Wikipedia:Requests for feedback/2011 June 8

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Briechel/Ted_Trainer
What is needed to post this article?

Briechel (talk) 02:48, 8 June 2011 (UTC)

User:Kyriasabin/Ron Fletcher
This one is up for the second review. Please advise if there are any issues with the wiki page currently.

Thanks for your help!!

Untitled why is deleting the Asharaaf sarmaan under rahaweyn below sideed?
Why is Asharaaf sarmaan deleting all the time under the rahaweyn subclan below sideed?

74.138.56.97 (talk) 06:17, 8 June 2011 (UTC)

User:L1A1 FAL/Sandbox A draft for the upcoming 13th Megadeth album
I'm writing a draft for a future article on the next album by heavy metal band Megadeth. There's no final title or a complete tracklist yet, but I want to get some feedback on what I have so far. Right now, lack of a title aside, I think I have enough to actually start an article (there is more content here now than on Rush's Clockwork Angels or Foo Fighters' Wasting Light, when it was started under a TBA title) as I have a well-developed background section and some other preliminary information, But I will probably wait for a title to be released first. My draft is on my sandbox page. Thanks!

P.S. If there are any issues, please let me know on my talk page. Again, thanks!

L1A1 FAL (talk) 06:43, 8 June 2011 (UTC)

UntitledUser:Sudeepthigarikena/The Rising Fall, Raman Kalia
Hi it's a book written about the protagonist Adam, who started his journey to play a game of unimaginable wealth and riches. The game in turn makes him encounter new realities and forcing him to make choices without shackling in guilt on which hangs the fate of his life and morality. And this reality takes cataclysmic proportions when collective justifications are used to rationalize individual agendas and greed. This allegorical tale is narrated in form of a fable with moral ambiguities to tell the story of the world and tries to unveil the deception and lies we live by through our choices. Though the book traverses the journey of Adam it will take the reader on a psychedelic ride which can be different from that of Adam and create a parallel universe more beautiful or uglier.

Sudeepthigarikena (talk) 08:45, 8 June 2011 (UTC)

Rolf Sachs
This is a new article. Please can I receive feedback.

A.ullman (talk) 13:00, 8 June 2011 (UTC)

/* James Wilde */
Please could someone review this work?

Grendel93 (talk) 13:27, 8 June 2011 (UTC)

Better English selection...
May I request Wikipedia to move "English" and "Simple English" language selection to the top of the list in the left side menu? Since English is the most used language on the web, this will make Wikipedia easier to use by making these 2 languages the easiest to find and access on the menu.

67.171.177.46 (talk) 13:32, 8 June 2011 (UTC)

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114.120.83.38 (talk) 13:55, 8 June 2011 (UTC)

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Ajit_sadalagi/Space_lines_of_forces
I am working on space and gravity. There are two theories, one about space lines of forces another is gravity is caused by georeactors.
 * : Space is made up of beads which connect each other to form a series of cube(square boxes).
 * : The georeactors which are present in the earth's core cause space lines to bend which in turn cause gravity.

Please let me know if the above understanding is correct.

Ajit sadalagi (talk) 14:35, 8 June 2011 (UTC)

Riscos.info
Original Mainspace version deleted under WP:CSD, subsequently copied to Userspace and improved. Deletion endorsed at Deletion review/Log/2011 May 24. Trevj (talk) 14:44, 8 June 2011 (UTC)
 * I would vote for a merge into RISC OS. Generally web sites are not independently notable enough by themselves compared to the thing for which they were created. Most or all of the sources seem either not independent or blogs or wikis or email which not considered reliable by itself. Listing many blogs and emails does not necessarily help. And definitely do not use the word "notable" in the article, since it tends to be a red flag. Just say the information about the subject with a reliable source cited. W Nowicki (talk) 01:57, 13 June 2011 (UTC)
 * Thanks very much for taking a look at this. The word "notable" has now been removed. Riscos.info is not connected with any of the bodies involved in the OS itself, i.e. RISC OS Open, RISCOS Ltd or Castle Technology. It should be noted that these bodies do not have separate articles for their websites, which I agree is as it should be. There is currently no merge proposal from Riscos.info into RISC OS and I would argue against such a proposal. I understand that the content of Riscos.info could arguably be included within the main RISC OS article but I do not think this would be helpful for readers seeking background information about the website. Retaining a separate article is more encyclopedic IMHO. --Trevj (talk) 09:43, 21 June 2011 (UTC)
 * Regarding the current references, the intention in the future is to include additional references from printed magazines. These are currently unavailable to me, so other refs have been included as an interim measure. I understand that their nature may look a little desperate and would be happy to remove some of the refs, particularly if it is felt that their inclusion may negatively contribute to an assessment of notability. Thanks. --Trevj (talk) 09:52, 21 June 2011 (UTC)

Thomas Keeper The article is about a realtor who has been featured on HGTV and is #1 in his city.
The article is about a realtor who has been featured on HGTV and is #1 in his city. This is my first article and I am not sure if I have enough sources or what I can write and what I can't. Can someone please read my draft and give me some feedback? I don't want to post the article just to have it taken down for one reason or another. Any help would be appreciated. Thanks!

Kmoffitt (talk) 15:45, 8 June 2011 (UTC)

Insurance Regulatory Law wikipage User:InsuranceRegLaw/Insurance_Regulatory_Law
New topic seeking feedback

Wikipage describing the topic of Insurance Regulatory Law and providing a history (United States) as well as elements of the practice of same. While there are some mentions of insurance regulation issues on the Insurance wikipage and the Insurance Law wikipage, this article is intended to be a specialized subpage.

InsuranceRegLaw (talk) 16:30, 8 June 2011 (UTC)

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I am trying to upload this to wikipedia for my boss, I don't want it as my user profile...why is this so complicated?!?!

Starbebe (talk) 20:38, 8 June 2011 (UTC)

M. K. Cheriyan
70.174.157.128 (talk) 20:50, 8 June 2011 (UTC)

User:Ballen3700/Melinda Wood Allen is this ready for online? how do i post? thanks
Ballen3700 (talk) 22:10, 8 June 2011 (UTC)

From Here To Anywhere (2011 Album)
Schulzr (talk) 22:24, 8 June 2011 (UTC)