Wikipedia:WikiProject Articles for creation/Help desk/Archives/2014 May 16

= May 16 =

Review of Draft:Essaï Altounian
Can you please tell me why me article was declined?

Aniina21 (talk) 03:51, 16 May 2014 (UTC)
 * "Reads like an essay, poor formatting, no inline citations. Needs a bit of work on it." I declined it a second time for good measure. Chris Troutman  ( talk ) 05:06, 16 May 2014 (UTC)

Review of Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/iThEC
Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/iThEC This is the very first article I've ever written in Wikipedia so I'm not at all sure I dotted all the i's and crossed all the t's. Why does the box "Draft article not currently submitted for review." appear at the top? I already clicked twice the "Submit your draft when you are ready for it to be reviewed!" button. Thanks for your time, Czkraal (talk) 08:55, 16 May 2014 (UTC)

viktoriya ananyan
i would highly appreciate an article about ballet dancer Viktoriya Ananyan because she deserves it... — Preceding unsigned comment added by 95.132.125.135 (talk) 12:03, 16 May 2014 (UTC)


 * I had a very quick look around for reliable sources that discuss Ananyan in detail, and could find very little, even in the Dutch language. So possibly she is not yet notable enough by Wikipedia's standards for there to be an article about her. However, if you can find such sources, or reliable sources that confirm that she meets CREATIVE, you could list the sources in an entry at Requested articles. Arthur goes shopping (talk) 12:25, 16 May 2014 (UTC)

Review of Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/Your submission name here
Re: Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/Altared I recieved a message that the article was not accepted, and it stated “…Please read the comments left by the reviewer on your submission…” Please help: Where do I find this? Who is the reviewer? Where are the comments? Please advise. Thank you.Contributor4376 (talk) 12:13, 16 May 2014 (UTC)

Review of Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/Your submission name here
Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/Altared Re: “Altared” article rejected - Hello; I read the reviewer comments from "FoCuSandLeArN", and the notability/verifiable rules, and it seems that my article has met the criteria. There are hundreds of articles on Wikipedia of bands that have lesser notability and verifiability. Please advise. Thank you, Contributor4376 Contributor4376 (talk) 12:49, 16 May 2014 (UTC)

Review of Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/Sonoma Barracks
Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/Sonoma Barracks Please remove the draft from the review queue I’ve revised ‘Presidio of Sonoma’ to incorporate the additional information. Thank you. Dean95452 (talk) 15:09, 16 May 2014 (UTC)


 * Too late, I reviewed and accepted it a few hours ago. Roger (Dodger67) (talk) 18:20, 16 May 2014 (UTC)


 * It doesn't look like this has caused any problems, but a few more eyes on both articles would be appreciated. Roger (Dodger67) (talk) 05:28, 17 May 2014 (UTC)

Review of Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/Matt Katz-Bohen
Hi! Would you please look at my Wikipedia draft article: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:Matt_Katz-Bohen

And I have created a Talk page for it where I walk through the ways that Matt is indeed a notable musician. Thank you!

````Michelle```` — Preceding unsigned comment added by Michelle.Shinn (talk • contribs) 16:23, 16 May 2014 (UTC)


 * Please resubmit it and I'll accept it (it will still need a lot of work though). --Demiurge1000 (talk) 23:50, 17 May 2014 (UTC)

Review of User:Kankaraj sarma/sandbox
how session start in php?--Kankaraj sarma (talk) 16:27, 16 May 2014 (UTC)--Kankaraj sarma (talk) 16:27, 16 May 2014 (UTC)


 * Hi, Kankaraj sarma. This page is only for questions about submissions to Wikipedia through the articles for creation process. You can try asking your question at the computing reference desk.  Anon 126   (notify me of responses! / talk / contribs) 20:12, 17 May 2014 (UTC)

Review of Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/Beny Tchaicovsky
I would like to learn if the article I wrote about an artist bio is ready to be reviewed and accepted. I have been working on it and learning how to create a wikipedia article. I would really appreciate to get a feedback about this article which is waiting to be reviewed. I would like to know if there are mistakes I need to correct further? it has been a learning process since I started working on it in February, researching and noting all the 3rd part references to this artist's achievement. Thank you for your feedback in advance. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Melitta2012/sandbox Melitta 21:11, 16 May 2014 (UTC) — Preceding unsigned comment added by Melitta2012 (talk • contribs)


 * One problem that is still there is external links. According to Wikipedia's guideline on external links, they should not be used within the main text of the article. Some of the links can be transformed into footnotes. It's okay to have a sentence like this: "His paintings have been exhibited in France, Germany, Brazil and the United States." Links to his work should be removed.  Anon 126   (notify me of responses! / talk / contribs) 20:31, 17 May 2014 (UTC)