Wikipedia:Requests for feedback/2011 October 28

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/International_Seminar_of_Young_Tibetologists_(ISYT)
please can you suggest more links, and edit my page. thanks!

ISYTOxford (talk) 12:27, 28 October 2011 (UTC)

VAZ 2111
Please look through the article.. Give a general review... What should be added first? If you can, correct some mistakes... Write your ideas on the Talk-page of the article, and add some info to the article from other interesting sources. Thank you!

Komarov v (talk) 13:32, 28 October 2011 (UTC)

User:MSCS33172/Magaya Corporation
I made some revisions based on the first round of feedback (citations added, external links removed, logo image removed). An extra review would be appreciated.

MSCS33172 (talk) 14:17, 28 October 2011 (UTC)

Princeton Marketing Group
Any and all feedback is welcome and appreciated. How do I remove my username from the title of the article?

Allison Rubacky (talk) 15:30, 28 October 2011 (UTC)

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Allison_Rubacky/Princeton_Marketing_Group
Any and all feedback is appreciated. How do I remove my user name from the title of the article?

Allison Rubacky (talk) 15:32, 28 October 2011 (UTC)


 * You may want to read this FAQ about businesses and organizations before continuing to edit your page. §everal⇒|Times 21:13, 28 October 2011 (UTC)

Rajiv Gandhi National Cyber Law Center
Please review my page about the rajiv gandhi national cyber law center. Do tell me if you feel there's lack of something, since i'm new here. Thanks in anticipation.

rc 16:30, 28 October 2011 (UTC)

Tax Policy and Economic Inequality in the United States
Can someone please review my work and give me feedback in regards to tone, appropriateness of writing style, clarity, and organization? I realize that there are large gaps in information. The page will be comprehensively updated soon. I have all the information from reliable scholarly sources, I just need a little time to add it all. Feedback on errors or mistakes and how to correct them would also be awesome. Thank you!

128.42.162.148 (talk) 18:25, 29 October 2011 (UTC)