Wikipedia:Requests for feedback/2011 March 9

Lasha Darbaidze
-- Melissarollins (talk) 01:40, 9 March 2011 (UTC)
 * Copyright problem. -- Uzma Gamal (talk) 03:46, 10 March 2011 (UTC)

Tails to Tell Animal Rescue Shelter Ltd.
This article is about an animal shelter that started in my local area.

Courtneyke (talk) 03:12, 9 March 2011 (UTC)
 * Sadly already marked for probable deletion. If you can find some publicity from a few sources suggesting that this shelter is particularly notable, re-create it on your user space as suggested on your user talk page. Otherwise be satisfied to support it as a meritorious undertaking. Tkotc (talk) 06:42, 9 March 2011 (UTC)

User:Kickyandfun/Gabrielle Bernstein
Submitting a request for feedback for self-help author and motivational speaker Gabrielle Bernstein. Thanks!

Kickyandfun (talk) 03:33, 9 March 2011 (UTC)


 * I'm happy to see you using sources that are not connected to Gabrielle Bernstein. That will go a long way to keep the article from being deleted. You may want to use the cite templates for books, newspapers, journals, websites, etc. You'll want to beef up the quantity of text (see the search for box to the right to find more source material). -- Uzma Gamal (talk) 04:23, 10 March 2011 (UTC)

User:Kyriasabin/Ron_Fletcher
I would like this article reviewed prior to adding it to wikipedia. Please note any major concerns so i can modify them prior to submitting this article.

Kyriasabin (talk) 04:29, 9 March 2011 (UTC)


 * Wikipedia covers topics that have been noticed to a significant degree by sources that has no significant connection to the subject. See WP:N. Since most of the material in your draft article seems to come from sources connected to Ron Fletcher, the article as written does not come across as one for which Wikipedia would want to provide coverage. I suggest removing the material from the article that is from sources connected to Ron Fletcher and develop the article from reliable sources that are independent of Ron Fletcher. Also, Wikipedia itself should not be used as a reference. -- Uzma Gamal (talk) 04:37, 10 March 2011 (UTC)

Ambadas Saidu Shinde
I am sending this article about my father who has been doing work for the small backward children & widows and also dalits who has been sufferings caste discrimination in Maharashtra.Many cases has been in courts(Indian legal system) to fetch the justice for this suffered people.He has been awakening people to educate with his weekly Bandakhor.He has been lead & participated many agitation march & hunger strikes for the sake of downtrodden people of Maharashtra,India. -- Zorbabuddha007 (talk) 10:13, 9 March 2011 (UTC); 180.188.228.114 (talk) 08:50, 9 March 2011 (UTC)

Firemen and Deckhands' Union of New South Wales
This is my first Wikipedia article, and any feedback would be much appreciated. Thanks.

Warrenjs1 (talk) 10:45, 9 March 2011 (UTC)
 * Looks good. Nice use of solid references. You may want to use the cite templates for books, newspapers, journals, websites, etc. List it at Template talk:Did you know (before the five days expire) to get it listed on the main page. -- Uzma Gamal (talk) 04:44, 10 March 2011 (UTC)

User:Kerrydpain/Black_n_Beard_Radio
This is my first article, please help me get it published as i am new to this! -- Kerrydpain (talk) 11:31, 9 March 2011 (UTC)

KingdomQuest
I would appreciate any feedback on this article.

Ossih (talk) 11:36, 9 March 2011 (UTC)


 * Wikipedia covers topics that have been noticed to a significant degree by sources that has no significant connection to the subject. See WP:N. Since most of the material in your article seems to come from sources connected to the game (information comes from the game itself), the article as written does not come across as one for which Wikipedia would want to provide coverage. -- Uzma Gamal (talk) 05:07, 10 March 2011 (UTC)

User:roryfellinghamwebb/babyballet classes
This is my first article and wondered whether it would be accepted!

Roryfellinghamwebb (talk) 14:53, 9 March 2011 (UTC)
 * You're on the right track by using sources that are not connected with babyballet.co.uk. Continue to avoid using blogs, websites, babyballet.co.uk, and press releases. There seems to be plenty of source material from which to develop the article. Bulk up the article and put the references in cite templates. Don't try to convey a message or image of babyballet.co.uk. Just write whatever the reliable sources say about babyballet.co.uk and put that in chrnological order. -- Uzma Gamal (talk) 06:11, 10 March 2011 (UTC)

It's Your Ship: Management Techniques from the Best Damn Ship in the Navy
Just want to verify that all information is entered correctly while I wait for verification.

Jcarter26 (talk) 15:04, 9 March 2011 (UTC)

User:Dawnmariegay/Tyler Jakes Moving my article
I would like to move this article to "live", but I have no move button and it has been four days since I created my account. How do I get this moved? Thanks. -- Dawnmariegay (talk) 15:10, 9 March 2011 (UTC)
 * IMDB is not a reliable source because anyone can edit IMDB (Wikipedia is not a reliable source for the same reason). You might want to add material from reilable sources not connected to Tyler Jakes before moving the article to project namespace. Once you are autoconfirmed (4 days, 10 edits), you should be able to move pages. Four days in your case would be 19:10, 11 March 2011 (UTC) -- Uzma Gamal (talk) 05:11, 10 March 2011 (UTC)

User:Wendyroseberry/BrianWhelan
Hi, grateful if you could see if the format looks okay and that the photos are all set to appear. I note only one photo is now showing up in my sandbox....Thanks!

Wendyroseberry (talk) 15:31, 9 March 2011 (UTC)


 * I fixed the links. Why would Brian Whelan give away his art for free? -- Uzma Gamal (talk) 05:32, 10 March 2011 (UTC)

User:Boalco/Section_50C_of_the_Isle_of_Man_Income_Tax_Act_1970
This is our first article about QROPS legislation in the Isle of Man. Are we on the right lines for an approved article?

Boalco (talk) 17:04, 9 March 2011 (UTC)


 * Looks like it's ready to be moved from user namespace to Wikipedia article namespace. There's no need for approval to move the article. I suggest focusing less on what the act says and focusing more on what others have written about the act. The name of the article probably could be shorter. For comparison see Income Tax Act article names. Also, there's Isle of Man Purchase Act 1765, Isle of Man Act 1958, Isle of Man (Customs) Acts. Per List_of_Acts_of_Tynwald, maybe just use Income Tax Act 1970 and develop that. -- Uzma Gamal (talk) 06:24, 10 March 2011 (UTC)

Income inequality in the Philippines
Hi! We're a group of students from the National University of Singapore. We're doing a short write up on a problem faced by a developing country. This is our submission!

the article is about the income inequality problem faced by the Philippines. we discussed one of the basic indicators of inequality in income distribution, the Gini coefficient, and roped in some statistics to prove our point that this problem is evident in the country.

Thank you! Andeousquek (talk) 17:31, 9 March 2011 (UTC)
 * I suggest using Income inequality in the United States as a pattern for the Income inequality in the Philippines article. -- Uzma Gamal (talk) 06:44, 10 March 2011 (UTC)

User:FauxClaud/Gait trainer
I would like this to be moved to a real page please. I beleive it meets all the requirements. Thank you! -- FauxClaud (talk) 17:59, 9 March 2011 (UTC)
 * I moved it to gait trainer. -- Uzma Gamal (talk) 07:11, 10 March 2011 (UTC)

Bill Barrett (sculptor)
I would like general feedback on this new article. Thanks!

Bbstudiosw (talk) 20:33, 9 March 2011 (UTC)

Seacoast Mavericks
This is a new article detailing the newly formed Seacoast Mavericks baseball team in New Hampshire. The team is a new addition to the Futures Collegiate Baseball League that comprises several teams from around New England. The Mavericks team is comprised of some of the top athletes from around the country. I am looking for general feedback about the layout and content. Thank you!

Seacoast2011 (talk) 21:22, 9 March 2011 (UTC)

User:MCHonline/Madera Community Hospital
I am trying to post this article. All three sources are reliable and the subject is notable. What is the next step? -- MCHonline (talk) 23:24, 9 March 2011 (UTC)
 * I moved it to Madera Community Hospital. -- Uzma Gamal (talk) 07:26, 10 March 2011 (UTC)