Wikipedia:Requests for feedback/2011 July 12

User:Askjayaa/myBantu
I have made couple of edits to the article based on various inputs from different Wikipedians but now want to move it for the final posting. Need advise as someone has mentioned that it might still qualify for G11.

Askjayaa (talk) 06:05, 12 July 2011 (UTC)


 * I don't think it's ready. It does not provide sufficient independent sources.  I've commented further on the article's Discussion page. Tango Mike Bravo (talk) 11:56, 12 July 2011 (UTC)

MCA21 Mission Mode Project
Kindly revirew this article.

Director, e-Governance division, Deptt of Informaiton Technology, MoC&amp;IT, India (talk) 06:27, 12 July 2011 (UTC)

Paine_Proffitt Seeking feedback on (relatively) new article on American-born artist, Paine Proffitt.
Grateful for feedback/approval to remove the 'new unreviewed article' message. Article is on an American-born artist, Paine Proffitt, known for his sporting works and his depiction of the "working man's life". Finbofinbo (talk) 11:26, 12 July 2011 (UTC)

Michael J Wade Please review this new article. My first wikipedia article. Have received feedback from other people who know Wade.
Michael J Wade Please review this new article. My first wikipedia article. Have received feedback from other people who know Wade.

Wingroras (talk) 11:35, 12 July 2011 (UTC)

Regitwise:RegitWise ServiceDesk/HelpDesk
Please review and approve article..

Regitwise (talk) 12:01, 12 July 2011 (UTC)

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Ssedova/Dartfish
I'd like general feedback as to how to make this page more likely to be accepted by Wikipedia.

Ssedova (talk) 13:41, 12 July 2011 (UTC)

User:3family6/Know Hope Collective (album)
I have been working on this for the past two days, and would like comments before bringing it into mainspace.

3family6 (talk) 14:12, 12 July 2011 (UTC)

skike
This is a general request for feedback on new article for skike. Skike is a special new type of roller ski that can be used in forrest etc.

Bjolseth (talk) 14:14, 12 July 2011 (UTC)

User:Extreme_harmony/Church_of_England_Youth_Council
Please could you check that this is all right before I publish it

Extreme harmony (talk) 14:23, 12 July 2011 (UTC)

gemvara
Brandignity (talk) 16:39, 12 July 2011 (UTC)

User:Jbr6000/Michelle_Paisley
First time writing an article from scratch...researched, linked and cited as much as I could per the instructions. Any comments/suggestions are welcome!

Thanks

Jbr6000 (talk) 17:30, 12 July 2011 (UTC)

Ada Lee I have posted an article on veteran jazz singer and Atlantic Records recording artist Ada Lee. Feedback and additional information is welcomed.
Burbankvideo (talk) 18:08, 12 July 2011 (UTC)

User:Colincbn/International Random Film Festival
I'm still puzzleled what to do more to prove that International Random film Festival is an actual annual event. As requested, here are some News articles about the International Random Film Festival. It is an actual Film Festival, not a joke:


 * , Article in Hufvudstadsbladet about the founder Hannaleena Hauru, and the 2nd Edition of the Festival in Bór Zapilski, Poland.


 * , Article about the festival's 2nd edition in Poland in [onet.pl], the largest Polish web portal.


 * Article and TV-spot on TVS, Poland - Television Silesia, free TV channel in Katowice, Silesia.

HannaleenaEuphoria (talk) 19:39, 12 July 2011 (UTC)

Pennsylvania Avenue (Brooklyn)
A notable street in Brooklyn, NY. Can anyone check for grammar/and possibly to add information I may have missed? Much appreciated!

Tinton5 (talk) 20:45, 12 July 2011 (UTC)

== Nashville GED providers wanted to see if I used the correct code to author this article. The article's purpose is to help centralize multiple streams of information for getting your GED in Nashville. ==

I wanted to see if I used the correct code to author this article. The article's purpose is to help centralize multiple streams of information for getting your GED in Nashville. Does it look good?

Nashville Adult Literacy (talk) 22:22, 12 July 2011 (UTC)
 * That was not an article, it was a how-to and directory. Wikipedia is not a "how-to" manual; neither is it a directory service. You were trying to use us to advertise things, albeit with the very best of intentions; the advertisement has been deleted. -- Orange Mike  &#x007C;   Talk  20:27, 13 July 2011 (UTC)

Promised You A Miracle
Hello, please review this Simple Minds article plus Speed Your Love To Me, and Up On The Catwalk. Thanks.

Laydsb (talk) 22:58, 12 July 2011 (UTC)

User:Legionnaire X/Bandon Capital Management LLC
Never written a wikipedia entry before, would greatly appreciate some feedback. Thanks!

Legionnaire X (talk) 23:23, 12 July 2011 (UTC)

The Voice Festival UK
Needs reviewing, particularly the table, as it is my first and may need clean up. Thanks

MrMarkBGregory (talk) 23:27, 12 July 2011 (UTC)