Wikipedia:WikiProject Articles for creation/Help desk/Archives/2015 July 9

= July 9 =

Request on 00:00:37, 9 July 2015 for assistance on AfC submission by Brianpreece
My article creation was denied. I then added some more references. All my references I believe verify the claims made in the article and our independent sources which should show the veracity of the claims and the notability of the person described in the article. I was just wondering what I need to do, what is wrong with my references etc.? Thanks...

Brianpreece (talk) 00:00, 9 July 2015 (UTC)

Article Declined and submitted for review
Hi, My article has been declined for some obvious reason. Unfortunately some other user has deleted lot of text from the article which i was surprised to see when it was reviewed. I have now reverted back to the text which i had submitted for review. I would appreciate if anyone can review it and suggest changes that may be required. Thanks article link https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Draft:Al_Habtoor_Motors_LLC []

I am not sure how to add notability to it. Al Habtoor Motors is one of the well recognized in the region and has won several awards. I removed list of awards from the post since it may sound more like marketing. You will find complete original article which was declined first time here https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Draft:Al_Habtoor_Motors_LLC&diff=663698329&oldid=663698160

It has list of awards and references also. At that time it was rejected for Unambiguous advertising or promotion. so i removed some text and above text was compiled by the same user who actually deleted the article and later moved to draft. i am not sure honestly what changes should i make now. I would appreciate if you can point me to an example so that it will be more in line. --Dubaiinfo (talk) 06:01, 9 July 2015 (UTC)

11:01:32, 9 July 2015 review of submission by Cyber-tvm
We, Centre for Development of Advanced Computing (C-DAC), Thiruvananthapuram, Inida is a premier R&D organization under Department of Electronics & Information Technology (DeitY), Ministry of Communications & Information Technology (MCIT), Government of India. Advik CDR Analyzer is a cyber forensics tool developed by C-DAC Thiruvananthapuram. Advik CDR Analyzer is used by Law Enforcement Agencies in India.

We would like to publish the draft about Advik CDR Analyzer in Wikipedia. Please refer the following links about C-DAC in Wikipedia. Kindly do the needful to publish the draft in Wikipedia.

1. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Centre_for_Development_of_Advanced_Computing

2. https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/C-DAC_Thiruvananthapuram

Cyber-tvm (talk) 11:01, 9 July 2015 (UTC)


 * ❌ We offer help with article issues. We do not create articles for folk. If you feel the org merits an article you are welcome to do this yourself. Fiddle   Faddle  11:25, 9 July 2015 (UTC)
 * Also as unreferenced advert.  Fiddle   Faddle  11:27, 9 July 2015 (UTC)

13:57:43, 9 July 2015 review of submission by Black Yodel No.1
Hello Matthew, Sorry for the delayed response. I just got back from a road trip to Florida. I appreciate everything you've done for me and would like to say thank you. I do have one request with what you've posted. Please delete AllMusic from the article. Their information is still inaccurate after 5 years. MusicBrainz is already listed and their information is accurate. I have no problems waiting until you return to tweak things. I don't like changing horses in mid-stream, especially when things are working out. Again thanks, and have a safe trip. And sure, if you're in the Northern Virginia area, give me a holler. I'm still having difficulty navagating your site.

Mike Johnson, Rougshod

Black Yodel No.1 (talk) 13:57, 9 July 2015 (UTC)

14:36:41, 9 July 2015 review of submission by Wgewiki
My article was declined yesterday by Sulfurboy. The reason was : Comment: Non-notable, all sources are regurgitated press releases. I was writing a company who has already been in the business for 30 years and I used some of the press release to demonstrate the notability of this company. I don't see why it got declined by the reason: Non-notable. Please be advise! Thank you so much for your help.

Wgewiki (talk) 14:36, 9 July 2015 (UTC)

Request on 14:41:45, 9 July 2015 for assistance on AfC submission by Giresh naik k
I have shared all the details of mine, also uploaded as image of the newspaper articles where my names are mentioned, kindly guide me how to add. this page is about myself.

Being lovable (talk) 14:41, 9 July 2015 (UTC)

17:18:05, 9 July 2015 review of submission by Ashxie126
My draft was reviewed by Teahouse and declined. May I ask what exactly was the problem? Ashxie126 (talk) 17:18, 9 July 2015 (UTC)

18:52:18, 9 July 2015 review of submission by Acmetoys
Acmetoys (talk) 18:52, 9 July 2015 (UTC)

I would like to add the following documents to this article. However I do not know how? Lastly I need someone to edit this article as my efforts do not work

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Ahurvitz2 (talk) 20:49, 9 July 2015 (UTC)== 20:49:13, 9 July 2015 review of submission by Ahurvitz2 == {{Lafc|username=Ahurvitz2|ts=20:49:13, 9 July 2015|declined=Draft:Roberta_Grossman}}

I am submitting a biographical entry of living person, Roberta Grossman. And I have been rejected twice in my submission and now am attempting to correct and clean my entry.

Please let me know if anything is missing in my listing of sources. And if I am following the proper formatting for Wikipedia.

Thank you.

Roberta Grossman (born January 7, 1959) is an American filmmaker. Her documentaries range from social justice inquiries to historical subjects with a focus on Jewish history. Life and Career Grossman was born and raised in Los Angeles, California. Her mother was a schoolteacher and her father an attorney. She graduated from the University of California, Berkeley with a major in History. Grossman received her MA in Producing from the American Film Institute Center for Advanced Film Studies in Los Angeles. Grossman’s first film, with co-director Michelle Paymar, was Sippie (1983), a short film biography of classic blues singer-songwriter Sippie Wallace.[1] Grossman was the series producer and co-writer of Jack Leustig’s 500 Hundred Nations, an 8-hour CBS mini-series on the history of Native Americans from Creation to 1890. It aired in 1995.[2] Also in the 1990s, Grossman wrote, produced and directed many historical documentaries for various networks including: In the Footsteps of Jesus for The History Channel; The History of Sex and Rock and Roll, VH1;Special Report: Las Vegas, MSNBC; Christianity: The First 1000 Years; Mysteries of the Bible: Judas; Heroines of the Hebrew Bible for A&E; and Women on Top, for AMC.[3] In 1999, Grossman founded Katahdin Foundation with Lisa Thomas. Thomas, the co-founder and former CEO of Clif Bar, Inc., wanted to create a foundation to make and support films that “inform, inspire, engage.” A non-profit, 501 c 3, with offices in Los Angeles and Berkeley, California, Katahdin Foundation, (dba Katahdin Productions), has co-produced and/or supported documentary films that have earned Academy Award nominations, garnered festival awards, and won coveted broadcast slots.[4] In 2005, Katahdin released its first feature film, Homeland: Four Portraits of Native Action. Grossman directed and Thomas produced this documentary about contemporary Native American environmental justice struggles in the United States. Thomas won a Grammy for producing the film’s soundtrack.[5] In 2008, Katahdin released Blessed Is the Match: The Life and Death of Hannah Senesh. The film was produced and directed by Grossman, written and co-produced by Sophie Sartain, produced by Marta Kauffman, and executive produced by Lisa Thomas. The film told the story of Hannah Senesh, the WWII era poet and diarist who parachuted behind enemy lines to try and rescue the Jews of Hungary, her mother among them. Blessed Is the Match won the audience award at 13 Jewish film festivals, was broadcast on PBS, nominated for a Primetime Emmy, and shortlisted for an Academy Award.[6] Grossman and Sartain’s Hava Nagila (The Movie) was released in 2012. This feature-length documentary traces the journey of the ubiquitous Jewish musical standard, Hava Nagila, from the Ukraine to Youtube. The film uses Hava Nagila as a portal into 200 years of Jewish history, culture and spirituality. Released theatrically and screened at 80 Jewish film festivals, Hava Nagila (The Movie) was either opening or closing night at more than half of those festivals. Grossman produced Director Dyanna Taylor’s film about photographer Dorothea Lange: Grab a Hunk of Lightning for America Masters/WNET which was broadcast in 2014.[7] Grossman directed Above and Beyond (2015) for producer Nancy Spielberg. Above and Beyond is a feature-length documentary about a group of Jewish American WWII era pilots who volunteered to fight in the 1948 War of Independence in Israel, helping create the Israeli Air Force.[8] Grossman is currently producing a documentary about WWII Jews in the Warsaw Ghetto who hid a vast buried collection of writings, stuffed into milk cans and suitcases, documenting their imprisonment. "Who Will Write Our History?" is based on a book by historian Samuel Kassow, a professor of history at Trinity College in Connecticut, and published by Indiana University Press in 2007. Grossman optioned the rights to the book and is now working with Executive Producer Nancy Spielberg to raise money for the film, scheduled for release in 2017.[9] References[edit] Jump up ^ "ROBERTA GROSSMAN". IMDB. Jump up ^ KATAHDIN Productions http://www.katahdinproductions.com/about/roberta.html. Missing or empty |title= (help) Jump up ^ "ROBERTA GROSSMAN". IMDB. Jump up ^ "About Katahdin Productions". Katahdin Productions. Retrieved 9 July 2015. Jump up ^ "http://grabahunkoflightning.com/team/roberta-grossman/". grabahunkoflightning.com. Retrieved 9 July 2015. Jump up ^ "Movie Review – BLESSED IS THE MATCH: THE LIFE AND DEATH OF HANNAH SENESH". An Alliance of Women Film Journalists blog. Retrieved 9 July 2015. Jump up ^ "June 24th, 2014 Dorothea Lange Trailer: Dorothea Lange: Grab a Hunk of Lightning". www.pbs.org/americanmasters. Public Broadcasting Service. Retrieved 9 July 2015. Jump up ^ Jacobson, Judie. "Conversations with Nancy Spielberg & Roberta Grossman". Connecticut Jewish Ledger. Jewish Ledger. Retrieved 9 July 2015. Jump up ^ Maltz, Judy. "Revealing Dead Sea Scrolls of the Warsaw Ghetto". Haaretz. Haaretz. Retrieved 9 July 2015.

Ahurvitz2 (talk) 20:49, 9 July 2015 (UTC)

21:03:05, 9 July 2015 review of submission by Steventhomas42
I am attempting to get the page in question up to all of the standards for inclusion. The band is notable at this point in part because of the fact that notable musicians (Howard, McNeil, and Frederiksen) joined to form it. Steven Tyler has been referring to them as his back up band in interviews since he began recording his country music album. Citations are still limited because the single has just been just released, but the bandmates have been photographed in appearances with Tyler for the past year. Some of the statements that can only be cited from the band's website have been independently corroborated in photographs available online, but there is no text on the page to cite.

Do I need to remove statements that are only proven in text from the band's websites until some other site mentions them?

Thanks!

Steventhomas42 (talk) 21:03, 9 July 2015 (UTC)

21:40:57, 9 July 2015 review of submission by TheStudio336
I'm not sure what, or why it was saying that the page for our artist was declined. Please someone help so we can fix anything we need to fix.

Thank You.

TheStudio336 (talk) 21:40, 9 July 2015 (UTC)