Wikipedia:Requests for feedback/2011 October 19

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Shajahan29/Silsila_qadri_sarwari#External_links
this page is about Silsila qadri sarwari india a spiritual chain more than 100000 of people in India following this spiritual  god Shajahan29 (talk) 03:13, 19 October 2011 (UTC)
 * To become a Wikipedia article, this will need to be written from a Neutral Point of View, and will need precise references to published sources to verify the claims made. Chiswick Chap (talk) 14:00, 19 October 2011 (UTC)

User:Dev-fire/Game_Downloader
i just need someone to overview the wiki page and see if it is easy to read and formatted correctly any feedback would be great before making it to a real wiki article. This wiki will be for a open source computer application i have been working on for a year now. Thank you for your time.

Dev-fire (talk) 18:11, 19 October 2011 (UTC)