Wikipedia:Requests for feedback/2011 October 31

List of SFR Yugoslavia national rugby union players
Slavisa37 (talk) 09:32, 31 October 2011 (UTC)

Hello, I took a look at your article, and here are some issues I found:
 * The list should contain some references.
 * How are the links to other countries' Rugby Union websites relevant in your article?
 * All but one of the "dates first game obtained" are the same. It may be that they all debuted on the same day, though, I can't check because there are no sources.
 * The sentence "date first game obtained" doesn't look right. Do you mean "first game played"?
 * For dates, please use the format "31 July 1968", or see here
 * No articles in the mainspace links to your article, that means it's an orphan
 * There are two redlink templates in the See Also and References section, fix them or remove them
 * The whole introduction paragraph is bolded, only the name of the article should be

Zidanie5 (talk) 16:26, 2 November 2011 (UTC)

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Victor_V%C3%A1zquez
Review a new article

Josueben (talk) 13:26, 31 October 2011 (UTC)

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Pining_Wind#References
Will someone review my posting on Pining Wind Summary?

JnHmtno (talk) 14:00, 31 October 2011 (UTC)

Hardy Diagnostics
Hey all. I'm a fairly experienced editor, but Hardy Diagnostics was my first actual article. There are plenty of Google-able references--I've got three so far, but could use some help with further wikification and maybe expanding the article a bit. Thank you kindly!

AlexHOUSE (talk) 16:42, 31 October 2011 (UTC)

User:Addyer/TheSeKondElement
I'm trying to make this not sound so much like a biography. Thanks!

Addyer (talk) 01:58, 1 November 2011 (UTC)