Wikipedia:WikiProject Articles for creation/Help desk/Archives/2015 August 22

= August 22 =

01:01:42, 22 August 2015 review of submission by TwoQuarters
Hello. My original submission was rejected. I was not clear on what I needed to do, other than formatting, so I've tried to improve the format with links, references, etc. I can't seem to remove sample images that appear in the submission and I am sure my formatting needs major help. Can you point me in the right direction???

I know you have many newbies trying to add to your wiki. Thanks so much for your patience in advance! TwoQuarters (talk) 01:01, 22 August 2015 (UTC)


 * HiTwoQuarters. I've done the format fixes on your draft, but you need to do some work on the referencing. See WP:REFB and WP:CITE for guidance.  Julie JSFarman (talk) 19:47, 22 August 2015 (UTC)

07:14:43, 22 August 2015 review of submission by DmitryPopovRU
Please note that this page I am sure has established notability. Please look and give me some advice for this page.


 * https://www.tvnz.co.nz/one-news/new-zealand/whangarei-boy-who-traced-russian-roots-helps-fellow-kiwi-adoptees-find-bloodlines-q06939.html
 * http://www.nzherald.co.nz/northern-advocate/news/article.cfm?c_id=1503450&objectid=11493462

Thank You! --DmitryPopovRU (talk) 07:14, 22 August 2015 (UTC) DmitryPopovRU (talk) 07:14, 22 August 2015 (UTC)

12:25:18, 22 August 2015 review of submission by Spotify123456
Spotify123456 (talk) 12:25, 22 August 2015 (UTC)

Please help me make a real article because my draft Hep Stars:1964-69

13:37:14, 22 August 2015 review of submission by DanielCarlTaylor
I wrote an entry on Simons Foundation -- and it was rejected because the material was believed better within the entry on one of its founders "Jim Simons" However, Simons Foundation is worthy of a stand-alone entry. It is now one of the 20 largest philanthropic foundations in the world with assets over two billion dollars It is active in areas that are not noted on Jim Simons wiki (such as Life Sciences) Additionally, based on my research it seems that the foundation has been led by his wife; it is not led by Mr Simons

I would appreciate help separating the presentation of one of the founders from his foundation Please advise me as to what I need to do? DanielCarlTaylor

DanielCarlTaylor (talk) 13:37, 22 August 2015 (UTC)


 * If the Foundation is worth over two billion dollars, maybe you should mention that in the article, with a citation. Maproom (talk) 19:54, 22 August 2015 (UTC)

Request on 19:19:08, 22 August 2015 for assistance on AfC submission by Baiamericana
Would like someone to take a look at my revised submission and I would then like to resubmit. Would like assistance with this.

Thank you in advance for your time and attention.

Baiamericana

Baiamericana (talk) 19:19, 22 August 2015 (UTC)


 * The draft needs inline citations of reliable published third-party sources, to establish its subject's notability. While it has none, it will certainly be rejected. Maproom (talk) 20:00, 22 August 2015 (UTC)