Wikipedia:WikiProject Articles for creation/Help desk/Archives/2015 August 23

= August 23 =

01:35:32, 23 August 2015 review of submission by Sigursteinn
I would like to know how a page like "Maus (band)" can exist with a single reference but this Casio Fatso article with its 9-10 different references is denied. The references in question are for example an interview with the band on the national radio station Ruv.is (it doesn't get any higher than that in this country). The article also references 3-4 different interviews with the band and reviews of their cd. Please help Sigursteinn (talk) 01:35, 23 August 2015 (UTC)

Request on 11:27:26, 23 August 2015 for assistance on AfC submission by RachR310
Hi, I would like some advice on how I can edit my article to better address the reviewer's comments. Would appreciate help on identifying lines that have peacock terms or do not have a neutral tone and any advice you can give on how to change these. I have looked at other pages linked to SMU such as the page on 'Lee Kong Chian School of Business' and I feel like the tone and sources I've used are similar so I'm not sure why my draft has been rejected. I'm really new at this so any help would be appreciated.

RachR310 (talk) 11:27, 23 August 2015 (UTC)

Request on 22:03:03, 23 August 2015 for assistance on AfC submission by Breton66
Hi, I am keen to get this entry approved, and am unsure why it is not being accepted. The problem seems to be with the references and golden rule. In my opinion, the article cites significant coverage in reliable sources that are independent of the topic (including references from x3 independent business magazines). I am unsure of what to do next. Please help.

Regards Jonathan.

Breton66 (talk) 22:03, 23 August 2015 (UTC)