Wikipedia:Requests for feedback/2011 September 22

The History of the Art Institute of Seattle
This article is about the History of the Art Institute of Seattle. Please we really need reviews and feedback! Every little bit helps.

Jewelle01 (talk) 00:11, 22 September 2011 (UTC)

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Hi all! would appreciate feedback on my first article! Thank you!

Sofia 01:24, 22 September 2011 (UTC)

Assa Hougoud
I just need someone yo verify my page for me. Im trying to add pages on a lot of South American and African cities and villages as they are greatly missing.

Andyham2 (talk) 03:21, 22 September 2011 (UTC)

John Griffith (Conservationist, C1)
I know that the Article now is too short, but I will add more information in from time to time.

John Griffith is a Supervisor who works at the California Conservation Corps (CCC) as a C1. I was working with him during 2005 to 2007 at the Ukiah CCC and was under his supervision. He moved to the CCC Fortuna Center located in norther of California in 2007. Over the years since he has been a Supervisor at the Corps, he has helped so many hundreds of young rerouted their course of lives - I was one of them. Now I really appreciate what he had made me become!

Below is a webpage where John can be verified: http://www.eelriver.org/Spring%2006/citykids.html Thank You!

Hohyhoho (talk) 04:22, 22 September 2011 (UTC)

IdeaPad Y Series
Hi,

I just completed the IdeaPad Y Series page and moved it to live Wikipedia, but it still has the new unreviewed article tag. I'd appreciate anyone taking a look at the page and removing the tag if the content is ok.

Trevor coelho (talk) 04:25, 22 September 2011 (UTC)


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 * Article is okay. Citations were impressively indulgent, but unnecessarily over-placed. I have copy-edited them into a format that is more appropriate but without loss of referencing.

User:Henriwrites/eSecureData
This is an article for a hosting provider based in Canada, eSecureData. The company is notable as it has received awards for being a top hosting company and for their innovative customized server racks that are found in no other data center in the world. eSecureData's data centre is a state-of-the-art facility that is one of the largest in Canada.

Henriwrites (talk) 10:06, 22 September 2011 (UTC)

Boolfight
Boolfight is an indie rock band from Paris, France. This article is providing a short description of the band's activity since it's creation.

Oldbolddriver (talk) 13:59, 22 September 2011 (UTC)

Maryland Blue Crab Young Reader Award
Hi,

I've written a page on the Maryland Blue Crab Young Reader Award, and since the page is new and unreviewed, it has a template mentioning that at the top. I'd appreciate if someone could take a look at it and remove that template.

Thank you!!

Yardslippers (talk) 17:41, 22 September 2011 (UTC)

Maryland Blue Crab Young Reader Award
This is an article on the Maryland Blue Crab Book award. Thanks for taking a look at it. Sorry it's in here twice. I only need it reviewed once:)

Yardslippers (talk) 17:43, 22 September 2011 (UTC)

User:MSackler/ApartmentList
I would like to receive feedback about my ApartmentList user page. I would love to know how I can change this page to fit with the Wikipedia guidelines.

Msackler (talk) 18:21, 22 September 2011 (UTC)

User:JanetteDoe/Mike_Spalding
Please review for correct formatting, citations & copyright, also any other suggestions for improvement.

JanetteDoe (talk) 19:03, 22 September 2011 (UTC)

User:Austex/Donald G. Martin (Austin, Texas)
Looking for feedback to improve this WP:COI, WP:BLP autobiographyWP:AUTO. Specific edits or comments are welcome. The item will remain in subspace until there has been sufficent editing and/or commentary.

 Austex •  Talk  19:08, 22 September 2011 (UTC)

Request for feedback on Cochran's C test
I have experience in writing reports and procedures, but not in contributing to Wikipedia. I reckoned it would be wise to make sure if "my" article meets expectations. It is a short article, so it should not take long to check it out.

Rtlam (talk) 19:13, 22 September 2011 (UTC)

Mohamed Alanssi
Brand new article about a FBI informant involved in over 20 terrorism-related cases. Major case was against a Yemeni sheik who was sentenced to 75 years, although the case was overturned several years later. Alanssi is also well known for setting himself on fire outside the White House on November 15, 2004.

Mnnlaxer (talk) 19:36, 22 September 2011 (UTC)

Paul Hill (flight director)
This is the first time I have requested feedback about an article that I did not create myself; however, I have done extensive work on the article. I would appreciate it if someone could determine whether or not the sources I have added establish Hill's notability, enabling the "general notability guideline" template to be removed.

Gildir (talk) 20:57, 22 September 2011 (UTC)

User:JanetteDoe/Kasma Babcock
Please review for correct formatting, citations & copyright, also any other suggestions for improvement.

JanetteDoe (talk) 21:27, 22 September 2011 (UTC)

rhythmic gymnast Julie Zetlin
Hello, this is a feedback request for improvements to an article on U.S. rhythmic gymnast Julie Zetlin. I have added an infobox; wikified terms; rewritten the lede; and improved citations. I would like to request that this article be reviewed, with an eye toward whether the wikification tag can be removed. Thanks so much.

Seandalytx (talk) 22:06, 22 September 2011 (UTC)

User:TheSpineCollection/The_Sweet_Escape_(band)
I am new to editing/publishing and I was wondering how to add a "background information" section for this artist (origin, years active, label, website) and also a "members" section where I can list each member. If you go to another artist page you will see what i mean at the top right, below the picture.

TheSpineCollection (talk) 23:52, 22 September 2011 (UTC)

National_Health_Interview_Survey_(NHIS)
can an editor just take a quick glance and approve this article? it is not my first, and it's ready for publication! thanks

96.26.67.151 (talk) 04:13, 23 September 2011 (UTC)