Wikipedia:Requests for feedback/2011 November 28

User:Shannonob90/PoolWerx
Hi, this page has previously been deleted and the moderator recommended that I get it drafted first. I am mainly enquiring to ensure that the page does not have to much of a promotional language to it.

Shannonob90 (talk) 01:47, 28 November 2011 (UTC)

User:Shannonob90/John O'Brien (PoolWerx)
Hi, this page has previously been deleted and I have been told by the moderator to get my changes checked through this system to ensure they do not have too much of a promotional focus. If you could inform me as to the quality of this content that would be great. Thanks!

Shannonob90 (talk) 02:26, 28 November 2011 (UTC)

Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/Trilogy: An Opera Company
Trilogy: An Opera Company is well sourced and documented and can be found easily on the websites of: "The Star Ledger," "The Positive Community Magazine," "The Amsterdam News," "Opera News," and "BET Magazine."

24.228.14.172 (talk) 03:47, 28 November 2011 (UTC)

User:Ryazdankhah/Karoon Petrochemical Company
Please review.

Ryazdankhah (talk) 09:05, 28 November 2011 (UTC)

Mary McCleary
Greetings. I have recently finished a very basic stub on contemporary American artist Mary McCleary. I would like someone to review the references to make sure I have formatted them correctly. The actual web site addresses do not show up under the References heading, only a number and the arrow/ link image. I am uncertain whether this is correct until an editor or bot retrieves the link as has already occurred with one of my citations, or if I should be formatting the refrences differently. Additionally, it would be nice if the box at the top with the verbiage about the article being new and unreviewed could be removed once someone looks it over. Also, I have posted a question in the "Discussion" section of the article about transporting images found online, as I would like to include an illustration or two of her work. What are the rules on using images of the artist's works? I often see warning messages on other wiki pages about using copyrighted images. Where can I find some guidelines on this so that I am not committing any type of copyright infringement? Thank you in advance for any guidance and assistance. Ryan D.

Norlns22 (talk) 10:45, 28 November 2011 (UTC)

User:Theshywillraindeath/Southern Trust Building
So, uh, I just wanted to ask what you guys think of this article! It will probably be deleted if I let it go now, so review it, and tell me what I can do! Thanks!

Theshywillraindeath (talk) 19:23, 28 November 2011 (UTC)

Reflections of Rosemary
Hello. Reflections of Rosemary is my second article on English Wikipedia (first was Atuda) - but the first that I wrote on my own (not as a translation). I'm not a native speaker, so I'd be glad if someone will review the article, also in grammer and style issues. I'm a regular contributor in Hebrew Wikipedia though, but I may not be familiar enough with English Wikipedia practices.

Tomer T (talk) 20:45, 28 November 2011 (UTC)

3D Pixel Racing
This is the second article I've written. I'm just looking for general feedback on the content and clarity.

16bitz (talk) 23:21, 28 November 2011 (UTC)