Wikipedia:WikiProject Articles for creation/Help desk/Archives/2014 December 12

= December 12 =

13:51:11, 12 December 2014 review of submission by Györgyné Pruzsinszki
Györgyné Pruzsinszki (talk) 13:51, 12 December 2014 (UTC)Dear Sirs, I am hungarian, italian translator. I edited together with Ernő Polgar writer his wikipedia page. Unfortunately the page is not very good. Mr. Ernő Polgar has hungarian, german, italian wikipedia page. Please to help to edit his english wikipedia page. Toda raba, many thanks, Györgyné Pruzsinszki--Györgyné Pruzsinszki (talk) 13:51, 12 December 2014 (UTC)

Dear Sirs, I am hungarian writer, I have hungarian, german, italian wikipedia page, but to edit the english page is too hard. Can You help me? My draft: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:Erno_Polgar Toda raba, many thanks, Ernő Polgár hungarian jewish writer — Preceding unsigned comment added by 89.132.184.37 (talk) 10:22, 12 December 2014 (UTC)


 * Not accepted for the reasons explained therein. Bellerophon talk to me  17:46, 15 December 2014 (UTC)

19:28:49, 12 December 2014 review of submission by MisterMeph
Normally I wouldn't ask for help here, because I am happy to wait my turn normally (and there seems to be a huge backlog). Basically, I created the above article for a TV series that is set to debut in about a weeks time. I was originally hoping that the article could be in the mainspace by the premiere (or shortly after). Is there much chance of this happening? Also I notice that a reviewer did comment that there was a section of another article that dealth with the same show (although with considerably less information. I created this one as I think that it is effectiveky a seperate entity now (or will be when the showw premieres. Thanks in advance. MisterMeph (talk) 19:28, 12 December 2014 (UTC)

MisterMeph (talk) 19:28, 12 December 2014 (UTC)
 * You copied a fair amount of content from here, which I had to remove. I'm not sure the subject passes WP:TVSERIES, since Netflix isn't exactly a "network." Chris Troutman  ( talk ) 15:45, 13 December 2014 (UTC)

21:50:29, 12 December 2014 review of submission by Mervat Salman
Hello, as soon as I saved this new article, I received a note in my talk page that submission is refused and I wanted to know the reason behind that. Thanks Mervat Salman (talk) 22:05, 12 December 2014 (UTC)


 * Mervat Salman, your article is published at List of banks in Jordan, and best as I can tell was not submitted as a draft, unless you used a different account to do so. NOTE: please do not include phone numbers, addresses, etc, since Wikipedia is not a directory. Just the names/locations are sufficient. I suggest you take a look at other List of banks in [X Country] articles to see how the others are formatted. MatthewVanitas (talk) 01:43, 13 December 2014 (UTC)
 * MatthewVanitas, thank you for your note. I fixed the article by removing the phone numbers. Thanks again for your guidance. Mervat Salman (talk) 18:10, 13 December 2014 (UTC)

21:57:35, 12 December 2014 review of submission by Kinderdeo
Hi there, I have submitted my article for a review. I am unsure as to the English Grammer, References used, and need to get it right for acceptance. Could you please take a look at a high level, and let me know what I need to correct/edit or work on. Thx. Mr. Kinder Deo
 * Q1: How do I indicate the title of the article "Chaheru", in a sandbox environment?✅
 * Q2: Reference 5 and 6 deliver the same point. Ref is a page out of the same book as ref 6. How should this be correctly stated?
 * Q3: Reference 8 (1 page) is a page out of a book, but the book has not been listed....how should this be corrected?
 * Q4: Reference 10 (actual report) and 11 (url to deliver the report). The report is in "Punjabi" language, but the point is in English. Not sure if this will be accepted. Not sure if both refs are required.
 * Q5:Under famous viewpoints, I reference "Lovely University...". Not sure if reference 17 URL should be provided, since the university is accredited, has 25,000 students, but privately funded?
 * Q6:General...Could you please take a look at all of the references and give me some tips/guidelines for improvement of the article.
 * Q7:General...Could you please review the entire document and let me know where I have missed references and where I have grammatical errors.
 * Q8:Given there is very little information available on the village "Chaheru" and I have used "decades" to indicate chronology. Not sure if this would be acceptable?

kinder deo (talk) 21:57, 12 December 2014 (UTC)