Wikipedia:Requests for feedback/2011 September 28

User:Stuart_mcd/alliancemedia
Request Feedback

Stuart mcd (talk) 07:04, 28 September 2011 (UTC)

User:Jenny838/Na Lei Hulu I Ka Wekiu
I'm brand new to Wikipedia and just wrote my first article. I'm unclear on what the review process is in order for it to get published. Can someone please take a look and help me publish it, assuming it's in good shape? Thanks so much!

Jenny838 (talk) 07:36, 28 September 2011 (UTC)

King John's Palace, King's Clipstone, Nottinghamshire
Hi there,

I am seeking peer review for this article. It is an introduction to an archaeological and historical site in north-west Nottinghamshire called King John's Palace. Formerly the site was known as the King's Houses, and was a medieval royal palace of the English monarchy. The article is an edited version of a piece submitted as a project design for Channel 4's Time Team and has the full permission of this organisation to be uploaded to Wikipedia. The author is a recognised and published expert on the site and has worked on both the history and archaeology of Medieval Clipstone for over 8 years.

Regards.

James Wright

JPWarchaeology (talk) 09:21, 28 September 2011 (UTC)

User:Shwetasharma151/traveltriangle.com
i have written this article to provide information about a web-based portal that helps people plan their holiday trips. the service is free of cost to the travelers. the portal brings together local travel agents and they present their offers/ quotes to the travelers in accordance with the traveler's choice of destination. this gives the latter a chance to compare online,in one go the deals available and choose the ones best suited to him. i wish that the article is approved as soon as possible and can be up on wikipedia.

Shwetasharma151 (talk) 10:50, 28 September 2011 (UTC)

Holdover in Synchronization Applications
Please let me know if this article meets the guidelines for submission. This is meant to be part of a set of collected concepts discussing timing and synchronization in telecom applications. I noticed there are some articles that mentions holdover but don't really explain it, so that's what I tried to do here.

Pjdm6842 (talk) 12:24, 28 September 2011 (UTC)

Charles Bradley M.D.
Please review.

Hippypaul 12:28, 28 September 2011 (UTC)

Discovery and development of integrase inhibitors
This is project made of 5th year pharmacy students in the University of Iceland. We would like a review on it, please.

Thank you.

Hopur3 (talk) 13:26, 28 September 2011 (UTC)

Discovery and Development of Renin Inhibitors
We're requesting an assessment of our wikipediapage as a part of the wiki project Pharmacology.

Hopur2 (talk) 13:47, 28 September 2011 (UTC)


 * This RFF page is normally for basic feedback on new articles. If you want a proper WikiProject Pharmacology assessment, you need to make the request at: WikiProject Pharmacology/Assessment where they can review, assess and grade the article in more detail. From the looks of it, that is quite an involved article, and would be best reviewed by them anyway, as they'll have more experience in understanding such material.

 Ma &reg;&copy; usBr iti sh &#91;Talk]&#91;RFF] 17:21, 28 September 2011 (UTC)

Nickola Shreli
1st time poster on this website, how do i add photo of him as well? i working part-time as Nickola's Publicisist. I have notable websites/pictures of his work.

please email me with any feedback. - ashkreli12@yahoo.com

Ashkreli12 (talk) 14:25, 28 September 2011 (UTC)

User:Ulticrow/EasyGoingSurvey
Would like general review on article before submitting it for official entry. I believe it was created in a factual manner, without promoting the products (as I used the Wiki pages of similar services as examples) and would like for someone to make sure this article appears factual and impartial.

Ulticrow (talk) 15:05, 28 September 2011 (UTC)

Way2SMS.com
Once a page was deleted called 'Way2SMS under WP:CSD, I am not aware who created that article. This website is a popular website atleast in India. You can go through the article and review it. Thank you.!!

Karthik Nadar (talk) 15:11, 28 September 2011 (UTC)

superpowerless
Hey, I edited together this article about Superpowerless, emailing his questions to fact check everything and make sure it was all accurate. I hope everything is referenced correctly and fine! Thanks a lot!

AngryBirdLol (talk) 16:37, 28 September 2011 (UTC)

Dhilip Varman Wikipedia page
Hie there... first time posting a page. Please share or advice on how to add Picture with a summary on the right. Also how do i get others to review this article ?

Dilan10 (talk) 16:40, 28 September 2011 (UTC)


 * ✅  Ma &reg;&copy; usBr iti sh &#91;Talk]&#91;RFF] 17:12, 28 September 2011 (UTC)
 * Use Infobox musical artist to create an infobox, add the picture link against the image= parameter.
 * Once ready, create a new Request for Feedback request and await a review reply.
 * Current state of article needs references, please note.
 * Please make sure the picture, if being uploaded by yourself, has an appropriate copyright license.
 * Pages worth reading before continuing your article: WP:BLP (policy), WP:MUSIC (important), WP:CITE (required).
 * For info on styling the article, to wiki standards, please look at WP:MOS.

User:Jarmerson/John B. DuArte II
I would like my article to be reviewed. What are the next steps to getting it published in the public domain?

Thanks in advance,

Jarmerson (talk) 18:32, 28 September 2011 (UTC)

User:Foster75/Kedric H. Cecil, Ph.D.
would like feedback as this is my first article

Foster75 (talk) 18:57, 28 September 2011 (UTC)

User:AJElias/"Big" Paul Williams
Paul Williams is an important figure in Bluegrass music my resources are verifiable. I'd like to get this article published.

AJElias (talk) 19:19, 28 September 2011 (UTC)

User:Filmir/Румен Иванчев
There are no reliable sources on internet I'm using only paper and human sources - his books and people who know him

Filmir (talk) 20:11, 28 September 2011 (UTC)


 * ✅  Ma &reg;&copy; usBr iti sh &#91;Talk]&#91;RFF] 21:27, 28 September 2011 (UTC)
 * Is that Russian? If so, it needs to be created on http://ru.wikipedia.org/ and an optional English translation on this, the English version of Wikipedia WP:ENGVAR.

User:Jtmickmge/MGE_Energy
How do I become authorized to add our holding company logo to this page and, as a work in progress page, how do I move it to published once I get to that point? (I published the Madison Gas and Electric page back in July, but didn't do it in a User-Work In Progress framework). Aah, another request from a Noob, I know. Your indulgence is appreciated.

Jtmickmge (talk) 21:13, 28 September 2011 (UTC)

User:Kakwrite/Andrew Ryan
The article is about American author Andrew Ryan, his education, work history, life history, influences, etc. It also discusses the books he has written. Please let me know if there are any changes that need to be made so that the article can be placed correctly in Wikepedia. Thank you! Kelly Tomkies

65.60.255.209 (talk) 22:50, 28 September 2011 (UTC)

User:Joeymcortina/Crispin Oben
CRISPIN OBEN (January 7, 1876 – August 29, 1947) was born in Lumban, Laguna, Philippines Joeymcortina (talk) 01:33, 29 September 2011 (UTC)


 * ✅  Ma &reg;&copy; usBr iti sh &#91;Talk]&#91;RFF] 01:46, 29 September 2011 (UTC)
 * Needs some reliably sourced references cited.
 * You need to establish notability per biography guidelines.
 * Please use his name just once at the start, in bold, but not in CAPS.
 * Not sure what the See also link is for, as the article is non-existent.

The History of the Art Institute of Seattle
Please review our article and give feedback

98.247.16.85 (talk) 06:44, 29 September 2011 (UTC)