Wikipedia:Requests for feedback/2011 November 11

John Leonard Dober
New page on John Leonard Dober, one of the first Moravian missionaries to St. Thomas and one of the famous "Moravian Slaves". Is this article well written? Are the sources cited appropriately?

Fortpinepitch (talk) 04:33, 11 November 2011 (UTC)

Minced Pork Rice
Hi, all! I have written an article for the Taiwanese-style Minced Pork Rice. I've tried it, and found it delicious, so I decided to, and did write about it. Please verify the article, please ^_^

Rocprcr (talk) 14:41, 11 November 2011 (UTC)

Public housing in France
london uk,11.11.2011 i notice that there is an error:subject wikipedia public housing in france.it is habitation a loyer modere and not what is written in the article.thank you.youcef omrani.

87.194.70.8 (talk) 15:26, 11 November 2011 (UTC)

User:Paulmcanders/Ilovethebeach.com
Dear volunters of wikpedia

I am asking for you help on a project of mine. I am trying to post a page about a pronographic website called Ilovethebeach.com but my administrator Godo Dodo belives that I do not have enough news article sources for the page to be put on the main page so I will like to ask for your help on this subject and if anyone has a reliable source on which they can give to me I will be most thankful. To se the my work just please go to my User talk page :

User:Paulmcanders/Ilovethebeach.com

Thank you all so much.

Paulmcanders (talk) 15:37, 11 November 2011 (UTC)

History of the United States Army School of Advanced Military Studies
More coming in the article, but request new article review for tag removal. It shouldn't take long.

Airborne84 (talk) 19:38, 11 November 2011 (UTC)

User:Socialmedia2011/Angel.com
Hello, I work at a marketing firm representing Angel.com, and have fully disclosed my conflict on user:socialmedia2011. The last editor to work on the page was sleazy and got it salted. I've basically rewritten it. We have many links and sources for why Angel is notable, I'm just not sure how to show that in Wikipedia, and I'm not sure if I'm making a mistake that I don't even know about. I'd love advice on how to make this page Wikipedia worthy.

Socialmedia2011 (talk) 19:57, 11 November 2011 (UTC)

Jay Paterno
Please let me know what you think. No pressing concern, just wanted some feedback.

Go Phightins! (talk) 22:15, 11 November 2011 (UTC)

Chess With Friends
I created Chess With Friends and would appreciate it if another editor could review and appropriately remove the unreviewed tag. Thanks in advance.

JovanWelks (talk) 23:22, 11 November 2011 (UTC)