Wikipedia:WikiProject Articles for creation/Help desk/Archives/2016 February 14

= February 14 =

00:05:47, 14 February 2016 review of submission by Nathan Osman
In an effort to improve the article, I was wondering if someone could explain how I might go about making the article seem like less of an advertisement. It was (and continues to be) my goal to present the article from a neutral point-of-view and I had thought the article accomplished that. I fail to see the difference between the way my draft was organized and the way other similar articles (such as Gedit and Kate) are organized.

Any advice or tips would be greatly appreciated. Thank-you in advance.

Request on 11:59:07, 14 February 2016 for assistance on AfC submission by KDT73
This Draft: Maia Chung page has been revised and submitted by a few persons prior to my attempts and now the next step to achieve an approved page seems uncertain. I am hoping a one to one conversation where I may be able to ask questions and get feedback may help to get the page to the point of approval. KDT73 (talk) 11:59, 14 February 2016 (UTC)