Wikipedia:Requests for feedback/2011 November 18

Susannah Heschel
Please review my article on Susannah Heschel. Thanks!

Dante8 (talk) 01:18, 18 November 2011 (UTC)

Divinity Roxx
Just looking for general feedback so I can get this thing published already. Thanks.

Divinity roxx (talk) 02:43, 18 November 2011 (UTC)

All Saints Episcopal Church (Chicago, Illinois)
I am curious about how I might be able to expand the article on the above church that I just finishing getting ready for the article mainspace. One thing I would like to expand is the church's history and architecture, but I'm pretty sure it's time to hit the library next because I think I have found all there is to find online. I am not sure about how much coverage about the congregation, the church staff, and their activities is appropriate for churches. For instance, I could feasibly add in a section about the church's staff, because they have appeared in non-trivial coverage in the news. There are several news stories about the church's rector vying for a California bishop position, and that some controversy arose over this because the rector is openly gay. But I think this begins to get away from an article about the church and more toward a BLP article. One other matter is organization-- I'd like a little feedback on how to organize the headers in articles about churches. It has been tough for me to think of ways to expand or otherwise improve the article because the current organization is how I've been thinking about the article.

I, Jethrobot drop me a line (note: not a bot!) 05:03, 18 November 2011 (UTC)

Poem on vegetarianism
Real politics, what do you think?

Holkapolka (talk) 09:33, 18 November 2011 (UTC)
 * Deleted as original research/writing, as were your other essays. Wikipedia is not the place to publish your original thought. See WP:NOR and WP:NOTHOST. NawlinWiki (talk) 12:28, 18 November 2011 (UTC)

Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/Hell On Wheels (episode)
Just putting it out there for opinions. Thanks in advance to all the reviewers!

CAWylie (talk) 12:19, 18 November 2011 (UTC)

Golden Oldies Plymouth
Please review this article.

194.176.105.150 (talk) 13:31, 18 November 2011 (UTC)

First Mile
Joeallen86 (talk) 16:09, 18 November 2011 (UTC)