Wikipedia:WikiProject Articles for creation/Help desk/Archives/2016 December 24

= December 24 =

Request on 03:04:07, 24 December 2016 for assistance on AfC submission by BuVaSh
I create page for muaythai coach Pavel Fedotov, personal coach of UFC Fighter Valentina Shevchenko and Lion Fight Champion Antonina Shevchenko. It was declined few days ago. I really dont understand the reason why. Maybe the format was incorrect. I did such many references, that I could find I asking for a help from the professionals, because Pavel he is really meaning person in the world of martial arts BuVaSh (talk) 03:07, 24 December 2016 (UTC)
 * User:BuVaSh - As to the number of references, see WP:CITEKILL and WP:BOMBARD. If he is notable, it can be established with less than 30 references for a short article.  The first issue that jumps out at me is in the lede sentence, where it says "considered one of the top innovators of Muay Thai in the world" in the voice of Wikipedia.  He may be that, but in the voice of Wikipedia, that is peacock language.  If someone says that, quote them.  Robert McClenon (talk) 03:37, 24 December 2016 (UTC)
 * User:BuVaSh - It appears that you are struggling to ask questions in English. Have you considered editing a Wikipedia in your first language?  Robert McClenon (talk) 03:37, 24 December 2016 (UTC)
 * Robert McClenon I really want to create it in English. I made the corrections on that frase. I just deleted it. Is it something more that I can do to make it approved?BuVaSh (talk) 04:29, 24 December 2016 (UTC)
 * What did you delete? I am not sure that I understand the question.  Also, I am not sure what you mean about asking for help from the professionals.  We are all volunteers here.  You really want to create it in English.  I really want to understand your questions.  The problem isn't my use of English.  Robert McClenon (talk) 16:10, 26 December 2016 (UTC)

15:57:00, 24 December 2016 review of submission by Tmk45112
In 1993, I submitted "KEEL Technology" as a new item. It was rejected at that time because there was no external validation. The US Government (US Navy has just completed a technical review of KEEL Technology and publicly released a Technical Report on the technology). Now it is apparently being rejected as advertising. Please explain how KEEL Technology is different from "Watson (computer). KEEL Technology provides a new way to process information.  IBM Watson is simply "data mining with a new name".

Tmk45112 (talk) 15:57, 24 December 2016 (UTC)


 * Hello, Tmk. I can't figure out what happened here.  You draft was restored but than deleted for a reason that had nothing to do with "advertising".  You might want to contact User:RHaworth, who appears to be the person who deleted the draft after it was restored.  NewYorkActuary (talk) 01:47, 25 December 2016 (UTC)