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= October 10 =

Review of Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/Dillonoptics Sun Glassess
Hi, I am attempting to post this article below regarding nir technology used in dillonoptics. Is this correct or am I missing something.


 * NIR “Non Image Reflecting” technology has been developed and brought to the market place as a sunglass lens by DillonOptics. The first NIR lenses from Dillon Optics have been produced as Polarized Diffuse Reflecting Lenses also referred to as NIR polarized. The Dillon NIR lenses have been described as satin, matte, matte mirror and as a dull finish lens. The NIR lenses provide eye protection from the Sun by blocking 100% of harmful UV Rays “Ultra Violet Light”. The NIR optics are available from Dillon in an ever growing variety of frame styles.


 * NIR polarized SunGlasses are a premium protective eyewear that reduces internal reflections within the lens. Because of the reduced internal reflections these sunglasses can be worn more comfortably in reduced light settings such as indoors. No other sunglasses can match Dillon Optics NIR Lens Technology. 

— Preceding unsigned comment added by Thegift289 (talk • contribs) 03:26, 10 October 2013 (UTC)


 * This is not appropriate material for Wikipedia. It is far too promotional. Your submission also does not appear to provide any sources.


 * Wikipedia already has a detailed article on non-reflective sunglasses (amongst similar topics) at Anti-reflective coating.


 * There may be a justification for submitting an article about the company "Dillonoptics", if that's what it is called, but only if the company itself has received significant coverage in multiple independent reliable sources. For example newspapers, or optics industry magazines. Arthur goes shopping (talk) 08:33, 10 October 2013 (UTC)

Review of Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/ DAREYSTEEL
please i just submitted a biography Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/ DAREYSTEEL]] but i am having error problem about this very article,saying to me error... i do not think that this wikipedia article about Dareysteel is corectly submitted for review .. please can you help me to see if the article is correctly submitted for review. also please if there is any way you can help me .. please i need urgent help.... thanks Akochanwata (talk) 12:31, 10 October 2013 (UTC)


 * Your submission Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/ DAREYSTEEL has been declined. You really need to fix the references before submitting it again - instructions are at Referencing for beginners. Arthur goes shopping (talk) 13:04, 10 October 2013 (UTC)


 * Note: do not "indent" the start of lines, it causes a coding error:

like this MatthewVanitas (talk) 18:44, 10 October 2013 (UTC) thank you so much for your help, i have fix the references mistakes. please kindly look to this article Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/ DAREYSTEEL once more, and see if there is something wrong on the edit i just did so i can fix it again... please help me.i need your help. Akochanwata (talk) 17:37, 10 October 2013 (UTC)
 * thanks you so much for the help, honestly i wanna thank you all in a million times for your great work , i wanna be a wikipedia editor i think i am getting every ideal ... finally i wanna submit the biography article ..

Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/ DAREYSTEEL  for review...  please can you take a good look to the article for the last time and see if the article is ok.... i do not want to make any mistake again... so help me... just take a good look to it.... thanksAkochanwata (talk) 14:35, 11 October 2013 (UTC)
 * please what are the references about ..Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/ DAREYSTEEL that is not ok . so i can delete them right away... at this moment i have just delete all the Unfootnoted references, and i added one reference .. firstpost topic. i do not know if its good .. sorry if i might stress you so much...   please i need help. thanks Akochanwata (talk) 11:14, 12 October 2013 (UTC)
 * thanks you so much for the help, i just keep thanking you all for the great job and support, once more.. please i have fix all the references as you advice me to do, but i need help .. i need someone to please look into the biography article...Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/ DAREYSTEEL help me to keep the references more better than what i did... i need help please. thanksAkochanwata (talk) 13:43, 13 October 2013 (UTC)

Review of Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/Coastal and Marine Union (EUCC)
Hello,

I'm drafting an article called Coastal and Marine Union (EUCC) and I want to replace "and" by "&", how can I do it? Pferbau (talk) 14:36, 10 October 2013 (UTC)Pferbau


 * I have moved the page for you; it is now at Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/Coastal & Marine Union (EUCC). Please be aware of COPYPASTE and Close paraphrasing; you cannot copy sentences or parts of sentences from the organisation's own website. Arthur goes shopping (talk) 14:45, 10 October 2013 (UTC)

Review of Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/Bay of All Saints
Hello!

I am looking to add an External Links section. Could you please assist me?!

Thanks,

Maribi — Preceding unsigned comment added by Distmarketintern (talk • contribs) 15:36, 10 October 2013 (UTC)


 * I have added an external links section.


 * The wikitext I added to do so, looked like this;

Review of Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/Joe Ellis White
Greetings -

The article was rejected as there was not enough reference information. I visited the Joe E. White Library and found many news articles covering his life. The news article copies are in JPEG format.

How do I upload the reference information (from a JPEG to the article?).

Will this reference work? (#3 in the article) ^ "Website: Dr. White Inducted Into Hall Of Fame".

Thank you and please advise.

Vwhite90057 (talk) 19:07, 10 October 2013 (UTC)


 * It is not obligatory that references be in English, nor that they be available online. If you use physical references that aren't online, make sure your footnote is explicit as to publication, date, page, title, etc. So not "New York times 6/14/93" but instead "JE White Wins it Again!. New York Times, June 14 1993, pg B3". Makes sense?


 * Also, it's not necessary to say "book", "website", etc. in your footnotes.


 * Important: You are confusing bolding, WP:wikilinks and WP:Footnotes. Footnotes are not for "hey, here's more info about the American Association of School Administrators!", for that you simply put double-brackets around the word (and don't bold it) like so:  which results in Chicago Council on Global Affairs.
 * All footnotes should be specifically "here is an article/page/etc which proves the claim I just made about White". If a given link, site, etc. does not explicitly state some fact about White and thus verify the sentence you put the footnote next to, then it should not be a footnote.
 * All good? MatthewVanitas (talk) 19:39, 10 October 2013 (UTC)

Review of Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/Quintin E. Primo III
How do I correct and this notice on my article? Cite error: There are tags on this page, but the references will not show without a template ? I have sent the article in for review.
 * Answered on draft. MatthewVanitas (talk) 19:46, 10 October 2013 (UTC)

Review of Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/Amy Blankson
Hello Wiki team!

I am wondering if you can help me pass the Amy Blankson article I have recently been working on. I'm a new developer, so sorry if I messed up some spots, but think it is up to good standards overall!

Thank you and looking forward,

Ben — Preceding unsigned comment added by Whiteben (talk • contribs) 19:11, 10 October 2013 (UTC)

Review of Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/S'well bottle
S'well bottles are beautifully crafted composed of non-leaching and non-toxic 18/8 stainless steel, that keeps your drinks cold for 24 hours and hot for 12, while giving back to those in need. S’well is a charitable community member and proud partner of charitable organizations such as WaterAid, American Forests, and Drink Up. As the premier fashionable and reusable water bottle made of the highest-grade stainless steel, we have found that our customers love these bottles world-wide! S'well is currently sold in retail stores in the U.S, Canada, Europe, Australia and Asia. S’well bottles come in 3 sizes: 9 oz, 17 oz & 25 oz in multiple collections and 3 finishes: shiny, stone or matte. Bottles are big enough to fit ice cubes but also small enough to fit in any car holder.

History of S’well:

Sarah M. Kauss is the founder and CEO of S’well bottle. S’well bottle was founded by Sarah in 2010, with the mission to create a fashionable and functional bottle, that would also serve as opportunity to educate users on the water crisis affecting the world’s neediest. S’well has been featured in a number of national outlets, such ELLE, Marie Claire, Popular Mechanics, Oprah Magazine, Women’s Health, Better Homes and Gardens, Shape, InStyle; online press such as Daily Candy, The Huffington Post and television networks such as NBC, CBS, and Fox News.

S’well bottles can be found in over 800 stores in the United States, and throughout 25 countries worldwide. S’well has also partnered with Universities (Harvard), Spas (Miraval Resort), Health Clubs (Equinox Gyms), Celebrities (Tom Hanks), Festivals (Montreal Jazz Festival) and leading corporations (Audi, USA Olympics). S’well is also now featured in Nordstrom, Starbucks, Neiman Marcus and more.

Sarah has a unique perspective and a diverse business background, which is essential to success in her current role. Prior to this founding S’well, Sarah was Vice President of Alexandria Real Estate Equities, Inc. (NYSE:ARE). Previously, she helped the world's largest private equity firms structure their firms as well as their funds by focusing on more efficient deployment of human capital and more effective use of financial capital, and has worked at Ernst & Young and JP Morgan. Sarah earned her Masters in Business Administration from the Harvard Business School, her Bachelor of Science degree from the University of Colorado at Boulder and is a Certified Public Accountant.

Partners:

WaterAid

S'well Bottle supports WaterAid, a non-profit 501(c)(3) organization that provides sustainable safe water, hygiene and sanitation to the world's poorest communities. Since 1981, WaterAid has brought clean drinking water to 17.5 million people. When you purchase a S’well, you’re also taking a stand against the billions of plastic bottles clogging landfills the world over.

American Forests

S’well has created the Limited Edition One S’well + One Tree Program. This program benefits our latest partnership with American Forests, the oldest national non-profit conservation organization in the United States. With the sale of each American Forests bottle, the organization will plant one tree. American Forests advocates for the protection and expansion of America’s forests, and has planted more than 40 million trees since 1990.

Drink Up

S'well is proud to have partnered with Drink Up where for every bottle sold, 10% of the proceeds will go back towards the foundation. Drink Up was formed between the Partnership for a Healthier America - which works with the private sector and PHA Honorary Chair First Lady Michelle Obama to make the healthy, easy choice for busy parents and families - and stakeholders across the public and private sectors who are dedicated to encouraging Americans to drink more water more often.

Keep a Child Alive

S'well is proud to have partnered with Keep a Child Alive. This incredible organization identifies and funds grassroots organizations in Africa and India that are providing dignified treatment and comprehensive, loving care to children and families affected by HIV. For every limited edition S'well bottle sold, 10% will go toward bringing nutrition, counseling and support, women's empowerment, and a future to those in need.

Find out more about S'well at: www.swellbottle.com


 * Hello User:Swellbottle, what is your question for us? Don't paste the article here, just give us a link to it (I fixed that for you) and tell us what it is that you don't understand about your feedback. Did you read the pink feedback box at top of the draft? MatthewVanitas (talk) 20:29, 10 October 2013 (UTC)

Review of Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/Edge of Normal
at what mint was the 20 dollar gold double eagle made — Preceding unsigned comment added by 98.145.239.253 (talk) 20:03, 10 October 2013 (UTC)


 * [[Image:Symbol move vote.svg|20px]] This page is for questions about the Articles for creation process. Please consider asking this question at the Reference desk. They specialize in knowledge questions and will try to answer any question in the universe (except how to use Wikipedia, since that is what the Help Desk is for). Just follow the link, select the relevant section, and ask away. You could always try  for an article related to the topic you want to know more about.  I hope this helps.  Ritchie333  (talk)  (cont)   18:02, 11 October 2013 (UTC)

Review of Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/Bruce Paine (classical guitarist)
This message is regarding my article: Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/Bruce Paine (classical guitarist)

Hello - I am relatively new to Wikipedia so please accept my apologies if I am going about this in the wrong manner.

It has been a humbling experience attempting to create a Wikipedia page concerning my work as a classical guitarist and composer. It appears that I am having trouble proving my notability on Wikipedia and yet I've performed in New Zealand and in other countries, other guitarists are now playing my music and my work is regularly broadcast by Radio New Zealand.

I am aware of another New Zealand guitarist who is already listed on Wikipedia. I am trying to understand the difference between his listing and what I have submitted. His listing has no external references, a list of his qualifications, CDs and a link to the University where he studied and one other external link to his own web site.

In my article, I have included a link to my own web site and others such as the NZ Composer's web site SOUNZ. Would I be better off removing all the references that I have chosen and would it help if I included a list of my compositions for guitar? One of my compositions was accepted by the Trinity Collage of London as suitable FTCL Diploma repertoire. I cannot verify that via independent references but I happen to know the guitarist who was allowed to play my composition during his FTCL exam.

I will continue reading the guidelines for proving notability but would welcome some pointers that might help me better understand why my article is not yet acceptable.

Bruce Paine Bruce Paine 20:10, 10 October 2013 (UTC)


 * Hi Bruce. By coincidence I accepted an article submission on another Antipodean classical guitarist only yesterday - Marc Ongley. Now, that article is still far from perfect. For example, it should not be throwing around peacock terms like "renowned", and also the use of who Ongley has been taught by or taught with, as proof of his importance, is inappropriate. (Because notability on Wikipedia is NOTINHERITED.)


 * However, the article may give you a useful point of comparison as to what level of coverage is required for an article about a musician to be appropriate. Just one review of a performance is not sufficient; but detailed press coverage in newspapers of wide circulation, over a long period of time (as in Ongley's case) is sufficient. It's worth pointing out that just being a musician, and having given performances, being broadcast etc., is not sufficient for notability by Wikipedia's standards. Arthur goes shopping (talk) 10:19, 11 October 2013 (UTC)