Wikipedia:Requests for feedback/2011 June 16

Feronia Inc.
Please review this page. Subject is the parent company of Plantations et Huileries du Congo (PHC) which just (May) celebrated its 100th anniversary and has had a wiki page for some time. The PHC page itself requires revision but I believe this page to be accurate and up-to-date.

Kinshasas finest (talk) 03:46, 16 June 2011 (UTC)

The article looks really great. Go through and add some intra-Wikipedia links to really common stuff like Democratic Republic of the Congo. That will make your article integrate better with the rest of Wikipedia. HypatiaX (talk) 06:50, 16 June 2011 (UTC)

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Kimberly_Estrada
I created a page about Kimberly Estrada's work as an actress. She was Spokesmodel #16 on Deal or No Deal for 45 episodes and has been on shows such as: Lost, Heroes, Criminal Minds, Castle, and Sons of Anarchy. She was also named one of People Magazine's 100 Most Beautiful People

Ganzexp (talk) 06:22, 16 June 2011 (UTC)

Article about an actor and no picture?!!! Would be a nice addition, I'm sure.

Also, remove "new article content" phrase that was from the template.

HypatiaX (talk) 06:52, 16 June 2011 (UTC)

User:HypatiaX/Women Impacting the Nation
This is my first article and I want to keep it brief because there's not a lot out there on this organization. My main question are:
 * Is this article too brief to be put out there yet?
 * The organization itself is pretty controversial. Am I staying neutral enough?

HypatiaX (talk) 06:47, 16 June 2011 (UTC)

User:Giedre_G/Transworld_Advertising_Agency_Network
Hello,I've tried to create page but it was marked as Unambiguous advertising or promotion. Maybe you can make some review of what is wrong? Thank you in advance.

Giedre G (talk) 08:49, 16 June 2011 (UTC)

Higher Local Field
I have added this article as it seemed to be required for a full understanding of the following, pre-existing, articles: Local class field theory, Local field and Ivan Fesenko. Feedback would be appreciated.

Tomoliver163 (talk) 09:56, 16 June 2011 (UTC)

ACT 2 CAM
Please could I request some feedback for an article I have written about ACT 2 CAM, a film company in North East UK? Many thanks, Steve

82.39.211.32 (talk) 10:17, 16 June 2011 (UTC)

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Jindal_Prize
suggestions and comments are invited upon the article

Rajeshbansalji (talk) 11:22, 16 June 2011 (UTC)

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Moegoog/bodo_and_the_prince
Moegoog (talk) 14:18, 16 June 2011 (UTC)

Josephine-Louise Public Library, Walden, New York
I have corrected the references to this item, and they seem to be displaying correctly. Please let me know if there are other problems with it. Thank you.

Bookerjack (talk) 18:50, 16 June 2011 (UTC)

Randall K. Filer
Summary of article: biography of Randall K. Filer, an American economist and professor of Economics at Hunter College. He has strong ties to Central and Eastern European universities and institutions promoting post-undergraduate Economics education. Juble3401 (talk) 19:27, 16 June 2011 (UTC)


 * The article is OK for a scientist stub. You might consider adding an infobox and a reference to his major publications. Netzakh[&#x02c8;ne&#x02a6;a&#x0127;] 15:37, 22 June 2011 (UTC)

John S. Hoffmire
I have added an article on my husband, John S. Hoffmire. While 3 of the articles that he has written are online, I am a bit concerned that I have not shown the number of sources that you would like to see. Partly for this reason, I have cited the 20 or so articles from periodicals such as the Wall Street Journal where he is quoted. But if I am approaching this from the wrong perspective, please let me know. - Shelley Hammond Hoffmire

Hoffmire (talk) 20:19, 16 June 2011 (UTC)

The Armchairs
Hello. I added this page a little well ago. Someone was kind enough to review this page before. I received criticisms about the formatting and addressed all of them. I think its ok now. Does anyone see any other issues. I know It needs a photo. I'll work on that. Recently the "This page needs to be reviewed" tag popped up at the top. Its already been reviewed so I don't know why it says that. Can anyone help me? This is my first article and am still a bit confused about how things work here. Any help would be appreciated. Thank You. -Andrew

Diggerbabydaggerbaby (talk) 21:02, 16 June 2011 (UTC)

Zimboro123/Paul Kirtley
Hi, my first article. had a bit of trouble with the links, hope its OK? Regards Zim.

Zimboro123 (talk) 22:07, 16 June 2011 (UTC)

Elcapastor/Winston Branch This is an article about the painter Winston Branch. I'd like some advice regarding citations within Wikipedia. This is my first attempt at Wikipedia. Thanks.
Elcapastor (talk) 22:25, 16 June 2011 (UTC)