Wikipedia:Requests for feedback/2011 September 6

User:Guest aaron1/George W. Ashburn
Seeking general feedback and steps to go live, Thanks

Guest aaron1 (talk) 04:04, 6 September 2011 (UTC)

Andrzej Bart
I created this page and later modified it following another editor's feedback. I would appreciate more feedback and info on getting this page reviewed - a "new unreviewed article" template removed. Thank you.

Hannagil (talk) 05:54, 6 September 2011 (UTC)

[wikilink]] gold diggers of 1933 is not pre-code
just a note that gold diggers of 1933 is not pre-code it just was not strictly enforced yet

65.102.9.7 (talk) 06:28, 6 September 2011 (UTC)

Philosopher in Meditation
The article looks a lot better than yesterday, but I am new at this and would appreciate any comments on the form (for the content I will request a peer review). I will add more images as I learn how to do this. Thanks in advance.

Dr. J. Kauffmann 11:18, 6 September 2011 (UTC)


 * Note to reviewer: RFF added by.

IGD - Immobiliare Grande Distribuzione SIIQ SPA
Hi, I changed the reference on the page by adding information to enter, wondering if he could go well or if not if I could locate the points where I need to insert additional reference to validate the content .. Thanks in advance!

ODigitali (talk) 15:07, 6 September 2011 (UTC)

Pineapple Radio
This is my first article. Feedback, please?

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Dooziepower/Pineapple_Radio

Dooziepower (talk) 16:27, 6 September 2011 (UTC)
 * Speedy deletion of the article was requested as it doesn't meet any of the criteria for establishing notability listed at WP:WEB. I've deleted the article; if you'd like it to be reinstated in your userspace so you can work on it further please contact me via my talkpage. Please do read Notability_(web) though. Tonywalton Talk 23:04, 18 September 2011 (UTC)

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Nikita_Shetty/Strcasecmp and http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Nikita_Shetty/Strncasecmp
This is my first article.It is just an intro of the topic and I have tried to follow the instructions .Please help me to improve it.

Nikita Shetty(talk|contribs) 16:59, 6 September 2011 (UTC)

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Computer_Connection_of_Central_New_York
Linztanderson (talk) 18:02, 6 September 2011 (UTC)

Otto Neumann (Artist)
Do I need more than 6 sources for this article on Otto Neumann (Artist)?

This article is about the German Artist Otto Neumann (1895-1975). He was a 20th century German Expressionist, born in Heidelberg, Germany. He was the son of renowned professor of Romance Languages at the University of Heidelberg, Fritz Neumann. Otto married Hilde Rothschild. Neumann's art can be found in such museum collections as the Museum of Modern Art in New York (MoMA), the Art Institute of Chicago, Goethe Institute in Chicago, Tampa Art Museum, Portland Art Museum, Virginia Museum of Art, Gibbes Museum of Art in Charleston, South Carolina and in numerous museums in Europe.

Arthistorian93101 (talk) 18:45, 6 September 2011 (UTC)
 * Welcome to Wikipedia, and thank you for your first article. I've rewritten a few phrases that may have been too closely paraphrased from the source material.  See the discussion on the article's talk page, where another editor has expressed concerns.  I've also broken the article into sections and Wikified it a bit, linking to articles on topics you mention in your article.  I think that the six sources you've added are a good start.  Instead of adding more right now, I recommend that you should convert them into inline references (or footnotes) that support the various specific claims of fact in the article.  See Citing sources for guidance. It may also benefit from some direct quotations of a sentence or two from critics commenting on his work.  Direct quotes must be referenced.  If you need help formatting the references, feel free to ask questions on my talk page.   Cullen 328   Let's discuss it  20:46, 10 September 2011 (UTC)

User:Arthistorian93101/Otto Neumann (Artist)
This is my first article. It said that I was a blocked user. Please let me know what I need to do to get this article ready for posting

Arthistorian93101 (talk) 19:02, 6 September 2011 (UTC)

Ronald_Deibert
I have added new citation to the page. Hoping to get the issue of lack of citations for verification resolved. Please advise.

Thank you for your help.

Irenepoet (talk) 20:23, 6 September 2011 (UTC)

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Kate_O%E2%80%99Brien
This page is to summarize Kate O'Brien, her previous work, and her current work and research interests.

Barbjhsph (talk) 20:54, 6 September 2011 (UTC)

User:Lou.garay/I Had Cancer
I believe all is in order. If you (the wonderful wiki community) could provide me with any feedback to make this page perfect and prime for publishing it would be much appreciated.

Thanks, Lou.garay (talk) 20:54, 6 September 2011 (UTC)


 * ✅  Ma &reg;&copy; usBr iti sh [talk] 11:59, 13 September 2011 (UTC)
 * I see no major problems here - sources look okay; well cited.

User:NelsonRowe/Joseph_Jesselli,_Luthier
I recently began this article after seeing none existed.

I know the subject personally and have received information and photos from him. It should be fairly obvious he is a notable subject. My intentions are not to create a sales piece but an organic article that hopefully will grow with time.

I have numerous images of Jesselli guitars, images of Joseph Jesselli with Keith Richards and Jimmy D'Aquisto, and images of Richards holding a Jesselli guitar that I would like to include. I do not have privileges to upload images at this time.

My wiki markup is very novice. Since I am expert at few things I have never been inclined to create an article until now. While I am learning, I have no issues with someone more knowledgeable with markup to fix errors or make improvements. I do not want to own this.

The information provided is to my knowledge, true and uncontroversial.

thank you very much for any feedback or direct help.

BrooklynBrain (talk) 22:45, 6 September 2011 (UTC)

Chief69
pleas let me know if this is finished all of the information is correct i got from my reference... Chief69bxfrc (talk) 07:44, 7 September 2011 (UTC)