Wikipedia:Requests for feedback/2011 March 17

Verdensteatret
I added facts and description supported by outside sources. I'm pretty new at this, and would appreciate any constructive criticism. Thanks!

Rangmaker (talk) 00:13, 17 March 2011 (UTC)

Seven Bar Foundation
New article- needs to be reviewed for unbiasedness.

Eca255 (talk) 00:33, 17 March 2011 (UTC)

User:Phoenixcomm/2 of 5 Code Please publish page.. thanks
please publish this page. The table info (the code) came off of one of my Gables Engineering parts diagram. most aircraft control heads use this code. I could not find it listed anywhere on the net. this is not 'two-of-five code' which was used by the telcos. thks

Phoenixcomm (talk) 02:33, 17 March 2011 (UTC)


 * Greetings, the page as you linked it is not currently ready for publishing. The main things it lacks are a lede (WP:LEDE), which establishes the subject and gives a short summary that any layman could understand.  The article's references are also to sites like Ask.com, which is not a reliable source (WP:RS).  Try instead to find at least one or two reliable sources from news sites, GoogleBooks, or from a page belonging to a recognised official entity in the engineering field.  Feel free to post back here with any questions, MatthewVanitas (talk) 16:00, 20 March 2011 (UTC)

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia_talk:Articles_for_creation/Kalisha_Keane
I am in need of some help in the formatting department. I would really enjoy some constructive help. Thank you.

Bakerdu2 (talk) 03:25, 17 March 2011 (UTC)

Okay, I've given it a tidy up. I see it's been declined by 'articles for creation' but that you've done more work on it since. Try to gather more references from places other than msuspartans, which I don't think would be considered an independant source. You'll need to get enough references to show that Keane meets the notability guidelines. Good luck, --Physics is all gnomes (talk) 17:43, 18 March 2011 (UTC)

Porter Robinson
Please let me know any feedback you have on this page about a popular DJ. Thanks!

Nealslush (talk) 04:32, 17 March 2011 (UTC)

Sandyts2k/PEOPLECERT Group description of personnel certification, please davice is useful and if references work
Sandy ts2k (talk) 11:08, 17 March 2011 (UTC)

Sandy_ts2k/PEOPLECERT Group
Sandy ts2k (talk) 12:14, 17 March 2011 (UTC)

[[Sandy_ts2k/Peoplecert_Group]
Sandy ts2k (talk) 12:18, 17 March 2011 (UTC)

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Fireburst_(video_game)
Please review this article and approve if accurate.

Thanks!

Sjohnson5 (talk) 18:36, 17 March 2011 (UTC)

User:Socrates32/Aegir_Hosting_System
This is a brief description of a software project that has been around for a number of years, and has achieved sufficient maturity to warrant a 1.0 release. Since this is my first submitted article, I have kept this in my sandbox for the time-being.

Also, for the sake of transparency, I go by 'ergonlogic' in the Drupal (and thus Aegir) community. I am a junior contributor to the project, and work for one of the organizations (Koumbit, a non-profit, btw) who are amongst those leading this community project. I have carefully read the WP:COI page, and don't feel that I am contravening any of those guidelines.

Thanks in advance for your feedback and guidance.

Socrates32 (talk) 21:06, 17 March 2011 (UTC)