Wikipedia:Requests for feedback/2011 September 30

Second Transjordan attack on Shunet Nimrin and Es Salt (1918)
I'd be grateful if someone could evaluate this article and give some feedback. Thanks a lot.

Rskp (talk) 04:56, 30 September 2011 (UTC)

Midnight Shift Records
A straightforward piece to add more weight to the Category: Singaporean record labels

Debbchia (talk) 10:52, 30 September 2011 (UTC)

Porin Response: Osmoregulation in E.coli
This article discusses about the regulation of OmpB operon in Escherichia coli, which plays an extremely important role in osmo-regulation in the organism.

Vinaylathi (talk) 11:19, 30 September 2011 (UTC)

User:Haney.ry/sandbox
Article about humorist, writer and journalist Henry Alford.

Haney.ry (talk) 12:51, 30 September 2011 (UTC)

Kim Bell Jr.
I am again looking for review and clearance. Mr. Bell is notable and influential. Current online and print publication.

MzKris (talk) 15:49, 30 September 2011 (UTC)

AlgoSec
I'm requesting feedback on this new article. Please see also my notes on the Talk page. VeronicaBrownAtl (talk) 16:15, 30 September 2011 (UTC)

Lunar Swirls
This Wikipedia page provides information about what is known about the lunar swirls. It also summarizes the 3 leading theories of swirl formation.

Dr. Lunatic (talk) 16:20, 30 September 2011 (UTC)


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 * Looks okay to me, as is, however, you've written about a very complex subject, so I would advise you visit WP:ASTRONOMY in order to have it fully reviewed by those WikiProject members who may have more experience and knowledge to understand, verify, copy-edit and help make sure the material meets wiki standards, fully. Thanks.

User:Burrelle/The Georgia Security and Immigration Compliance Act
Burrelle (talk) 17:56, 30 September 2011 (UTC)

Heathen Beast
Article about a metal band from India. Have cited Rolling Stone and MTV reviews in addition to other heavy metal specific publications. Believe this is okay as a stub. Want it checked though to see if others agree.

BusyWikipedian (talk) 18:20, 30 September 2011 (UTC)

Kim Bell Jr.
Looking for someone to review this article and give feedback.

MzKris (talk) 20:21, 30 September 2011 (UTC)

Gay Dolphin Gift Cove
I'm not allowed to remove the tag myself.

Vchimpanzee ·  talk  ·  contributions  · 21:12, 30 September 2011 (UTC)

User:Dvsanborn/Innovative Laser Technologies
Thanks for taking time to review my wikipedia article about Innovative Laser Technologies.

Dvsanborn (talk) 22:20, 30 September 2011 (UTC)

User:Artmartxx/Mohammad Ali Talpur
Hello, I have written this article and I would like some feedback and guidance on this article. This is my first step to fulfill the gap of Pakistani Art on wikipedia, My aim is to creates articles on pakistani art and artists.

Artmartxx (talk) 22:48, 30 September 2011 (UTC)

User:Foddocs/Shadow Reduction Technology (SRT)
Please review this article. Thanks!

Foddocs (talk) 23:34, 30 September 2011 (UTC)