Wikipedia:Requests for feedback/2011 September 23

User:TheTERMINALS/The_TERMINALS_(353rd)
This is my first edit for the initial entry for the band "the TERMINALS (353rd)".. any input would be greatly appreciated, thanks!

TheTERMINALS (talk) 02:17, 23 September 2011 (UTC)

Amazon Webstore
Please provide feedback.

Aojha (talk) 02:44, 23 September 2011 (UTC)


 * ✅  Ma &reg;&copy; usBr iti sh [talk] 22:56, 23 September 2011 (UTC)
 * Personally, I don't see the need for this to be in an article of its own - given that Amazon.com is the parent company, I think it should be merged into its article, probably under the "Products and services" heading, along with its other commercial services, or wherever works best. That way it doesn't become an orphaned article.

User:Akibalogh/Calpont
I'm trying to present an impartial view of the technology.. does this reflect it?

Akibalogh (talk) 03:13, 23 September 2011 (UTC)

Deposit Insurance System in Kazakhstan/Kazakhstan Deposit Insurance Fund
Please read my article and tell me whether it's well written or not.

Igorzagorskiy (talk) 09:44, 23 September 2011 (UTC)

Water Sensitive Urban Design
Please review our submission. We are a group of 4 students studying at for Masters degrees in environmental planning, science and management at Macquarie University, Sydney. Water Sensitive Urban Design(WSUD) is vital for sustainable development in Australia and hence the topic is important.

We would be keen to receive all feedback.

Karlschutte (talk) 10:42, 23 September 2011 (UTC)

U.S. vault champion McKayla Maroney
Hello, this is a request for feedback on an entry about the U.S. artistic gymnast and 2011 U.S. vault champion McKayla Maroney, who has just been named to the 2011 U.S. world championship gymnastics team. Your feedback will be much appreciated. Thanks.

Seandalytx (talk) 11:05, 23 September 2011 (UTC)

User:Jansenbassman/Tadesse Meskela
Is this sufficient?

Jansenbassman (talk) 11:59, 23 September 2011 (UTC)

User:Bdishler/Walter_McCormick
Please provide feedback on this page. There were 2 references that can be found online but not able to link directly to them. They are only on Microfiche and I'm not sure how WP handles that.

Bdishler (talk) 13:44, 23 September 2011 (UTC)

User:Contactintelligence/Cvent, Inc.
I've tried to make this listing neutral, how does it read?

Contactintelligence (talk) 20:21, 23 September 2011 (UTC)

User:Davina.R
Hi Admin,

I think this article is ready to be published. Can you look over any glaring errors and once you have done that, it's ready to be published. Thank you.

Domenico.y (talk) 20:52, 23 September 2011 (UTC)


 * ✅  Ma &reg;&copy; usBr iti sh [talk] 22:48, 23 September 2011 (UTC)
 * Reviewed and copy-edited - no further comments since last RFF (24 August).
 * Incidentally, RFFs are done by anyone, not just admins.

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Allisonellis (talk) 20:54, 23 September 2011 (UTC)