Wikipedia:Requests for feedback/2011 October 10

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Monah_Li
has been unreviewed since August, would love it to be looked at. thanks!

68.123.224.203 (talk) 03:22, 10 October 2011 (UTC)

Barry Dunaway
Any help greatly appreciated. I am on deployment to Afghanistan and military server blocks a lot of resources.

Phaze1todd (talk) 03:27, 10 October 2011 (UTC)

Pakistani_clothing
The term Pakistani clothes refers to the ethnic clothing that is typically worn by individuals in the country of Pakistan and by the People of Pakistani descent. Pakistani clothes express the Culture of Pakistan, the Demographics of Pakistan and regional Cultures which include Punjabi Culture, Sindhi Culture, Balochi Culture, Pashtun Culture and Kashmiri Culture. Dresses in each regional culture reflect weather conditions, way of living and distinctive style which gives it a unique identity among all cultures.

Pakistani dressing has similarities with Indian dressing because of pre-partition culture which was shred by these nations for thousand years but the religious factor was always there which makes a difference. Pakistani dressing and culture is a part of Islamic Culture which is reflected in the dresses of Pakistani men and women.With the passage of time Pakistanis are adapting modern dresses and cultural clothing, especially in big cities.

"Here is a brief note of my contribution to this page and its link http://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Pakistani_clothing&oldid=454358533"

Syedusman (talk) 12:34, 10 October 2011 (UTC)

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Southern_Surgical_Arts
I've been added to speedy deletion. How can I make it more valuable to readers? I want it to present facts about the practice (which I think it does) but can't seem to get out of this deletion mode. Help?

JenniferDeal (talk) 14:40, 10 October 2011 (UTC)

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please tell me what I need to change or need to add something more... thank you

Rachel Shin (talk) 16:35, 10 October 2011 (UTC)

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Matthew_Rosenberg
Hi - I've written an entry for an American journalist who is gained some recognition for his work covering Afghanistan and Pakistan for The Wall Street Journal. Please let me know if you think there are any additions and/or deletions that would help improve the article. Thanks!

Ken1974 (talk) 18:57, 10 October 2011 (UTC)

Social clause
Please review the article. Thanks.

Polec8 (talk) 00:28, 11 October 2011 (UTC)