Wikipedia:Teahouse/Questions/Archive 893

First Article Feedback
I have been working on my first article, Historia Philippicae et Totius Mundi Origines et Terrae Situs and was hoping to receive some feedback before either transferring it to mainspace or sending it to AfC for a formal review.

The article is currently light on content, as much of the sources I seek are only available in hard form, but I believe it should meet the criteria for mainspace as it stands as a start class article. I do intend to expand the article when I get access to the hard documents, but that will not happen for a few months and I don't believe the article needs to linger in draftspace until then.

In particular, I was hoping to receive feedback on whether I should send it through AfC, as well as feedback on the general notability, content, prose and naming of the article as it stands. If you have suggestions on how the article could be expanded, that would also be greatly appreciated - for instance, I have noticed some articles on similar works cover the contents of the work in detail, chapter by chapter, and I am wondering if this would be an appropriate thing to do here, though I am not sure of the "encyclopedic" nature of such an undertaking.

NoCOBOL (talk) 10:22, 16 January 2019 (UTC)
 * I've done some cleanup on the draft; you can see what I did by looking at the diff of my edit in the draft's history. (In particular, you may want to see WP:REFNAME on citing the same source multiple times, and you may want to note the difference between principle and principal.) Looks like a good beginning. When you're ready to submit it, you can either insert the code at the top or move it to mainspace yourself. I don't think that covering "the contents of the work in detail, chapter by chapter" would be a good idea in this case. Deor (talk) 21:23, 16 January 2019 (UTC)
 * Thank you. I thought I had done something horribly wrong when I saw how many bytes you removed, but removing the extraneous references was a good idea - I will read up on WP:REFNAME so that I get it right in the future.
 * As for principle and principal... WP:OOPS. Thank you for correcting that.
 * I have, however, restored two elements. First, the item listing the language as Latin and Late Latin. I've provided a source for that claim now, as well as including a section expounding on why this is the case - I might at some later point expand that section to include a discussion of the influences on Trogus and Justin, in particular the question of whether the similarities between Tacitus and Justin are due to Tacitus influencing Justin or Trogus influencing Tacitus.
 * Second, I've restored a second reference to Watson's translation, as the current one leads to the preface, while the book the reference is referring to is XII. Is there a better way to do this, or are two citations needed in this case?
 * Anyway, thank you again for your hardwork cleaning that up.
 * NoCOBOL (talk) 05:39, 17 January 2019 (UTC)
 * Sorry about the Watson ref, but the two refs I combined were identical in the original version (i.e., both specified "Preface"). I think that in this case the two citations are OK. In some cases where many different pages of a source are cited, one can use a citation that doesn't specify a page number and add page numbers in rp after each ref. One can also use shortened citations after the first one, as, for example, I did in notes 3, 4, 7, 8, 9, and 11 in Thomas Blackburn (entomologist). Deor (talk) 20:39, 17 January 2019 (UTC)
 * No need to apologize, even if it wasn't the case that the mistake was mine. Thank you for the additional information on citations, I will remember it and use it in the future. --  No COBOL  (talk) 07:19, 18 January 2019 (UTC)

Replacement entry
I have read the Wikipedia entry on Joseph Forer (deceased US civil rights attorney during McCarthy era) and would like to submit a new entry, including corrections of errors and omissions in the current text. I am a DC attorney with access to his papers. How do I submit a replacement entry? Thanks! — Preceding unsigned comment added by 2600:387:3:805:0:0:0:79 (talk) 07:39, 17 January 2019 (UTC)


 * You can either make edits to the article yourself, supporting the content with references to published reliable sources independent of the subject, or you can use the article's talk page to propose changes, again supporting your proposals with those sources. We do not replace an existing article by a new entry, but make changes which are traceable in the article's history.  Bear in mind that private papers which have not been published are not acceptable sources for Wikipedia;  that would be classed as original research. --David Biddulph (talk) 07:49, 17 January 2019 (UTC)


 * OP, You made the same enquiry on the Help desk at 03:06 17 January, to which I posted an answer along the same lines as David Biddulph's at 04:10. Please do not Forum shop in the hope of getting an answer more to your liking as it wastes the time of those of us who answer, all of whom are unpaid volunteers, by causing duplication of effort. (Note that David and I both reside in the UK, and indeed in the same county, so we are both performing this service between midnight and normal working hours.) Instead, pursue a given discussion where it started if you need further clarification. {The poster formerly known as 87.81.230.195} 90.217.251.247 (talk) 00:51, 18 January 2019 (UTC)


 * The simple answer is, you don't. You are encouraged to make improvements to the existing article, preferably with references to published sources; and to discuss further improvements on its talk page. But if your plan is to write a new article and remove/delete/destroy the current one, it won't work. Maproom (talk) 09:06, 18 January 2019 (UTC)

Spell, punctuation and grammar check request
Hi,

Created a new article in my user sandbox. Looking for help in English language Spell-check, punctuation, grammar check and corrections. Thanks in advance.

Bookku (talk) 05:44, 17 January 2019 (UTC)


 * Hi, . I'm impressed by your sandbox article, and I think it's ready to be submitted for approval. I've made many small changes to punctuation etc. I have one question:
 * The article contains numerous mentions of the play's author, Rafeeq Mangalassery. Every time, it uses his full name. Is there a reason for this? It would be normal Wikipedia practice to use his full name on first mention, and just use his family name subsequently. I would have changed every instance of "Rafeeq Mangalassery" to "Mangalassery", but I'm not sure how names work in Kerala. Maproom (talk) 09:00, 18 January 2019 (UTC)

Hello,, Thanks for your proactive support and compliments. Also thanks for valuable suggestion regarding naming convention, a leading South Indian daily also seems to have used the same convention. Still I will try to confirm once more and act upon the same. It is very nice of you.

Thanks and warm regards Bookku (talk) 12:42, 18 January 2019 (UTC)

Collins Key
I noticed that Collins Key doesn't have a wikipedia page. I would like to help create one, and wanted to make sure a page like his would be acceptable. Please let me know when you have a moment. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Katjones333 (talk • contribs) 21:50, 15 January 2019 (UTC)


 * Hello, and welcome to the Teahouse! This Collins Key? . Maybe, but you need more (and preferably even better) sources like that. See WP:GNG, and if you want to give it a go, Your first article. Gråbergs Gråa Sång (talk) 22:25, 15 January 2019 (UTC)
 * Hello, . Welcome to the Teahouse. I'm afraid have no idea who or what Collins Key is. So, if you can supply some links to independent, Reliable sources that demonstrate clearly that the topic would meet our Notability criteria, then you stand a chance of creating an article on that person or thing, and we can offer some further comments. As you appear never to have edited here before, you might not feel confident yet to do that yourself. But if you were to try (and it's one of the hardest tasks for a new editor to achieve), you should read Your first article, and perhaps take the interactive tour to help you understand how Wikipedia works. You can find that tour at The Wikipedia Adventure. However, if you would like someone else to create that article, you could suggest it (and supply some useful links) at Requested articles, noting that we are all volunteers here and that it can take many years before someone decides that this might be a task for them. Does this help? Regards, Nick Moyes (talk) 22:27, 15 January 2019 (UTC)
 * Might I remind you of[ |WP Civility I checked your links and in my opinion some youtube sensation is hardly worth an article. That aside how can you state so boldly, as you did above that "I am afraid that you have no idea who or what Collins Key is". On what basis can you make such a remark? Mind reader?Oldperson (talk) 23:11, 17 January 2019 (UTC)
 * , I'm 99.9% certain that (who is unfailingly helpful and kind in response to new editors' questions) meant "I am afraid that I have no idea". He typo'd by omitting "I" but he did not type "you have no idea". Schazjmd (talk) 23:17, 17 January 2019 (UTC)
 * Oops, my bad sincere apologies. Lesson learned. Slow down and reread. I obviously have a problem with comprehension. A form of dyslexia it seems. I am reading things into comments. You are correct about Nick Moyes and his efforts to be helpful. Where is my hair shirt and bullrushes? Oldperson (talk) 23:26, 17 January 2019 (UTC)
 * Until you posted what you thought it said, I didn't even realize the sentence was missing a word, so I guess I was "reading into it" too. :) Schazjmd (talk) 23:33, 17 January 2019 (UTC)

, apparently also mistyped, not realizing how he was coming across. I certainly demonstrated a lack of confidence in my own judgement, when I accepted yours, and you did a turn about faster than the speed of sound. Fact is I am sensitive to any apparent lack of civiity, or an appearance of  arrogance on the part of experienced editors and admins and have been called out myself on my first and hopefully only other outburst to a fellow newby After all we are mere humans, we get tired, exasperated with answering the same old questions time and again, but we volunteer and that comes with its own toolkit, obligaitions and disabilities. Cheers and thanks for the wake up.Oldperson (talk) 23:50, 17 January 2019 (UTC)
 * I hadn't noticed I'd missed 'I' off, either, until I saw the ping. I am sorry if that innocent ommisson subsequently caused you confusion. But no harm done, and useful lessons learned perhaps, including the merit of copying and pasting quotes to ensure no accidental change of meaning? I appreciate Schazjmd springing to my defence. But, Oldperson, I do actually agree with your concerns, and it is incumbent on all experienced editors, not just Teahouse hosts, to be polite and especially welcoming to all new editors here. After all, they each have the potential to evolve into the wise editors of tomorrow. Regards Nick Moyes (talk) 14:17, 18 January 2019 (UTC)

Question about my Wikipedia page
Hello, Several people whom I do not know wrote a Wikipedia page about me Lisa Collier Cool in 2013 without my knowledge with mostly accurate information from published sources. In 2018, I noticed that the page incorrectly listed me as the author of a book I had not written, so I deleted that book. This year, I added a link to the page of a doctor I cowrote a book with 5 years ago. Other than those very minor edits, more than 98% of the material on the page about me has been written or edited by people who have no connection of any kind with me, as can be confirmed by reviewing the edit history.

Now the page is incorrectly listed as "autobiography." If it was improper to make any edits to the page about me, I apologize and someone else can remove the link to my book coauthor's page if you feel that is necessary. I will not make any further edits to the page. Thank you!

Lisa Collier Cool — Preceding unsigned comment added by Lwcollier (talk • contribs) 4:54, 18 January 2019 (UTC)
 * Hi . Welcome to the Teahouse. It's probably best if you think about the article as "an Wikipedia article written about you" instead of "my page" because the latter might be mistaken for some kind of claim of ownership. Since a Wikipedia article can technically be edited by anyone anywhere in the world at anytime, no one single person "owns" the article so to speak, and disagreements over article content, etc. are expected to be resolved in accordance with Wikipedia:Dispute resolution and Wikipedia:Consensus. A Wikipedia article can be created by anyone about any subject as long as the subject is deemed to be notable enough by Wikipedia's standards to support a stand-alone article; moreover, permission of the subject is not really required for an article to be written. My guess is that the creator of the article felt that you satisfied Wikipedia:Notability (people) or Wikipedia:Notability and decided to write the article. Most likely Visviva created the article in good faith and probably was just trying to reflect what reliable sources were saying about you.Since you're the subject of the article, you are considered to have a Wikipedia:Conflict of interest with respect to anything written about you on Wikipedia, and should refrain from directly editing it except in some certain cases. The same goes for any family members, friends, employees, or other representatives, etc. acting per your instructions or on your behalf. As the subject of the article, you really don't have any final editorial control of article content and are going to be expected to edit according to relevent Wikipedia policies and guidelines as well as Wikipedia:Plain and simple conflict of interest guide. This doesn't mean you're without recourse if you notice any problems with the article. As explained in Wikipedia:Biographies of living persons, there are ways for you to request assistance from other editors to correct any inacuracies you might find in the article, and in some cases you can even fix things yourself per WP:COIADVICE.Another editor  added some more information about conflict-of-interest editing to your user talk page which contains links to some of the things/pages I've mentioned above. You'll be able to find more detailed information about all of this on those pages. Jmertel23 is also the editor who added Autobiography to the article. I'm going to remove the tag since I don't think you're attempting to write an autobiography, but you should use the article talk to propose future changes to the article (except in the cases referred to above in COIADVICE). -- Marchjuly (talk) 05:53, 18 January 2019 (UTC)

Thank you, Marchjuly (talk) 14:19, 18 January 2019 (UTC)lwcollierLwcollier (talk) 14:19, 18 January 2019 (UTC)

Text recovery question from deleted user page
Good morning / evening Wiki Team,

I'm asking for some help recovering the text of an old user page. It's either under xbreadfanx or stanton429. The subject is Douglas Gene Hoffman. I'm not sure if an archived version of the page is available, but even plain text would be fantastic.

Tried using the internet wayback machine to see if it was archived, but I don't think it's there. (I'm also very novice using that)

Any help would be greatly appreciated!

-DGH — Preceding unsigned comment added by 2601:140:8600:D11:D52D:9086:2A1:6B0E (talk) 13:01, 18 January 2019 (UTC)


 * There has not been a user stanton429, but you probable mean stanton478; see User talk:Stanton478. User:Xbreadfanx/Douglas Gene Hoffman was the file which was deleted at the user's request, and subsequently replaced with an almost empty page. - --David Biddulph (talk) 13:23, 18 January 2019 (UTC)

This is fantastic help, thank you! You are correct, it was 478. I believe it was deleted in 2017, based on the edits.

Is there a way to view the old page, archive, or even the text? I can't seem to find anything. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 2601:140:8600:D11:D52D:9086:2A1:6B0E (talk) 13:39, 18 January 2019 (UTC)


 * Yes, it was deleted on 11 April 2017, according to the deletion log. It would need an admin to recover it.  The admin who deleted it was User:Fayenatic london. --David Biddulph (talk) 13:54, 18 January 2019 (UTC)
 * I have undeleted the old history of that page, and also a later version at User:Stanton478. (I apparently deleted them when I was following up backlinks to a deleted category, following Categories_for_discussion/Log/2017_March_27.) I did leave a note at User talk:Stanton478. – Fayenatic  L ondon 15:30, 18 January 2019 (UTC)

Recurring vandalism to article
The article Roseburg, Oregon has been vandalized a few times recently by users 47.40.103.31 and MSwartz123. User:Oshwah and I User:DaKine have reverted. I suspect a little more experienced help would be greatly appreciated. Thanks in advance. DaKine (talk) 19:33, 17 January 2019 (UTC)


 * I've reverted a further silly edit and put a warning on the talk page of who will be blocked if they continue.  Thank you for bringing the problem to our attention.  You are welcome to issue similar warnings in cases of obvious repeated vandalism.  Dbfirs  23:46, 17 January 2019 (UTC)
 * you didn't sign your warning ;) –FlyingAce✈hello 15:38, 18 January 2019 (UTC)
 * Oops! Thank you.  I have done so now.  Db<i style="color: #4fc;">f</i><i style="color: #6f6;">i</i><i style="color: #4e4;">r</i><i style="color: #4a4">s</i>  16:41, 18 January 2019 (UTC)

AE - 1932 American Politics
I was hoping someone could let me know why AE so often bans people from post-1932 American politics? Why was this taken as a year? Is it fixed date or is it a certain amount of time in the past? Nosebagbear (talk) 16:07, 18 January 2019 (UTC)
 * For ease of reference, an example of such a block is at Arbitration/Requests/Enforcement.
 * The remedy is specified at Arbitration/Requests/Case/American_politics_2, though it does not say why that date was chosen. --Gronk Oz (talk) 16:28, 18 January 2019 (UTC)
 * The (public) discussion among arbitrators leading to the cut-off being that is at Arbitration/Requests/Case/American politics 2/Proposed decision; IIRC the general thinking was that the current political landscape/partisan boundaries of the United States vaguely began with the New Deal (see also Fifth Party System). Galobtter (pingó mió) 16:39, 18 January 2019 (UTC)
 * - thanks for the link to the discussion. Reading through it, it does seem as if it was selected as an intermediate point that covered the vast majority of edits of individuals in that particular case, primarily Ubikwit's. This does mean we've allowed one case to act as a precedent for what we should use for almost all US/US politics TBANs, even though the majority of disruptive edits may fall into a vastly smaller subset, giving us inappropriately wide TBANs. Seems to be a case of "Hard cases make bad law". Nosebagbear (talk) 16:47, 18 January 2019 (UTC)

Moonbook skin, dark theme
You know how YouTube has a dark theme and you can do the same with Mac setting a Dark Theme, is there a Dark theme, black background, white text theme for Wikipedia at all? Govvy (talk) 14:19, 18 January 2019 (UTC)
 * I don't know of one but you can turn on "Use a black background with green text"in the Gadgets section of your preferences if you want something dark That said, with some CSS skills, you should be able to edit your common.css to change the colors accordingly. Regards  So  Why  15:04, 18 January 2019 (UTC)
 * Is there a wiki doc showing each pane? As to identify which elements I can manage? Govvy (talk) 15:24, 18 January 2019 (UTC)
 * Hmm...I really don't know. However, Chrome and Firefox have developer tools you can open with F12 which you can use to identify the relevant code. That's how I do it when I try to change something in my css file. Regards So  Why  16:04, 18 January 2019 (UTC)
 * , You can use mw:Skin:Vector-DarkCSS (works quite well for me) and per Community Wishlist Survey 2019/Results, the WMF will be developing a dark theme this year. Galobtter (pingó mió) 16:43, 18 January 2019 (UTC)
 * Now that idea of the Night (dark) theme sounds cool, shall have a look vector code, cheers Galobtter, Govvy (talk) 17:08, 18 January 2019 (UTC)

Changing how company name appears
I need to change our heading that appears on Wikipedia. Currently it says Ty Inc. I want it to just say Ty so when people search on Google they just see Ty and not Ty Inc. When I press edit I cannot change the very top of the page where it reads Ty Inc.

Chris — Preceding unsigned comment added by Aceyoutoo (talk • contribs) 18:43, 18 January 2019 (UTC)


 * Asked & answered at WP:Help desk. --David Biddulph (talk) 18:55, 18 January 2019 (UTC)

Birthday reliable sources
I see birthday edits and reversions all over the encyclopedia. Is there not a place that is uniform and acceptable to establish the birthday of a notable person?Eschoryii (talk) 08:23, 17 January 2019 (UTC)


 * I don't think so, no. WP:BLP puts high demand on sources, so a good WP:RS is required. Sometimes a primary source from the subject (like twitter or FB) can be sufficent, but context matters. Gråbergs Gråa Sång (talk) 10:11, 17 January 2019 (UTC)


 * Be aware also that even reliable sources sometimes make mistakes or are inadvertently misled, so have to be weighed against each other. {The poster formerly known as 87.81.230.195} 90.217.251.247 (talk) 00:54, 18 January 2019 (UTC)


 * I have accepted that truth and accuracy DO NOT count in Wikipedia unless referenced but why or where is consensus built on my question of birthdate? The answer "I don't think so" is so hard to accept.  Is there a place for editors to learn about dates establishing age?  My question can not be the first.  Someone told me long ago that IMDb is not reliable. So what else does not count and where can I and others find and learn birthdate rules.  Everyone should not have to edit and fix unreliable ages.  I read a lot of chains explaining why this or that date is not acceptable.  People being angered that their edit is not acceptable has to have a better answer than go find a source, no a reliable source, no a source that the "community" accepts.  I am not trying to be difficult but I am sure I am not alone in my frustration on wanting to be able to find guideline on birthdates (let alone death dates).  Any better answer out there? Thanks Eschoryii (talk) 03:17, 18 January 2019 (UTC)
 * Hi . Have you read WP:DOB? It seems to cover this topic. -- Marchjuly (talk) 04:07, 18 January 2019 (UTC)
 * Thanks — Preceding unsigned comment added by Eschoryii (talk • contribs) 5:04, 18 January 2019 (UTC)
 * , about "what else does not count", Reliable sources/Perennial sources could be of help. It mentions Famous Birthdays, Find a Grave etc. Gråbergs Gråa Sång (talk) 08:53, 18 January 2019 (UTC)
 * Helpful. Thanks 19:24, 18 January 2019 (UTC)

Follow-up to New editor
Hello again. I'm writing concerning the page Laurence T. Maloney. That's me.

I am proposing a draft version Draft:Laurence T. Maloney of an update to the page that also removes material that other editors have suggested removing. The page lists honors and awards with links to the corresponding wiki page for each honor or award. E.g. The "Guggenheim Fellowship" links to the "Guggenheim Fellowship" wiki page for Guggenheim Fellowship which links to lists of all past Fellows by year. You can find me under 2015 verifying that I am a Guggenheim Fellow. The "Troland Research Award" links to the page "Troland Research Awards" that also list past winners including me.

AM I doing this correctly? Should I also include external links ....?

Notability: I satisfy Criterion 2 in WP:NPROF because I have a Guggenheim fellowship. You might consider making the Troland Award of the NAS and the Humboldt Research Award automatic qualifiers under WP:NPROF. The Troland Award is one per year for psychologists under age 40 and the Humboldt is across all of science.

L — Preceding unsigned comment added by Ltmaloneynyu (talk • contribs) 20:19, 18 January 2019 (UTC)


 * As was said in the review of the draft, the draft will not be accepted because the article already exists. As was said in the reply to your earlier question as linked from the section heading, the place to propose changes is on the talk page of the article.  I have turned your mention of the titles of the article and draft into wikilinks, & corrected your typo in mentioning the name of the draft. --David Biddulph (talk) 20:55, 18 January 2019 (UTC)

Missing search box
A new editor I'm working with has a user page but her task bar doesn't have a search box. She's refreshed her page, but can't get the search box and all the tabs on that line are missing. Thanks in advance for your help. CatonMA2 (talk) 20:31, 18 January 2019 (UTC)


 * Hey there . I have not seen this problem before; would it be possible for you to get a screenshot or something? If you can't that's fine; some other details that would be helpful to know to figure out what's going on are what device she's on and whether she's on mobile view or desktop view (you can switch between the two views by scrolling to the very bottom of any page, past the actual content of the page). Thanks, -- SkyGazer 512 <span style="background: linear-gradient(aqua, #d580ff);">Oh no, what did I do this time? 21:41, 18 January 2019 (UTC)

How can I add a .pdf file of a document I would like to use as a reference in an article?
If I own a .pdf file that is of a document that relates to an article, is there a way to add it as a reference? I also know where the file is located on archive.org. Would it be better to just reference a link to that? — Preceding unsigned comment added by P4i2p0e (talk • contribs) 22:10, 18 January 2019 (UTC)


 * Hi and welcome to the Teahouse.  You don't add pdf files to an article, but to use them as a reference, just link to the archive where they are stored.  To be a WP:Reliable source, the pdf should be published by a known publisher rather than just stored on a private website.   <i style="color: blue;">D</i><i style="color: #0cf;">b</i><i style="color: #4fc;">f</i><i style="color: #6f6;">i</i><i style="color: #4e4;">r</i><i style="color: #4a4">s</i>  22:14, 18 January 2019 (UTC)
 * To clarify, you can upload a pdf file (if it is free-licensed) in order to display it on a page. But an uploaded file (or any other content on Wikipedia) is not a reliable source for a reference. —teb728 t c 23:08, 18 January 2019 (UTC)


 * Just link to the archive.org item (or any other place the document is already stored online). (By the way, there's no way of knowing whether such a "document" would constitute a reliable source for whatever information you intend to use it for, because you haven't specified what it is or what it concerns.) Softlavender (talk) 23:34, 18 January 2019 (UTC)

Neutral Voice
Hey! I'm having a little trouble writing about an electric boat company - I had an article denied publishing because the tone wasn't neutral enough. Are there any tips you have for me? I've read all the wiki pages about neutrality but still seem to be having some trouble with his article. Thanks! — Preceding unsigned comment added by Ilicas1 (talk • contribs) 00:59, 15 January 2019 (UTC)


 * I am guessing that the article in question is User:Ilicas1/sandbox. The very first thing that strikes me is that it has no references at all.  The article should be based on summarising what reliable sources have said about the subject, not on an editor's personal knowledge of it.  Your first step should be to collect all those sources - books written about this company, newspaper articles that discuss it in depth, etc.  Then as you write the article, add a reference to show where each piece of information came from.  For a more thorough description, see Your first article. --Gronk Oz (talk) 01:44, 15 January 2019 (UTC)


 * Reading the article more carefully, it would also benefit from removing some of the promotional wording. This may be what attracted the "Neutrality" comment, particularly when they are not based on an independent source.  Expressions such as "The appearance is of typical Scandinavian design, with clean, simple and functional lines" or "hulls, axes, propellers and rudders that work in symbiosis to combine both speed and distance" sound more like an advertisement than an encyclopedia.  Also, there is an inconsistency: in the lead it says it "now currently produces one type of electric boat" but in Vehicle models it "currently produce two boats".
 * To reiterate my first comment, most of these will probably be resolved when everything in the article is based on published sources.--Gronk Oz (talk) 01:59, 15 January 2019 (UTC)



Thank you very much for your feedback, I really appreciate it. I will be sure to reword the promotional wording, and include all my resources in the citations, and amend the inconsistency. Again really appreciate your help.


 * You're very welcome. If you have questions, come back and ask - we're all working together to build this encyclopedia.  By the way, when you post something on a Talk page or a help page like this, it helps if you "sign" it by putting four tildes (" ~ ") at the end of your post.  This will automatically add your details and the timestamp, as well as sending notifications where necessary. --Gronk Oz (talk) 02:48, 16 January 2019 (UTC)
 * Hi . I would like to suggest some specific areas you can change. First, you can delete or modify the Appearances section because the content largely involved promotional activities. Also, instead of merely citing the specifications of the boats under the Vehicle models section, you can write about the notable models in prose, focusing on those that gained coverage from independent sources. For instance, there is the case of the eElectric 8000 Smögen Edition, which was cited in this article. The one built in cooperation with the Norra Norr design is also an example. Bloomberg also wrote about the X Shore Electric 8000 during the 2018 Monaco Yacht Show. Darwin Naz (talk) 23:36, 18 January 2019 (UTC)

Vandalized Pages
Hello! Does anyone know where some of the more vandalized pages are? I'd like to learn to spot vandalism quickly. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Sage risen (talk • contribs) 23:57, 18 January 2019 (UTC)


 * Hello,, and welcome to the Teahouse! Unfortunately, there is no page listing the most vandalized pages (this one is inactive), though there are other ways to spot and revert vandalism quickly. Something that myself and many other editors do is WP:Recent changes patrol, in which we monitor the log of recent edits and potentially problematic ones can be highlighted using filters (e.g. likely problematic, very likely problematic) which may be configured in Special:Preferences or in the top menu of Special:RecentChanges. From there, it is relatively straightforward to check highlighted edits and undo/revert them if they are indeed vandalism. Once you are autoconfirmed (you already have more than 10 edits but will need to wait 4 days), you may also familiarize yourself with WP:Twinkle and its functions that make certain tasks easier. For a more thorough learning experience in this field, you may also be interested in the WP:Counter-Vandalism Unit/Academy, a training program for newer users interested in fighting vandalism. A new vandal fighter is always great to have! ComplexRational (talk) 00:34, 19 January 2019 (UTC)

Expanding discussions on talk pages
I have recently posted on an article talk page about an issue which is not really specific to that one article (the article is just one example) and wondered if there's a way of drawing in a few experienced editors to participate? Else the discussion just remains confined to that one page and editors who happen to be watching it and notice and are interested... It's here: Talk:Immigration. Or is there a better place to post such a discussion? Laterthanyouthink (talk) 06:24, 19 January 2019 (UTC)


 * , if you check near the top of that talkpage, you see links to a number of wikiprojects. One/some of their talkpages may have interested editors, consider posting something like "I started a discussion about X at Talk:Immigration, your input is welcome." Enjoy yourself! Gråbergs Gråa Sång (talk) 11:00, 19 January 2019 (UTC)
 * Thank you - that is a good suggestion. I'll give it a try. Laterthanyouthink (talk) 11:58, 19 January 2019 (UTC)

Draft:Dennis Scholl
Hey everyone,

I have already successfully published an article on the German Wikipedia, which was quite fun.

I've now translated the article into English and adapted it to the required standards, but I'm not sure if I did the right thing. The article is still saved as a "draft". I'm not sure if I even released it for review? This is the article in question: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:Dennis_Scholl Maybe one of you can help me, that would be great. Cordially --Freidaycat (talk) 10:42, 19 January 2019 (UTC)


 * Hello, . You can submit the draft for review by inserting {{subst:submit}} (with the curly brackets) at the top. You are not obliged to do this - you could simply move the draft to main space, but if you are not confident, I recommend submitting it for review.
 * Please note that if you made substantial use of the text of the German article (as is implied by "translated") you must attribute the source, or that will be a copyright infringement. (This is true even if you originally wrote the German text, because you irrevocably licensed it under CC-BY-SA, which requires attribution). Please see WP:Translation. --ColinFine (talk) 12:24, 19 January 2019 (UTC)

Mention using the signature name
If someone used my signature to mention me do I get a notification? In other words which one of these replies I would get notifications from? or ...Thanks--SharabSalam (talk) 03:31, 19 January 2019 (UTC)
 * As far as I know, it has to be your actual username, like this. –&#8239;Joe (talk) 07:22, 19 January 2019 (UTC)
 * Not like this. (So you should only have got one ping). –&#8239;Joe (talk) 07:22, 19 January 2019 (UTC)
 * Oh yea I only notification for the first one. Thank you so much for the help.--SharabSalam (talk) 08:08, 19 January 2019 (UTC)
 * Hi SharabSalam. You will only receive a notification if the person who mentions you by linking your username signs their post – and then saves with both the mention of you and their signature included in the same save. In other words, if a person mentions you, but forgets to sign, and then tries to fix it in a subsequent edit by adding their missing signature to the original post, that will not result in a notification. See Help:Fixing failed pings. Best regards--Fuhghettaboutit (talk) 14:39, 19 January 2019 (UTC)

Having Trouble writing about an ROBLOX subway car, P-3.
I got declined because it isnt a ´good topic ´and I want to be accepted because it was my first article  — Preceding unsigned comment added by R38R32R10MTAOTT (talk • contribs) 14:26, 19 January 2019 (UTC)


 * Hello and welcome to the Teahouse. Unfortunately, we can't just accept any article or anyone's first article; the majority of drafts that are submitted get declined or rejected. All topics on Wikipedia must meet certain notability guidelines. In most cases, we need significant coverage in multiple reliable sources that are independent of the subject. Another important thing to remember when creating and editing Wikipedia articles is verifiability. All material must be supported by a reliable source; original research isn't allowed. In this case, your draft didn't have any sources so we could not prove notability or verifiability. To be a bit blunt, this particular article is unlikely to merit a standalone article; at most it might could have a brief mention at Roblox. On Wikipedia, not every single topic and sub-topic is documented on its own page; the only topics that articles should be created for are ones which we can write a substantial amount of content about from sources that are reliable and independent of the article's subject. I hope this helps you out a bit and please do not get discouraged; creating an article that is accepted is a very hard thing to do. Feel free to reach out here again if you have any more questions.  Cheers, -- SkyGazer 512 <span style="background: linear-gradient(aqua, #d580ff);">Oh no, what did I do this time? 15:34, 19 January 2019 (UTC)

How can i edit in a page?
Dear Tea House Good Morning

How can i edit in a page? Advice me in details.

Best Regards,

Masroor Chaudhary — Preceding unsigned comment added by Masroor Chaudhary (talk • contribs) 11:50, 19 January 2019 (UTC)


 * Hello, and welcome to the Teahouse. Start with Help:Editing. Gråbergs Gråa Sång (talk) 12:05, 19 January 2019 (UTC)
 * Also consider the advice you were given here: Teahouse/Questions/Archive_877. Gråbergs Gråa Sång (talk) 12:11, 19 January 2019 (UTC)
 * Hello As you have been told before, the way that you edit a page is that when you add something to a page, you must provide a reference to a reliable source. Also when you are reverted, you must not continually add the same thing but discuss your change on the article talk page. —teb728 t c 12:13, 19 January 2019 (UTC)
 * And,, separate from the question of sources is the question of whether or not information is encyclopaedic. One of the editors who have reversed the edit you have applied nine times has pointed out that the identity of the subject's brother-in-law does not appear to be a significant addition to an article about Ajazi. If you still think that for some reason that information is important to the article, the only way for you to do it is to open a discussion on Talk:Maghfoor Ahmad Ajazi explaining why it is important, and convince other editors. (You probably should notify all four of the editors who reverted you). Trying to reapply your edit without first reaching consensus is likely to get you blocked for disruptive editing. --ColinFine (talk) 16:22, 19 January 2019 (UTC)

Civility issue with a biased Editor
An Editor, Grayfell, has been overly hostile, insulting, belittling, and inappropriately unprofessional toward me personally. In the antagonizing and baiting posts to my Talk page, he has admitted to being biased toward me and other like me. I have attempted to be civil with him but he spins my statements and obviously is seeking a reason to block me from the system, as he has threatened several times.

I am sincerely trying to follow the advice found on Wikipedia:Civility but Grayfell is just not interested. I am seeking advice here, if I understand the procedure correctly, before asking for Administrative help. Thank you.Jay Bestille (talk) 01:36, 19 January 2019 (UTC)
 * It's you. You are a recent new (PAID AND COI) editor, you are creating a lot of new articles, you've committed many of the common new editors' errors - promotional content, copyright violation, weak referencing, drafts that will be failed, by-passing AfC, articles on topics - mostly living people - that likely fail notability, and all-in-all creating a high level of nuisance monitoring for other editors. Draft:Remote Dielectric Sensing is a perfect example of you having no idea whatsoever about what belongs and does not belong in a medical/health article. Grayfell is not hampered by an excess of tact, but I see nothing unprofessional in the admonitions to you to get it right. David notMD (talk) 03:43, 19 January 2019 (UTC)
 * @David notMD: You'll have to find a different example. That draft was a copyright violation – a complex, intertwined one that cadged from multiple sources and used close paraphrasing and I have deleted it accordingly.--Fuhghettaboutit (talk) 15:41, 19 January 2019 (UTC)
 * Well, for JB - who wrote it as PAID - it remains an example of failure of competence. David notMD (talk) 16:35, 19 January 2019 (UTC)

How to make a new article?
I just joined and found out there is no page for a book I've read recently. it's far from well known, but i would love to add it to the information available here. But I am so confused. any help will be appreciated — Preceding unsigned comment added by Bella1366613 (talk • contribs) 16:26, 19 January 2019 (UTC)
 * Hi Bella1366613. I always think that new users are better off spending some time learning the ropes through regular editing to existing articles until taking the plunge in creating a new article – probably the hardest task for a new user to start with. In any event, I would suggest taking a slow and careful tour through the Tutorial before editing, taking breaks to read the various major policies and guidelines it links to in new tabs, in order to get your sea legs. After that, read Your first article, and, given the nature of the article you are thinking of creating: Notability (books) and WikiProject Books. One thing to keep in mind is that in order to create an article on any topic, there must exist reliable, secondary and independent sources that treat the topic in some substantive detail (not just mere mentions) that you can cite in a transparent manner to verify the content and demonstrate notability. Search for those types of sources and write based on what they say without copying the words used, citing them as you go; don't try to write an article if you can't find those sources in existence. Best regards--Fuhghettaboutit (talk) 16:41, 19 January 2019 (UTC)

If an image no longer exists, can I assume that it has been removed due to a copyright violation?
Earlier today, an image of the new 2020 Supra was available. However, now there is simply a red link in its place. Syntaxlord (talk) 16:01, 19 January 2019 (UTC)

Update: I viewed the talk page of the user who uploaded the file and my assumption was correct. However, I am still curious about the criteria for deleting an image. Syntaxlord (talk) 16:10, 19 January 2019 (UTC)
 * Hi Syntaxlord. Common bases for deletion will be through the speedy deletion grounds found at Criteria for speedy deletion, or you can peruse file deletion discussions held at Files for discussion. As to your question, the assumption would often not be correct or not quite correct (many times image deletions are copyright related, but the reason is not because the page was a copyright violation), and there's no need to assume because you can find out the reason any file was deleted more directly than, as you did here, going to the user's talk page to look for a warning related to the image. For local files, clicking on the red link will then take you to a page showing you its deletion log entry. Try it: here's the same red link you saw earlier today: File:2020-Toyota-Supra-9.jpg, click on it and you should see its deletion log entry. If there's no red link to click on, you can paste the name of the file into the search field and the resulting page will provide to you a red link you can click on next to "You may create the page..." You can also copy the name of the file and paste it directly into Special:Log/delete. Of course, many files we use here are from the Commons. You can access the deletion log there also by going to Special:Log/delete while at that site. Commons' speedy deletion bases are at Commons:Criteria for speedy deletion, and their deletion discussion forum can be accessed through Commons:Deletion requests.  Best regards--Fuhghettaboutit (talk) 17:19, 19 January 2019 (UTC)


 * I can't see the image, but if it was a copy of Toyota's publicity shots then Toyota own the copyright. If someone took the photograph themselves (and haven't sold the copyright), then they can upload it to Commons as their own work.   <i style="color: blue;">D</i><i style="color: #0cf;">b</i><i style="color: #4fc;">f</i><i style="color: #6f6;">i</i><i style="color: #4e4;">r</i><i style="color: #4a4">s</i>  17:14, 19 January 2019 (UTC)

Question about commons and translation
I have been working on the Army of the Interior article and have found an useful organisation graph image on the fusion and name changes of this French army in the French Wikipedia article, and have added it on the English Wikipedia version of the article, but its text is in French. I now have a translated file, but I am confused about what course to follow to get it uploaded, whether it is necessary, and whether I am allowed to do such thing by guidelines and license, as well as how to properly attribute in this case. Sadenar40000 (talk) 01:33, 19 January 2019 (UTC)
 * Hello, welcome to the Teahouse. Sorry you've had to wait some time for a reply. My advice (for what little that may be worth) is to upload the translated file to Commons, noting that it is derived from this file which itself was uploaded from fr.wiki, and should be credited to Papier K who originally uploaded it under a CC-BY-SA 2.5 licence. Had I changed the appearance/design of the file so that it was more my own work, I would still have felt it appropriate to attribute it to Papier K. Please don't take this a definitive answer; others here might do differently. It'll be interesting to see. Regards, Nick Moyes (talk) 21:15, 19 January 2019 (UTC)

Question about Twinkle
How do I add Template:uw-subtle1 to Twinkle? I can't seem to find it, and I'm not sure how to add it on the Twinkle preferences page. ᴀɴᴏɴʏᴍᴜᴤᴤ ᴜᴤᴇʀ (ᴛᴀʟᴋ) 14:43, 17 January 2019 (UTC)
 * Hello, . Welcome, and thank you for your question. I'm sorry you've had to wait a couple of days for a reply. I have investigated, and you'll see that I've just successfully left a test warning template on your userpage (feel free to delete it!). So, how to do it? Well, in addition to adding custom welcome messages, you can also add custom warning messages that aren't already available by default. You'll need to open and edit your Twinkle preferences at Twinkle/Preferences - (which actually modifies your own twinkleoptions.js file). Scroll down to the 'Warn user' section and click 'Edit items' next to 'Custom warning templates to display:'. There, in the 'Template name' section, simply add the template name without curly brackets,  (i.e. Template:Uw-subtle1) and click 'Add' and then 'Save changes', and then save the changes to the whole preferences page. I think you can add further templates if you wish. Give it a try -  you'd be very welcome to leave a test warning message on my user page if you wish so you can see that it works. It's important that you don't template editors inappropriately, so this'd be a sensible way for you to ensure it functions OK without upsetting anyone. Hope this all makes sense. Regards, Nick Moyes (talk) 22:16, 19 January 2019 (UTC)
 * Oh, and I've just realised that the descriptive text that you can add which will show in the drop-down warning list will also appear in the edit summary you leave to a user - so choose with care! Nick Moyes (talk) 22:22, 19 January 2019 (UTC)

Question
Hello Tea house team,

I'am a Brazilian journalist specialized in writing about Latin American fine-artists and visual artist. I recently tried to write an article about an artist that is receiving a good amount of international attention and is very known in Brazil, but my article was tagged as P.R. I would love to hear your thoughts and feedbacks on why this happened as I tried to be very neutral on my writing. I'm planning on writing more articles about latin american artists, but since it requires me a lot of time to gather references, books, magazines and newspapers, I would prefer to know what have I done wrong and if you have any thoughts on how I Could fix this. I did read the 5 pillars and the recommendations and I honestly though this article followed it.

This is the article: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:Gustavo_Chams

Please let me know. Thank you, Mirela — Preceding unsigned comment added by Mirella Silva (talk • contribs) 20:41, 19 January 2019 (UTC)


 * The critique looks like a translation of a copyright article. Is it intended to be a quote?  20:47, 19 January 2019 (UTC)User:Dbfirs| <i style="color: blue;">D</i><i style="color: #0cf;">b</i><i style="color: #4fc;">f</i><i style="color: #6f6;">i</i><i style="color: #4e4;">r</i><i style="color: #4a4">s</i> ]]


 * Hi User:Dbfirs Yes, it is intended to be a quote.


 * See Quotations.  <i style="color: blue;">D</i><i style="color: #0cf;">b</i><i style="color: #4fc;">f</i><i style="color: #6f6;">i</i><i style="color: #4e4;">r</i><i style="color: #4a4">s</i>  21:48, 19 January 2019 (UTC)


 * Hello, . I salute you for wanting to fill a gap in our coverage.
 * It is hard to determine how reliable the sources are, since you have not generally named the publication; but I am not hopeful. As far as I can tell the first citation simply credits Chams with the pictures in the article: this is at best a primary source. The GGN reference appears to be an interview, so it is not dependent. I didn't examing them past there, but the question you need to ask before writing an article is, What have people unconnected with the subject chosen to write about the subject, and been published in reliable places? That is what almost the whole of the article should be based on.
 * As to the formatting: the important bit of a reference is the bibliographic information that enables a reader to see where it is from, and to obtain it if required (eg through a major library): the link is a mere convenience. I recommend using citation templates, though they are not compulsory; but in any case, please look at WP:REFB.
 * In my view there is a problem not so much with advertising, as with the tone: it is appropriate to a magazine article, not an encyclopaedia. A Wikipedia should not use judgmental words like "notoriety" unless it is quoting an independent reliable source. The tense is inappropriate in "he would sign his first fashion cover. Which would later grant him access to work with Brazilian local celebrities". This "future in the past" is used in magazine articles, and prmotional sites, to establish a chatty, story-telling feel; but in an encyclopaedia article it would be better in the past: "He became a photographer, and in 20xx produced his first fashion cover, for YYY magazine. (If you don't tell us the year and which magazine, why is this even in the article?)
 * "The common thread that characterizes Gustavo's work is a sinuous homogeneity that explores the most profound aesthetic of human essence" is either advertising puff, or (if it means anything) original research: you can directly quote a reliable independent source that says this, but it does not belong in an article in Wikipedia's voice. (I've just realised that that is what Dbfirs' question was about). --ColinFine (talk) 22:26, 19 January 2019 (UTC)


 * Hi User:Dbfirs I have updated it following the requested suggestions. (also added another references) any other thoughts?  — Preceding unsigned comment added by Mirella Silva (talk • contribs) 22:24, 19 January 2019 (UTC)

Violates copyrights
114.31.115.138/ns1.rtat.net 216.218.228.119/ns2.rtat.net — Preceding unsigned comment added by Roufique07 (talk • contribs) 21:36, 19 January 2019 (UTC)


 * Hi and welcome to the Teahouse. I'm afraid I'm a bit unclear about what you're trying to say and what help you need. Perhaps you could elaborate further?-- SkyGazer 512 <span style="background: linear-gradient(aqua, #d580ff);">Oh no, what did I do this time? 21:43, 19 January 2019 (UTC)
 * rtat.net seems to be a Github project created by : no idea what it is. They have put a couple of links to it on Talk:Public domain for no obvious reason. They have previously put links to it, and to a travel company, on a number of other pages. They appear to be here to promote something, and had better stop, or they will get blocked. --ColinFine (talk) 22:36, 19 January 2019 (UTC)
 * I have blocked this account for disruptive editing. <b style="color:#070">Cullen</b><sup style="color:#707">328  Let's discuss it  00:11, 20 January 2019 (UTC)