Wikipedia:WikiProject Articles for creation/Help desk/Archives/2014 October 4

= October 4 =

02:44:02, 4 October 2014 review of submission by Williammargolin
I have made improvements to the page, including linking from other pages, providing inline references in the correct format, and uploading an image. How can I get the status of the page to be changed without the warnings at the top? Thanks. This is my first wiki page, so I'm still on a steep learning curve. Williammargolin (talk) 02:44, 4 October 2014 (UTC)


 * Hello William. Normally you can remove such templates yourself (just by editing the page) once you believe the issues have been addressed. The only exceptions are for things like deletion notices. In this instance, I have just now removed all of the templates from FtsA myself, as all the issues seem to be fixed. Thank you for your contributions! Arthur goes shopping (talk) 07:26, 4 October 2014 (UTC)

05:23:00, 4 October 2014 review of submission by Michelle Noronha
VIJAY JAIN

Michelle Noronha (talk) 05:23, 4 October 2014 (UTC) Dear Editor, would appreciate your assistance in getting the article featured.


 * Hello Michelle. This draft has been declined for the reasons given on the draft page itself, Draft:Vijay Jain. You can read the decline reason there and click on the links within it for more information on how to revise your draft so that it might become acceptable. In addition to the decline reason given there, I would also mention that your draft is currently written in an unacceptably promotional style. For example phrases like "His keen business sense and strategising prowess have made him an advisor across different verticals" are not the sort of thing we would expect to see in a neutral encyclopedia article. Arthur goes shopping (talk) 07:22, 4 October 2014 (UTC)

08:16:51, 4 October 2014 review of submission by J.shahin31
Why was my article declined?

J.shahin31 (talk) 08:16, 4 October 2014 (UTC)


 * Because it was a COPYPASTE copyright violation by copying from another website whose contents are not appropriately licensed for Wikipedia. This is explained in the decline reason given on the draft page itself, at Draft:Dr. Vijay Anand Reddy Palkonda. Arthur goes shopping (talk) 08:48, 4 October 2014 (UTC)

Request on 10:54:42, 4 October 2014 for assistance on AfC submission by 3dprojectionmapping
My submission has been rejected. I need help in fixing the article. This is a genuine personality who has contributed towards the Education System of Pakistan. Please support me to fix the issues which have caused the rejection.

3dprojectionmapping (talk) 10:54, 4 October 2014 (UTC)


 * While it is always possible that others will join in, until it is an accepted article authors tend to be the ones to make the changes. Please start slowly and quietly working through the points in the extensive comment I left for you on the draft, taking them one at a time. Fiddle   Faddle  12:00, 4 October 2014 (UTC)

15:03:37, 4 October 2014 review of draft by 117.197.133.104
117.197.133.104 (talk) 15:03, 4 October 2014 (UTC)

Prof Satya Pall Mahajan, PES-I, Retired Principal, Government College. Resident of 42, Maya Nagar,Civil Lines, Ludhiana,Punjab. India Born November 28,1934 Died January 25,2011

Prof Satya Pall Mahajan was born to Sh HarGopal jee Mahajan in District Sakargarh,Punjab (Undivided India). After completing his primary education, he joined Hindu College, Amritsar to complete his graduation. Thereafter, he joined DAV College, Jalandhar for his Masters degree in Mathematics. He was an intelligent student. He stood first class first in MA examination and was awarded Gold medal by Panjab University,Chandigarh. Shri Mahajan cleared PPSC examination and joined PES. Prof. Mahajan served at Government college Tanda Urmar, Gurdaspur, Muktsar,Ludhiana and Talwara. He was Head,Post-graduate department of Mathematics, SD Govt College,Ludhiana, Principal Govt Arts and Science college, Talwara and founder Principal, KLSD College,Ludhiana. He was nominated to several committees of Panjab university,Chandigarh.He authored several books on Mathematics.

He enjoyed good reputation as as teacher and mentor. He had cordial relations with his colleagues and popular with students.

Prof Mahajan was a self made man. He lived a simple life. He always believed in honesty and supported truth. Besides studies, he loved to serve society, especially poor. He strived to inculcate high moral values among-est his students and family members. Many students of Prof Satya Pall Mahajan are placed at high and powerful positions in Govt. and private sector. The students and colleagues of Prof Mahajan hold him in high esteem. He is survived with two sons and two daughters. Both sons are engineers and one daughter is doctor and other is Associate Professor.


 * I have no idea why you feel it is necessary to reproduce your draft text here. Your draft is at Draft:Satya Pall Mahajan and has not yet been submitted for review. It will be declined currently because you have no references at all. Please read WP:REFB and WP:CITE and add references. Fiddle   Faddle  16:19, 4 October 2014 (UTC)

19:41:52, 4 October 2014 review of submission by Rpjones12
well basically my girlfriend said a word but its not a real word and it should be so can u make my page please xxx Rpjones12 (talk) 19:41, 4 October 2014 (UTC)


 * Thank you. All our reviewers are volunteers and we have quite a large backlog of material to review. It's great when we get one so easy to decline. It cuts the backlog right down when we can decline a draft without even needing to check references. Fiddle   Faddle  21:36, 4 October 2014 (UTC)

19:53:11, 4 October 2014 review of submission by GoodnessGreatnessHighness
hello, im just writing to inquire as to what portion of my submition was denyed. was it because i made one big list of all the new concepts and terms to discribe then instead of making a seperate submition for each one? was it because i never properly puncuated? was it due to the fact that i described some terms with other terms that i felt were self explanitory; such as mental alination (alignment). please provide reason so that i may properly recatigorate and describe their meanings to your preferances. GoodnessGreatnessHighness (talk) 19:53, 4 October 2014 (UTC)
 * All of it. Please do not add non notable neologisms and ask us to review them. You may find a Wordpress or Blogger free blog a better place to do this. Fiddle   Faddle  21:40, 4 October 2014 (UTC)

20:15:50, 4 October 2014 request for review by 142.254.24.210
The article on James Lerner is not substantial enough to stand alone, but can it be added to another existing page? For instance James Lerner worked side-by-side with Betty (Goldstein) Friedan from 1946 to 1952 when both were labor journalists at UE News, the publication of the United Electrical, Radio and Machine Workers Union of America. Could it be added to the page for United Electrical, Radio and Machine Workers of America?

142.254.24.210 (talk) 20:15, 4 October 2014 (UTC)jancamp


 * It seems you are and the draft of whcih you speak was deleted becauise you have not improved it for many, many months. Since we cannto see your draft we cannot answer your question with any degree of ease. Why not aks for it to be refunded to you, see User talk:jancamp and work on it, and submit it when you have worked on it?
 * Please remember always to log in. Fiddle   Faddle  21:46, 4 October 2014 (UTC)

21:20:52, 4 October 2014 review of draft by ErnestManigoJr
Spock 21:20, 4 October 2014 (UTC)


 * You have not submitted this draft and you have some errors to remove first. What are you asking us here? Fiddle   Faddle  21:41, 4 October 2014 (UTC)