Wikipedia:Requests for feedback/2011 September 26

All About Animals
I was wondering if someone can please revw my page for me?

AllAboutAnimalsTV (talk) 00:30, 26 September 2011 (UTC)

Eboni Wilson
Just looking for a review of the article.

Mrs. EKW 02:09, 26 September 2011 (UTC)

Party finance in Germany
I would be interested in some general comments on the quality and wwiki-adequacy of my article. Thanke you in advance! user: KhnassmacherKhnassmacher (talk) 08:00, 26 September 2011 (UTC)

Khnassmacher (talk) 08:00, 26 September 2011 (UTC)

Touched (play)
I have written a new article about this play by Stephen Lowe. I believe I have used reliable sources - referenced in the article - and followed the principle of neutrality.

However, I do have a potential conflict of interest: I have known Stephen Lowe since about 1984, and I have been friends with him for much of that time.

However, I have also seen at least four different productions of Touched (the play) - including the 1981 Royal Court production, before I ever met Stephen - and I have read the play many times. Therefore, I believe I can write authoritatively about the play.

But, if possible I think someone should check the article to ensure it meets Wikipedia's standards.

Skeowsha (talk) 12:26, 26 September 2011 (UTC)

User:Nativeamericanchurchwhite/Wm Jack Hranicky, RPA
I would like to move this article live to Wikipedia, but am having difficulty using the move tool. If you have no objections to the article and have the ability, would you mind moving it for me or giving me authority to move it live. Thank you. Rene' White Owner Native American Church of Virginia

Nativeamericanchurchwhite (talk) 14:17, 26 September 2011 (UTC)

User:Adam Silverstein2/Onyx pharmaceuticals
I am working with my client, Onyx Pharmaceuticals, on a Wikipedia page about the company. Would greatly appreciate feedback on the draft, especially with regards to references outside existing Wikipedia pages. Thank you.

Adam Silverstein (talk) 14:18, 26 September 2011 (UTC)

Tonbridge Half Marathon
I would like feedback on my article and for this to go live.

Lauren.swatton (talk) 14:35, 26 September 2011 (UTC)

Tom Cullen
All info is correct with reliable sources. I just wanted to have the page read over for structure.

195.56.77.112 (talk) 14:57, 26 September 2011 (UTC)

User:Viforpharma/Vifor Pharma
Short overview of Vifor Pharma. Article already available in German. Thanks for approving and posting.

Viforpharma (talk) 15:43, 26 September 2011 (UTC)

User:Rvsuvarna/Black Dot Vodka
I have updated the artice with all the references and would like general feedback before pushing it live. Thank you.

Rvsuvarna (talk) 15:52, 26 September 2011 (UTC)

Louella D. Everett
This is my first contribution; please review content and source format for publication. Thank you.

Chcoki (talk) 17:55, 26 September 2011 (UTC)

User:PiedmontArts/Piedmont Arts Association
This article details the history and program offerings of Piedmont Arts Association in Martinsville, Virginia.

PiedmontArts (talk) 18:05, 26 September 2011 (UTC)

User:Cmogle/Delice d'argental
This page is a new page for a relatively unknown cheese in Europe. It has limited online references except for commercial sites offering to sell/distribute the cheese.

CMOgle (talk) 18:21, 26 September 2011 (UTC)

User:Brookssrb/Sheila_Brooks
Requesting review in order to allow this post to go live. Subject is Sheila Brooks, prominent woman entrepreneur in Wahsington, DC.

Brookssrb (talk) 18:53, 26 September 2011 (UTC)

User:Megan.thedigilove/Interstate (Mike Burns & Mark Lewis)
Need help with moving this article so it appears published on the web.

Megan.thedigilove (talk) 20:11, 26 September 2011 (UTC)

User:Mpdtwitter/Northwestern University Master of Product Design and Development
Wanting to submit re: MPDD, a top 30 design program in the world per BusinessWeek. Informational in nature. Thanks

Mpdtwitter (talk) 21:17, 26 September 2011 (UTC)

User:Shawmjennings/Colonel Payne Jennings, Jr.
The above referenced article is a military autobiography for Colonel Payne Jennings, Jr. I welcome a critique or any comments that will make this article acceptable to wikipedia.

Shawmjennings (talk) 00:08, 27 September 2011 (UTC)