Wikipedia:WikiProject Articles for creation/Help desk/Archives/2014 June 6

= June 6 =

Taylor Steele (filmmaker)
I am trying to create an article on filmmaker Taylor Syeele titles Draft:Taylor Steele (filmmaker) who is a notable subject, the article has been rejected 4 times and i am addressing each problem but still being rejected, can i please have some advice on the latest rejection as the reviewers comments are the same as first rejection and those issues were addressed, thank you Peterogers88 (talk) 01:05, 6 June 2014 (UTC)


 * ✅. See comments at Draft:Taylor Steele (filmmaker). Bellerophon talk to me  19:48, 6 June 2014 (UTC)

01:09:54, 6 June 2014 review of submission by Arnlodg
I'm in sand box (learning about wiki and editing) This is my second draft, Could you critique encylopedic tone and sources, thanks. Arnlodg (talk) 01:09, 6 June 2014 (UTC)

✅. See comments therein from Dodger. Bellerophon talk to me  19:51, 6 June 2014 (UTC)

08:01:49, 6 June 2014 review of submission by Schmuels
Hello, I have re-edited the text, and added many relevant sources. The pictures I uploaded were deleted but I don't understand why. I would like some help. Thank you--Schmuels (talk) 08:01, 6 June 2014 (UTC)

Schmuels (talk) 08:01, 6 June 2014 (UTC)

Review of Draft:Nikki Gregoroff
I've gone over and over and cannot find why it is being rejected. I've even looked at other sites that have same kind of info. Please help! Flowervr (talk) 14:54, 6 June 2014 (UTC)


 * The only reference you have included is a link to the singer's own website. On that basis alone the submission instantly fails the notability criteria at WP:ANYBIO. Please read the notability criteria for singers at WP:MUSICBIO to see if the person you are writing about meets those criteria. If they do, please add links to reliable sources to evidence those facts (not the singers own website). See WP:INTREF for help on adding references. If they do not meet any of those criteria, then this person is not notable enough for Wikipedia. Bellerophon talk to me  19:12, 6 June 2014 (UTC)

Review of Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/Kristine Cecille Isidro
Rg allstar (talk) 14:57, 6 June 2014 (UTC) I just want to know the reasons why my article submission has been rejected. I cited several sites for references and put in all the necessary information in the article, is there something wrong with it?


 * You need to explain more clearly why she is notable according to standard defined at WP:NGYMNASTICS. What medals has she won, at what events? You need to WP:CITE these claims to relieble sources. You also need to provide some reliable sources for her biographical information (such as her date of birth) in order for the submission to comply with Wikipedia's biography of living persons policy. I have looked at the three sources you have listed in the submission and frankly I am none-the-wiser for having read them. They are spectacularly uninformative. Bellerophon talk to me  19:03, 6 June 2014 (UTC)
 * In particular, you need to document the awards. We cannot know yet whether she will actually compete  in the 2014 Olympics--if she does, it will be much easier to write an article. Additionally, the writing uses unsupported   puffery. You cannot say things like "all of Isidro 's routines were designed with high difficulties and her music was selected to bring out her uniqueness." without a third party published source. (Don't all gymnasts at her level design difficult routines and select appropriate music?.)   DGG ( talk ) 00:24, 7 June 2014 (UTC)

Review of Draft:Ricky Aramendi
✅ move to Ricky Aramendi as a article 86.15.162.137 (talk), 17:50, June 6, 2014 (UTC)
 * ✅ Bellerophon talk to me  18:54, 6 June 2014 (UTC)

Review of User:Tablethree/sandbox
Draft: Nayda Collazo-Llorens Just wondering why my references didn't show up once I pressed "Save"? I have done them in html (as I've edited other pages) with. Tablethree (talk) 20:06, 6 June 2014 (UTC)


 * ✅ Issue appears to be resolved. MatthewVanitas (talk) 18:24, 7 June 2014 (UTC)