Wikipedia:Requests for feedback/2011 November 9

Eva, ganz mein Fall (German TV series)
Please review my article Eva, ganz mein Fall (German TV series). Thanks. My article is about a tv series, which was quite popular some years ago.

After it has been corrected, how can I submit my article, so that everyone can read it?

Auroradulci (talk) 17:12, 9 November 2011 (UTC)

Marc Reagan
Seeking feedback on my latest aquanaut article, which I had a bit more difficulty with than some of the others -- specifically, finding information on what Reagan is doing now. I have the impression that Reagan may no longer be working on the NEEMO project due to a paucity of recent references to him in connection with it. However, I can find no confirmation of this. I have attempted to avoid inaccuracy by using evasive phrases such as "has been his position" and "has subsequently supported multiple NEEMO missions". (Reagan has no LinkedIn profile that I could find.)

Gildir (talk) 17:47, 9 November 2011 (UTC)

Sharon Brous
Please review my article on Sharon Brous. Thank you.

Dante8 (talk) 18:18, 9 November 2011 (UTC)

User:Jtravlos/East Egg Realty
Hello all. I have created an my first article on wikipedia for an company called East Egg Realty. The company does not have a wikipedia page, and I do not work for them. I am just a very happy customer and have used them several times. And honestly have never found another Real Estate agency to have such good customer service. I would like to make sure that this meets all of wikipedias guidelines. Best, Jtravlos

Jtravlos (talk) 19:29, 9 November 2011 (UTC)
 * I've left a message on your Talk page. Sionk (talk) 04:08, 15 November 2011 (UTC)