Wikipedia:Requests for feedback/2011 September 9

Newmarket Hill, Sussex
Hi, just started the beginnings of a new page on a popular hill near Brighton, Sussex. I rated this page as a starter as it is currently being created and is only at an early stage. A reference still needs to be found, new content added, and links to non-existant pages reviewed. My aim is for it to eventually help it become a high quality page in the Sussex Portal.

Davidc (talk) 09:06, 9 September 2011 (UTC)

PUser:Nevshupa/Mechanically Stimulated Gas Emission
Please, let me know your opinion on this modified article. I left several references to our own publications. This is not to provide ads of our work. The matter is that this topic is studied in only very few laboratories in the world. All the references cited have been published in peer review international journals and carefully examined by independent reviewers.

Nevshupa (talk) 09:19, 9 September 2011 (UTC)

User:JacobPoulsen/Danske_Commodities
This is my first article, so I would like to know if the sources provided is good enough. Thank you SO much for taking your time. JG (talk) 13:42, 9 September 2011 (UTC)

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/People_In_Aid
I would like general feedback on this article, but especially with regards to references,

Arthysk (talk) 14:07, 9 September 2011 (UTC)

Melanie_Killen
This is my first article and I'd appreciate a little feedback just to make sure it adheres to Wikipedia's guidelines. SMDRL (talk) 14:09, 9 September 2011 (UTC)

http://www.mt-online.com/component/content/article/295-june2011/1794-electrical-safety-sense-better-voltage-detection.html
Phil2331 (talk) 14:23, 9 September 2011 (UTC)

User:Phil2331/Voltage Portal
This is a new concept in electrical personnel safety that is becoming a practice in electrical and mechanical maintenance with industrial companies.

Phil2331 (talk) 14:41, 9 September 2011 (UTC)

Emily von Jentzen
Please review my article about Emily von Jentzen. Thanks. Dante8 (talk) 17:59, 9 September 2011 (UTC)

The Black Hole at The Center of The Universe I would like the article restored so I can work on it.
I would like my article restored, so that I can work on it - to make it more presentable to Wiki. At present I am entirely unable to access my article - it's like it's vanished into thin air. Can anything be done? Can I get some kind of response? My e-mail is 'astrocat0@gmail.com' if somebody there at wiki has a spare moment... Thanks, Peter Lamont 72.2.54.36 (talk) 19:40, 9 September 2011 (UTC)

User:Drewno/Onverse, LLC
Does it seem formatted right and stuff?

99.141.242.139 (talk) 19:43, 9 September 2011 (UTC)

User:LibandJustice/MyersMermel
Greetings,

I'm not very good at creating articles yet. I'd like to receive feedback on this article and see if it was created correctly. Any comments/concerns would be great. Thanks.

LibandJustice (talk) 22:22, 9 September 2011 (UTC)

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Jameswest6325/dynamic_network_factory
This is my first article on wikipedia and I want to make sure that all of my content is worded and cited correctly.

This article is about the company Dynamic Network Factory, a data storage manufacturer based in California. I would really appreciate any feedback. Thanks!

Jameswest6325 (talk) 23:26, 9 September 2011 (UTC)

Gunaritala
Sheikh rana (talk) 01:57, 10 September 2011 (UTC)