, it is considered improper to create/edit it yourself, due to an inherent conflict-of-interest. Also, I have placed some concerns on the talk page of the article regarding the references, which you have already sensed are not sufficient Mracew (talk) 04:03, 25 January 2011 (UTC)

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/ProjectManager.com
Hi, this is the third request for review of this page which I wrote on Dec 9th. Is there anyone who can help reviewing this, checking on the amount of references ect ?? I believe this company's software to be worthy of inclusion here and would appreciate anyone's help, Thanks !

Rachnzl (talk) 22:22, 10 January 2011 (UTC)

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/QI_MACROS
I believe this page QI Macros should be added to Wikipedia, as it is a similar software to Minitab (which has its own page).

Smarthu (talk) 22:54, 10 January 2011 (UTC) — Smarthu (talk • contribs) has made few or no other edits outside this topic.
 * Can you make it read less like an advertisement? Do you have any conflicts of intrest? Are their any independent, third party sources (ie, ones other than Mr. Arthur's books, his company's website, and his youtube channel)? -- 99.164.111.40 (talk) 14:07, 11 January 2011 (UTC)

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Gott%27s_Roadside
Adding an entry for the restaurants called "Gott's Roadside" in Northern California. Gott's Roadside was renamed from Taylor's Automatic Refresher in 2010.

Kmigdal (talk) 23:10, 10 January 2011 (UTC)