Wikipedia:Requests for feedback/2011 July 20

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Swell_Music
Hello,

This is an article for Swell Music, boutique music house in San Francisco and Los Angeles. We are active in both communities, having recently finished sound design and mix on a worldwide reebok campaign and Swizz msuic video video in LA, as well as original music for T-Mobile's new MyTouch phone campaign in SF. We are also working on sound design for the new iOS e-book, Treasure Island.

Thanks!

Swellmusictv (talk) 01:09, 20 July 2011 (UTC)

The Dori Slosberg Foundation
The article is about The Dori Slosberg Foundation. It is a highways safety foundation that has been active in creating laws to promote safe driving in Florida.

Bobsaget112 (talk) 03:30, 20 July 2011 (UTC)

Q-Sensei
Ct28ofs (talk) 05:13, 20 July 2011 (UTC)

The Overtures
They are a very famous 60's tribute band, wiht many webs articles about them and quotes from famous poeple about them. my article has lots of works cited but the formatting of the page needs a little bit of work.

Boloney33 (talk) 07:11, 20 July 2011 (UTC)

Peggy of Castletown
Further specialist detail or comparative international references would be appreciated.

Rowangus (talk) 08:35, 20 July 2011 (UTC)

[]
This is my first attempt to put something on here. Currently there is no article with the charity, but a number of people linked to the charity already have articles on Wikipedia and on one the charity is already mentioned. Would appreciate any feedback before I try to make it go live. I have done the best I can to put references and links but if it is lacking in any area I will try to find more. Thanks.

Nbfa (talk) 10:05, 20 July 2011 (UTC)

User:Educate.mali/Lougourougoumbou
I do not understand why I cannot move this page (http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Educate.mali/Lougourougoumbou). I am told that my account has only recently been created. How long do I have to wait, because I planned to publish it by tomorrow.

I have added all reliable online sources I could find.

Educate.mali (talk) 13:15, 20 July 2011 (UTC)

Hello, I've written an article but as it is of a business I wanted to get some feedback before I do anything else. Feedback very much appreciated.

192laura (talk) 13:33, 20 July 2011 (UTC)

User:192laura/192business
192laura (talk) 13:33, 20 July 2011 (UTC)

Thomas Carothers
This is an article about an American foreign policy expert. Please check to see if this looks ok, I'm new to this

Dgramont (talk) 15:15, 20 July 2011 (UTC)

Ecosphere (social enterprise)
Hello there,

I recently volunteered with Ecosphere in the Trans-Himalayan region of India and think they deserve a Wikipedia page for such commendable work. I've created the page, with a variety of content & references. However, I can't figure out how to add it to the disambiguation page for Ecosphere. Any help will be greatly appreciated. Also any other feedback / edits will be much appreciated. Thanks in advance.

Shivyanath (talk) 16:02, 20 July 2011 (UTC)

Forging a Future Self
I have created an article for Forging a Future Self, the debut album by the metal band After the Burial. Any feedback would be helpful.

Metalla515 (talk) 17:44, 20 July 2011 (UTC)

Ayrtek
Hello...

If anyone knows, how would I make a table at the side with maybe a picture of the brand logo, and perhaps some info/statistics below that??

Miley2315 (talk) 18:02, 20 July 2011 (UTC)

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/user:BBethel/William_Earl_Musick
How do I move my article to live wiki?

BBethel (talk) 18:28, 20 July 2011 (UTC)

Chula Vista CLEAN group
This is my first Wiki article. Any constructive criticism is greatly appreciated!

Slimmagnus (talk) 18:31, 20 July 2011 (UTC)

User:Alejandro.arzate/lima lama
The idea about this article is to document the information about lima lama martial Art history

Alejandro.arzate (talk) 18:56, 20 July 2011 (UTC)

photonic curing
This is my first wikipedia article. As there are many steps involved in doing this, I am concerned I have missed something important. Can you please look at my article as I don't want to be flagged for something inappropriate either in content or formatting.

Thank you

Dr thermano (talk) 19:10, 20 July 2011 (UTC)

User:Rainbow Dash/Brony
This will most likely be the last attempt I will make at a independent article on the MLP:FiM fandom. I am well aware of the previous deletion discussions, but I am also aware of fandoms such as Browncoats (fans of the show Firefly) which look to be in worse condition, yet was not deleted as a result of a deletion discussion for that article. Rainbow  Dash  (WikiBrony!) 19:35, 20 July 2011 (UTC)

Dhaka Imperial College
Breaking.shuvo (talk) 19:49, 20 July 2011 (UTC)

TRM Microwave I've written an article that was removed immediately upon moving it. I'm unsure of what was wrong. It wasn't finished and it was similar to other company pages.
I've written an article that was removed immediately upon saving it. I'm unsure of what was wrong. It wasn't finished and it was similar to other company pages. Could someone look at it along with these examples to point out what I've done wrong? Azimuth Systems, Microwave Data Systems, Herley Industries, Microsemi, RF Micro Devices, TriQuint Semiconductor, Anritsu and many, many more. I was still adding content while it was flagged and removed. Any advice would be greatly appreciated.

Celeste1234 (talk) 21:20, 20 July 2011 (UTC)

Transcendence: Healing and Transformation Through Transcendental Meditation
I just created this article and a quick look and a proper tag removal would be appreciated. I'm an experienced editor and it's got all the bells and whistles but let me know if I forgot something! :-)

 — Keithbob • Talk  • 21:28, 20 July 2011 (UTC)

ZocDoc -- please review
This is a new article about the online medical appointment booking service. I would greatly appreciate it if someone would review it and, if appropriate, to remove the "This page is a new unreviewed article" flag. Also, I've added links to this article from the Founders Fund and Ron Conway Wikipedia pages, so it is no longer an orphan.

JNorman704 (talk) 23:11, 20 July 2011 (UTC)

Sunil Shanbag
My first article on Wikipedia. Just wanted some feedback.

Schreibstuck (talk) 23:29, 20 July 2011 (UTC)

Suppliers Credit
Suppliers Credit is a form of trade credit used by businessmen to reduce their working capital cost. This article is from Indian perspective. Internationally, a supplier providing credit is called suppliers credit but in India buyer arranges suppliers credit for the transaction from international bank branch for the tenure credit he wants. Reason of doing so is to take advantage of LIBOR linked interest rates.

This article provide complete overview of the transaction, along with process, advantage, cost, guidles etc.

I am an ex banker and regularly dealt with such request on day to day basis

Sanjaymandavia (talk) 18:18, 21 July 2011 (UTC)