Wikipedia:Requests for feedback/2011 November 23

User:Zacharymia/Stiefel Laboratories
I would like to get comments on the updates to my article. I would appreciate feedback on my current edits. Greatly appreciate your time!

Zachary Randles, Director, Global Digital Strategy, Stiefel a GSK company 04:43, 23 November 2011 (UTC)

User:Proger XP/UverseWiki
I have written a new article about one of my projects which is about wiki software written in PHP. This is not my first Wikipedia edit but as I'm one of the project authors I might not have been fully objective although I did add prooflinks and other proofs of notability I believe the project has. Is an article like this acceptable on Wikipedia? What should be corrected in order to publish it? Thanks in advance!

Proger XP (talk) 13:14, 23 November 2011 (UTC)


 * Marking as irrelevant. Proger_XP (talk) 14:10, 23 December 2011 (UTC)

Calvin C.J. Sia
Being a relatively new contributor to Wikipedia, I'm looking for more experienced contributors to make sure my use of references and footnotes in this biography is correct, both in terms of Wikipedia style and placement. Several sources of information have overlapping details and cover so much ground that I decided not to attach footnotes to the end of every sentence. Instead, I tried to use some discretion and added footnotes to the most significant assertions of fact or to major claims that might raise questions about sourcing.

Airsick656 (talk) 19:01, 23 November 2011 (UTC)