Wikipedia:Requests for feedback/2011 October 23

Action of Tell 'Asur
The description of this operation was formerly on the Sinai and Palestine Campaign page. It has been re edited to a stand alone article as it was more complex and wide ranging, although of secondary importance.

Rskp (talk) 06:26, 23 October 2011 (UTC)

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Ivan_Dorschner
120.28.76.166 (talk) 07:08, 23 October 2011 (UTC)

Giles Duley
As a new editor I would appreciate comments about this page which has been written with input from the subject. I have attempted to remain as neutral as possible.

Thanks.

Dave.rusty (talk) 11:02, 23 October 2011 (UTC)

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Rory_Lewis_Photographer
Obsidian1212 (talk) 14:31, 23 October 2011 (UTC)

User:Askimwatt/Meka Robotics
I'm a novice Wikipedia article editor. Please help me know if this article needs any modification before being published on-line. Thank You.

Askimwatt (talk) 21:35, 23 October 2011 (UTC)

Zynga.org
I just created Zynga.org and would appreciate if another editor can review the page and if they see fit, remove the unreviewed page tag. Thanks in advance.

JovanWelks (talk) 21:55, 23 October 2011 (UTC) JovanWelks (talk) 21:55, 23 October 2011 (UTC)

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Peter_Consterdine
Theoallen (talk) 23:06, 23 October 2011 (UTC)