Wikipedia:Requests for feedback/2011 July 29

Samuel Jackson Pratt
Hi - please could someone review this article about the 18th/19th century writer, poet, dramatist and animal rights campaigner (and sex-scandal vicar!) and, if all is OK, remove the "New unreviewed article" tag? Any feedback gratefully welcomed! Butcherscross (talk) 01:03, 29 July 2011 (UTC)


 * Notable subject, impeccable citations, good tone and length, all-around a good start. The main problem is that 99% of the work has all been done by the same editor. This is to be expected in a new article, but over time I would hope other editors(who are experts on the subject like you) will be able to give it a broader perspective. Happy editing, hajat  vrc  with WikiLove @ 21:16, 30 July 2011 (UTC)


 * Many thanks, Hajatvrc! I really appreciate your feedback and your kind comments! (Thanks, also, for removing the 'new unreviewed article' tag.) I understand your comment about me being the only editor - hopefully once other people start realising the article is there it'll get some contributions and amendments from other editors. Butcherscross (talk) 00:47, 31 July 2011 (UTC)

User:Keybounce/Xeno_(sphere_board_game)
This is a board game stub entry. It has a little more information than most stubs, but not as much as a full article would want.

Keybounce (talk) 02:42, 29 July 2011 (UTC)

Asker Jeukendrup
This is an article on a notable sports physiologist and sports nutritionist. His scientific articles on sports nutrition are cited extensively by many researches in this area.

Fayerman (talk) 02:46, 29 July 2011 (UTC)

User:Askjayaa/SuperSeva Services
Need advice on the page for its readiness to move. Can I move this page now ?

Askjayaa (talk) 02:47, 29 July 2011 (UTC)
 * The article does not cite a single source. Please review WP:V. Happy editing, hajat  vrc  with WikiLove @ 20:07, 31 July 2011 (UTC)

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_Werks_(American_Band)
Someone tried to submit a page for The_Werks a long time ago and it was deleted. The band has since grown in notoriety and because of national touring and festival appearances a need has arisen to ensure accurate information is available to the public. Because the first attempt at a page for this act was removed, the name is being held and unable to assign the page to the bands trademarked name. http://tdr.uspto.gov/search.action?sn=85356512 [1] How do you request the name be released and reassigned to the new page? --A note of interest -- the admin who removed "The Werks" has since fallen under suspension of admin privileges due to inactivity. http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User_talk:Aecis

Caulfield-catcher (talk) 03:37, 29 July 2011 (UTC)

Larry Abramson
I am beginning a new project. I hope to soon build a project page and currently have info on the project here The Art of Information Sharing: Museum Artist files on Wikipedia

I would appreciate any feedback to the first page I created. It is based on an extensive list of Israeli artists in the IMJ IAC archive. The translations were done here as well (see also Chinese and Russian links - Hebrew was already in place) thank you

IAC-Israel Museum (talk) 04:15, 29 July 2011 (UTC)

Pale Blue Dot
I have been working on the article for quite a few days now. I would like to have any feed backs on what is wrong here and what can be done to improve it further. Thanks.

Suraj T  06:01, 29 July 2011 (UTC)

2011-12 Lille OSC Season
I was just hoping that somebody could look over the above page and check if it's up to scratch as an article. Any help would be greatly appreciated!

Pereirab04 (talk) 06:12, 29 July 2011 (UTC)

Michael Back
New article about an Australian lawyer, the Brisbane managing partner of one of the "big six" Australian law firms. Could someone please review.

Otherthinker (talk) 09:52, 29 July 2011 (UTC)

Rubbish (Magazine)
Please could this page about Rubbish Magazine - an award winning cult fashion magazine from London be reviewed? Many Thanks.

78.86.157.142 (talk) 10:00, 29 July 2011 (UTC)

Susan Lewis, author
This is my first ever article - I've edited before, and I've practiced, but just want to check I've got formatting etc right.

Thanks!

TamsinBishton (talk) 10:39, 29 July 2011 (UTC)

Barbados Cricket Buckle
Feedback please! Am struggling with the whole HTML issue though - can anyone assist?

Hill123 (talk) 11:34, 29 July 2011 (UTC)

User:Wefsctr/World_Economic_Forum_Supply_Chain_%26_Transport_Risk
Wefsctr (talk) 12:42, 29 July 2011 (UTC)

Alexander Molodchy
Short version of the biography in English. Needs to be approved (all information is exact) and patrolled. If everything is ok I will translate the extended information and post it.

Kantervo (talk) 12:52, 29 July 2011 (UTC)

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:SunProgrammer/SunProgrammer_Co_ltd
SunProgrammer Stands on Shoulders of Giants! (talk) 13:46, 29 July 2011 (UTC)

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Winston_Venable
New article

Pakin331 (talk) 15:05, 29 July 2011 (UTC)

Reginald Ian Barrett
Please review this article about an Australian judge and significant corporate lawyer.

Otherthinker (talk) 15:41, 29 July 2011 (UTC)

Marcgravia evenia
I was just wondering if I did everything correctly when I submitted this articles. It is the first thing I have done on Wikipedia, so want to make sure I did everything correctly.

The article is about a recently discovered plant called Marcgravia evenia, which uses the shape of it leaves to attract bats. It is the first plant discovered to have developed an adaptation like this.

Zain Kinnare (talk) 16:00, 29 July 2011 (UTC)

I reviewed and made some edits, and removed the new article header. I found the article well referenced, with just some minor typo, grammar and layout adjustements required.

Nigelshaw (talk) 17:38, 29 July 2011 (UTC)


 * Thanks I appreciate you taking a look at it and fixing my mistakes :) . Zain Kinnare (talk) 20:18, 29 July 2011 (UTC)

User:19daird73/Bristol Bisons RFC
Hi, this is my first article so would appreciate being treated gently as this doesn't seem the easiest system in the world to edit / produce things.

thanks your help is apprecaited.

19daird73 (talk) 16:48, 29 July 2011 (UTC)

Claims based identity
Nigelshaw (talk) 17:22, 29 July 2011 (UTC)

ARC Energy
I would like someone to review my article please. It is a short article about a company called ARC Energy which rose to my attention after it was visited by Barack Obama and Gary Locke.

Chewes (talk) 20:25, 29 July 2011 (UTC)

User:DY?Art/dY?
This artist will be in some major galleries soon. People are wanting to know what the WANTED posters are about.

User:dY?Art 22:40, 29 July 2011 (UTC)

Buildism
So, I'm a moderator from this smallish 2D Java-based sandbox game and I decided to make a small Wikipedia page for it. It links to the more detailed in-site Buildism Wiki. Does it look alright?

Qwertygiy (talk) 00:44, 30 July 2011 (UTC)