Wikipedia:Requests for feedback/2011 September 18

Robert Kaleski and Halls Heeler
Two new articles, originally expanding on information in Australian Cattle Dog but both are linked from a number of Wikipedia articles. Looking to have the "unreviewed article: template removed.

Marj (talk) 01:26, 18 September 2011 (UTC)

Bob Curnow
Please review this new article and please make any constructive comments needed.

"Bob Curnow"

Jcooper1 (talk) 02:02, 18 September 2011 (UTC)

Don Raffell
Please review article so to remove tag, please make any constructive comments as needed.

THANKS!

Jcooper1 (talk) 02:04, 18 September 2011 (UTC)

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Jervis_Bay_Marine_Park
Review on our new article very welcome. Thanks.

GSE807JBMP (talk) 02:13, 18 September 2011 (UTC)

User:Lord Vargonius/SS Mataafa
My first article, want to make sure that someone tells me what needs doing before I move it out into the encyclopedia. I am open to advice. Also, I am aware that images would be helpful, but I can't find any freely available ones, and taking pictures of a ship that was scrapped forty years ago is out of the question. If anyone could find some, they would be much appreciated.

184.158.85.21 (talk) 03:35, 18 September 2011 (UTC)

User:Toblerone666/Dave Daniel G. Coles
Is it okay? Reliable enough?

Toblerone666 (talk) 05:36, 18 September 2011 (UTC)

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Boomvavavoom/Martin_Montiel
boomvavavoom (talk) 08:14, 18 September 2011 (UTC)

User:Speziale78/Twisted geometries
The article is on some work I have been involved with in my own area of research, which is the approach to quantum gravity known as Loop Quantum Gravity. This work is now proving quite useful to researchers in the area, and the basic notions might find applications outside of it. A brief Wikipedia article could be a good starting point for interested people, and point to relevant references. This is the way I often use Wikipedia, and I would like feedback on whether my article is appropriate for this goal. Thanks.

Speziale78 (talk) 10:05, 18 September 2011 (UTC)

List of reptiles of Morocco
Please review the list (so I can remove the tag) and help me to expand it. Here is the source where you can find all the species: http://geres-asso.org/amphibiens_et_reptiles_du_maroc.html

thanks. Vincent Shooter 13:52, 18 September 2011 (UTC)

Timeline of women in American dentistry
Please review my article timeline of women in American dentistry. Thanks. Dante8 (talk) 19:56, 18 September 2011 (UTC)
 * Merge into timeline of women in dentistry. &mdash; RHaworth 12:31, 20 September 2011 (UTC)

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Robert_H._Meltzer
I am struggling to find on-line sources to validate artist Robert H. Meltzer's military service records, as well as his receipt of degrees from Southern Methodist University (SMU) and the University of Hawaii. Is it acceptable to cite to papers held in private collections (e.g., his spouse's copy of his service records)? If I were preparing a book, I'd use citations to primary source material...but realize that Wikipedia users may prefer sources to which they can refer without having to contact a private individual. In addition, U.S. military service records apparently are released only to the individual or next-of-kin, so a general reference to Navy archives wouldn't do the trick because no one else could check.

Your suggestions and leads are greatly appreciated.

Wikipedia community members have been uniformly gracious and helpful, and all the guidance pages are wonderful. I hope I'll be able to assist others as I become more familiar with Wikipedia.

Txn2VA (talk) 02:47, 19 September 2011 (UTC)