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= July 24 =

Draft:Guido Helmut Frick, Impressionist Master Painter
Please help me with specifics as to why my ariicle was turned down. I will keep working on it, but am not clear about what to do. My article is; Guido Helmut Frick, Impressionist Master Painter (July 21) */  Thank you sp much. Avanangel (talk) 15:48, 24 July 2016 (UTC)
 * Hi Avanangel the reviewer gave you very specific advice, the pink review box also contains links to various guidelines. The one you need to read is Referencing for beginners. The basic problem is that your references are incomplete - we need the full bibliographic details of books or magazine articles you have referenced. Roger (Dodger67) (talk) 16:36, 24 July 2016 (UTC)
 * As the reviewer noted, it is not possible to assess the notability of the artist with the information that you gave. Also, the title of the draft is peacock language.  I will change that by stripping the characterization.  Review the draft for other peacock language.  Robert McClenon (talk) 16:38, 24 July 2016 (UTC)

Request on 20:33:42, 24 July 2016 for assistance on AfC submission by Avanangel
Hello, I am needing to know what is needed to get the article finished for publication. Guido Frick is a noted painter. He won the Fountainbleu award in Europe, which established him as the leading Impressionist that year. He has been in many prestigeous galleries and has been in books and magazines. He trained under two famous artists, as well. I need to know what is needed in terms of links. Any input is appreciated. Please tell me how to get this passed. Avanangel (talk) 20:33, 24 July 2016 (UTC)

Avanangel (talk) 20:33, 24 July 2016 (UTC)


 * I have answered this question (in response to a similar query) here: User_talk:Mduvekot Mduvekot (talk) 21:37, 24 July 2016 (UTC)