Wikipedia:Requests for feedback/2011 June 5

Bruce Harris Craven
Feedback please...

Mshawinc (talk) 00:04, 5 June 2011 (UTC)
 * I have tagged numerous issues at the article page. The most important of them is the need to prove notability with (multiple, if possible) reliable, third-person sources to back up all of the information you've added. If the topic is deemed unnotable by consensus, it may be deleted. Other than that:
 * Don't forget to add some categories to make it easier to find.
 * You should wikify some more, especially key terms.
 * You should expand some of the sections more, such as the published works section.
 * I hope this helps. Crisco 1492 (talk) 06:25, 5 June 2011 (UTC)

The Astrology of Personality
I wrote when the book was released, a one sentence summary of the main topic of the book, and included an excerpt from the rear cover of the 1970 Doubleday edition.

Jhongrwll (talk) 03:42, 5 June 2011 (UTC)
 * I have tagged numerous issues at the article page. The most important of them is the need to prove notability with (multiple, if possible) reliable, third-person sources. If the topic is deemed unnotable by consensus, it may be deleted. Other than that:
 * Don't forget to add some categories to make it easier to find.
 * You should wikify some more, especially key terms like Doubleday.
 * Don't get in the habit of copying copyrighted material. Although one sentence falls under fair-use, doing it too often could get the article deleted and you in hot water.
 * I hope this helps. Crisco 1492 (talk) 06:25, 5 June 2011 (UTC)

User:Stjgoc/St. John's Greek Orthodox College
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Stjgoc/St._John%27s_Greek_Orthodox_College St. John's Greek Orthodox College is a co-educational school established in 1979 (P–12) and is part of the Independent School sector. The College is influenced by the Greek Orthodox Archdiocese of Australia and currently consists of 260 students from years P to 12.

Stjgoc (talk) 10:49, 5 June 2011 (UTC)

EastLondon Boi/John Stanley (Playwright)
Please advise if this article along with its references is acceptable to wikipedia, many thanks.

EastLondonBoi (talk) 11:17, 5 June 2011 (UTC)

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Karrattul/Pushpa_Sundar_Tuladhar
This article is about a Nepalese benefactor who was one of the major donors to the renovation of two important Buddhist temples in the early 20th century. Would be grateful for any suggestions for improvement.

Karrattul (talk) 11:29, 5 June 2011 (UTC)
 * Looks good, well sourced. Uray1130 (talk) 04:38, 14 June 2011 (UTC)

StockholmPK
The page is created for the easy access of information for the community, driven by a prominent yahoogroup "stockholmpk" which represents the Pakistani student community living in Stockholm.

Stockholmpk (talk) 12:44, 5 June 2011 (UTC)

StockholmPK
The page is created for the easy access of information for the community, driven by a prominent yahoogroup "stockholmpk" which represents the Pakistani student community living in Stockholm.

Stockholmpk (talk) 12:45, 5 June 2011 (UTC)

The Morning After (web series)
Just looking for a "feedback revisit" of sorts. I believe I've taken care of the reliable reference problem. Can a more experienced user take a gander at my article and possibly remove the tag at the head of the page? Composer Dude (TALKIE) 14:13, 5 June 2011 (UTC)
 * I'm satisfied! Nice job. I've removed the reference tag. Take care! Pianotech Talk to me!/Contribs 20:21, 5 June 2011 (UTC)

UntitledUser:JenniferAnneBaker/Rosemarie Garland-Thomsonl
I'm trying to make this page as a kind of canary for some female professors who were wondering how hard it was to create a Wikipedia page. Does it look OK? What would I need to do to get it published, I don't have a history of 10 edits. Thanks! http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:JenniferAnneBaker/Rosemarie_Garland-Thomson

JenniferAnneBaker (talk) 14:44, 5 June 2011 (UTC)

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Would be grateful for advice on getting this page right for final posting. Thanks.

Dynasoft1 (talk) 16:32, 5 June 2011 (UTC)

User:Amboy00/The Variants
Request to add an entry for an Internet television series, The Variants.

Amboy00 (talk) 17:06, 5 June 2011 (UTC)

User:Tkil/Parma_Polyhedra_Library
I'm aware that there aren't many links other than to the home page, but through the home page one can reach their collection of links to published academic papers as well as the extensive "applications" list.

Tkil (talk) 18:59, 5 June 2011 (UTC)

User:Casper2907/Black Sheep Da Creep
Is this exceptable?

CASPER (talk) 19:55, 5 June 2011 (UTC)

User:Zeldafan3242/Abditory
Do you think this article is ready?

'''Zeldafan3242! :)''' 20:52, 5 June 2011 (UTC)